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Reviews for Kouingan - The Seduction Eye

By : Slyfer101
  • From Snake_King on September 02, 2009
    Please Update this story, I'm really enjoying it!
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  • From theimpacientone on July 17, 2009
    if he can do all that with a suiton jutsu, I wonde what he can do with a katon jutsu?
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  • From theimpacientone on June 29, 2009
    it's great!
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  • From on June 25, 2009
    Great third chapter to the story... poor, poor Hinata.... so in love with Naruto that she will do ANYTHING to get into his good graces, including go though the torture of injutsu training!
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  • From nocontact on June 16, 2009
    As wonderfully interesting, and oddly arousing as always. looking forward to seeing more Hinata in the near future as well as Haku doing her thig.... It's fun for me...

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  • From firelordeg on June 16, 2009
    o wow an update thank you i love this story please update again a.s.a.l.a.
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  • From Takai153 on June 14, 2009
    Great chapter man! The scenes with Anko were halarious! And Anko calling Haku snow bunny, gave me an incredibly hot mental image of Haku in bunny out fit. Maybe you can have Haku cosplay a bunny later. I think white ears would go best, and not just because that's the color of snow, but because white would really stand out against her black hair and match her pale complection.

    I love what you did with Kanashibari and the water whip! Though, I think the water whip should've given both pleasure AND pain. I can't wait to see more Kouingan jutsus, epsecially if Anko teaches Naruto Orochimaru's justs. And Hinata's training is cool too. I can't wait to see more of this. I would like to see some actual sex though, and that blowjob that Haku gave Naruto was TOO SHORT!! And I know you can do better. Slaves of the Malestrom proves that.

    Anyway keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can! (I'd REALLY appretiate it if you'd try to update sooner than this one. The wait was killing me! :)
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  • From CryoBlaze on June 13, 2009
    Wll I enjoyed the chapter but I have a question. From what I understand from the series is that the Byakugan is more perceptive then the Sharingan. Considering that the Hyuuga can see chakra on a better scale then the Uchiha can and also considering that they can look through objects amd see almost 360. The only thing that might help an Uchiha resist Naruto's eyes is their ability to predict what someone is doing IF they can see them. I emphasized the if because if the Sharingan user does not see the person casting the technique, they are like everyone else and have to wait and see what happens (which is how Sasuke could follow Naruto with his sharingan when Naruto made shadow clones, he just remembered which was the real one and followed him).

    Anyways I'm looking forward to what happens next.
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  • From BastardOmega on June 13, 2009
    Hahaha nice going on this, it was most...enjoiable! And finally a dojutsu that is not a sharingan & bakugan combined! Do update soon i can't wait to see what else you come up with!

    Peace & Love BastardOmega
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  • From DragonMan220 on June 13, 2009
    Very nice chapter, I can't wait to see more of Hinata's training!
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  • From VFSNAKE on June 12, 2009
    Awesome! Naruto taught Anko a lesson she won't soon forget. LOL! GO NARUTO!
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  • From GhostwriterMO on June 11, 2009
    It's good to see your work again and I'm delighted from what I've read. The Mirouku temple huh? And Naruto gave Anko a "hard time" actually several of them to be exact and poor Hinata is having a super hard too from her training too. Pity Anko royally pissed off Naruto with that shredding of Haku's pants, she'll never know what she's missing or does she? I can't wait for the next chapter and I can't wait to see if Haku takes on Hinata with injutsu.(Naruto would be the only winner in that one.) Keep up the great work!!!
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  • From Yamizenchou on June 11, 2009
    And here I had thought this story abandoned. Huh. Looks like Neji will have to train hard if he faces Naruto.
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  • From jupmod on June 11, 2009
    Wow! Now this is very interesting story you got here. Instead of the usual PWP stories of the characters fucking each other, you've written a story with plot that has a very tasteful lemony underline feeling to it, not to mention a romantic sense as well. Naruto's bloodline is quite interesting, and you made him not use it for perverted uses. It's in his character to do this as well as 'enslaving' Haku to save her life.

    As I said, there is romantic sense in this story. I like the pairing of Naruto and Haku here, for these two characters are well suited for each other. Not to mention you will eventually have Hinata join the pair to form a threesome. I can already feel the love between Haku and Naruto, and Hinata's love for him will add more to Naruto's heart.

    So I look forward to reading more chapters of this interesting story. Given the erotic nature of the plot, I guess it's too kinky and erotic to post at Fanfiction.net, for I couldn't find it there, but I hope you can update this story much as you can here on AFF. :)
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on June 11, 2009
    Awesome chapter can't wait for the next chapter update soon.
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