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Reviews for Shackled Salvation

By : WannaBePirate
  • From PandaGaara on November 01, 2008
    Loved it so much!! You HAVE to UPDATE!!
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  • From Aleya on October 20, 2008
    I loved that... that was simply delightful! Do more when you can!
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  • From Aina on September 04, 2008
    ^_^ Quite a nice fanfiction, and one of the better OCs I've seen.

    :3 Keep up the good work, I eagerly await the new chapter!
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  • From Archfiend on August 27, 2008
    God, that was really sick by Orochimaru and kabuto. Though of course her reation showed how hard she has already fallen for Sasuku. Interestingly enough, Sasuke has also shown his interests in this chapter. The last paragraph though was deeply sinister, and I wonder what the story behind that supposedly close relative of Natsuki`s, that Akira is. Update soon.
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  • From wolfkin59 on August 07, 2008
    Wow.
    Very well done.
    Please keep it going.
    =D
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  • From Archfiend on August 04, 2008
    Well, I do suppose Sasuke is a bit clueless, though this chapter was a big step forward in his relationship with Natsuki. He initiated kissing!! That Kekkei Genkai is very interesting and the "flaw" she has is interesting, also the implications. In fact if I understand correctly, then Natsuki has a high empathy for humans around her, feeling all the hate as pain, while positive feelings and emotions dull the pain, and give her a sense of security, Though that may only apply to Sasuke because she likes him and he likes her, though the problem is that in that lair there are no friendly people, so the verification of the theory will have to wait a bit, Sasuke has grown very protective of Natsuki and coupled with his recent actions I think it is safe to assume that he cares for her. I hope you update soon.

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  • From Archfiend on July 24, 2008
    Man, Sasuke rally has a problem with emotions, hasn`t he? I mean every normal person would have already recognised and accepted the signals , especially if the respective girl returns them, though not Sasuke of course. Well it will certainly be interesting to see how they will work it out, and especially what consequences that will have. Interestingly Sasuke still has quite a bit of a concious left which might help him in future. I am also quite expectant of Natsuki`s kekkei genkai and whether Orochimaru planned for the both of them to actually fall in love.
    P.S.: Try and have a bit more of an eye on your spelling, there were a bit more mistakes than last time (Sasuke was spelled wrong quite a few times!) No offence intended, just an anxious eye on your story.
    Please continue this excellent story.
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  • From BC1 on July 18, 2008
    I love it! Please update soon.
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  • From MarauderFox79 on July 16, 2008
    This is a wonderful story! I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Honestly, with the way you are going now, I don't believe you will make Sasuke OOC in this fanfic. I don't know how long you are planning on making this fic, but I think as long as you take his transition to a different Sasuke who cares about Natsuki slow enough, it will work very well. I'm enjoying Natsuki's character very much, she actually is afraid of Orochimaru. too many people make OCs who are who defiant of him. You're doing wonderfully sweetheart! keep up the great writing! I will try to do my best to constructively criticize your writing if you would like. :)

    (sorry if this posted more than once, my internet was acting strange...)
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  • From Archfiend on July 14, 2008
    Wow! I am still quite breathless at this chapter, the suspense nearly killed me. I mean this chapter was a rollercoaster ride of emotions in the relationship between Natsuki and Sasuke, covering hate, envy, happiness and many more in such short time, and yet , there are still mysteries, that have to be explored. What is Orochimaru`s plan? What is Natsuki´s kekkei genkei? What about her past? And most important of all, how willNatsuki teach Sasuke to be mor human and to fell again? All of these questions need an answer, so please continue and update, I`ll be waiting for the next update.
    P.S.: Will we be seeing the rookie eleven sometime?
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  • From Angil on July 07, 2008
    WHOOOOO
    I LUBS IT

    keep it up or else

    lol
    I lubs joo and Yuya
    MWAHAHAHAHAHA
    MOVE OVER AFF WANNABE, YUYA AND ANGIL ARE HERE
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  • From SweetYuya on July 05, 2008
    I don't know why you fretted over her name, I really like Natsuki! It's very pretty -nods- And she's fiesty deep down! mmm I lubs her already. Will she stand up to Reika's greatness? hehe I bet...though Reika is pretty freakin awesome, isn't she? -nodnod- Excellent work master! As always, and I don't think Sasuke was OOC. Kabuto -shudder- like Angil said on her review on FF, thank god for rubber duckies...she sent me a pic of him on MS that was...disturbing. -nods and huggles self- SCARY! I don't even wanna know what he has cooked up for Natsuki down the road! SAVE HER SASUKE! lol hushing now ;) -tackle hug glomp-

    -WannaBeNinja's evil minion of doom-
    -Angil's partner in crime-
    -Green Shade's story stalker-
    -ArjetLuna's groupie fangirl-

    ~Sweet Yuya Shiina~

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  • From Archfiend on July 04, 2008
    why do you hate yourself or your work so much? It was actually quite an intriguing story, with a nice mystery to be solve, and I can only hope you will continue with this story and withn te mystery. there are many possibilities for you, as to where this story will lead to, so give it a try and update soon.
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