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Reviews for My Chibi Dobe

By : AngelofSorrow
  • From chibialichan on May 16, 2010
    Omg this is such a great story! Usually, my lazy ass just rates the stories that I like, but I definitely thought this story was worth leaving a review. I just love all of the pairings and their relationship beginnings and well as the excellent chibi talk. I must say, u r quite fluent in writing the language. Excellent work! Oh and I can't forget one of my favorite parts: the poor unfortunate, yet quite deserving, punishments that most of the high ranking shinobi r currently serving thanks to our mother-hen iruka. Although, if u think about it, those 'babysitting' sessions were probably what tought little naruto on the skills of how to be an excellent ninja. But still. If I were iruka, I would have probably done the same thing. Hehehe. On a side note, there was one little thing that did bug me throughout the whole story and that was all the spelling and grammer mistakes! I usually just stop reading stories with too many grammer/spelling mistakes, but this story was just too good to quit reading. I hope I'm not overstepping any boundaries here but if u want, although I'm not the world's best proofreader, I'll look over it again and fix some of them. Just drop a line at kairna3@yahoo.com and let me know. If not, that's all good too. I still can't wait to read what's next! That little chibi is a better matchmaker than any of those online matchmaking services!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2010
    :D Love your Story! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Joyce on May 02, 2010
    Hi, I just wanted to tell you how much I REALLY enjoy your story. It is one of the best I have read so far and I can't wait to read your next chapter. I really hope you will continue the story cause I am so into it now and I read the story a few times so far and I love it more each time I do.
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  • From spooksies on April 23, 2010
    I HAVE MISSED YOU!!

    and i have no idea on the translation....so....all good to me!

    lovely chppie!
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  • From ANON - Timber on April 12, 2010
    Sniff....sniff...T_T .....we want MORE!!! Sniff...sniff....BEGGING!!!! PLEASE!!!! This story is just so CUTE!!! Adorable and Sweet!!!
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  • From ANON - ptiteyuko on April 07, 2010
    I really really love your story!! I hope there will be the next chapter(s) soon!!
    You're doing a great work so don't stop before the end pretty please!!!!!!!!
    Bye ^.^
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  • From ANON - Hanamori Halibel Kuchiki on March 02, 2010
    Ummmm.
    I like this.
    I like itachi is a g0od guy in this fic.
    Ur a great author.
    I hope the update relase s0on. .
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 02, 2010
    It has been a wild since you have up date. When will I see another chater? I hope it is soon
    let me know. I really want to know now what happen to Naruto and sasuke.
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  • From ANON - Uchimaki2009 on February 28, 2010
    that was so cute!! i wonder... is that it? oh and due to the fact that i get annoyed by wrong translations... can i fix them?? i don't mean to offend its just a pet peve. @.@ "welcome home little sister" Would be "Mei mei, ni hue lai le?" which translates almost directly to 'little sister, you're back?" "Who are your guests?" is "Ni de ke ren shi shui?" and 'yes big brother" is "Shi de ge ge." again no offence intended... @.@ great writing! ^^
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  • From mikepd87 on October 23, 2009
    Love your stories and i know your in the middle of find another muse so do ur best I will wait for the next chapter
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  • From spooksies on October 16, 2009
    YOU ARE ALIVE!!!!!!!!


    sorry, got carried away. as for the fic, YAY!!!! another chappie!

    miko ~_^
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  • From ANON - Timber on October 15, 2009
    Chapter 13

    I just cried over the part where.....can one child change the world?? If its Naruto yes they can....just had to cry my eyes out!!!!
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  • From ANON - Timber on October 12, 2009
    Quote-To be pa’pared and carry wude for qwickies ....lol Ok this made me choke as I tried unsucessfully to breath and laugh at the same time....didn't work out too well....thougt I was going to die.....REALLY ....I thought I was for awhile there!!

    I LOVE how CHIBI Naruto talks!!! CUTE!!!
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  • From ANON - Timber on October 12, 2009
    Oh...had to tell you....chapter one had me in tears!! I'm a huge Naruto fan and kids are the greatest!! How anyone could be mean to them or not care for them just breaks my heart!! I love getting to see this kind of view of Naruto's childhood....because we've all wanted to know those details....or at least I have always wanted to know more. :) This story is such a fresh and interesting perspective....LOVE IT!!!


    Looking forward to all the emotions you inspire as I read on!! :)
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  • From ANON - Timber on October 12, 2009
    I just ran across this and fell in love with it just from the brief description I found on the main....Naruto/Sasuke page that list all the stories. Just finished chapter one and am hooked!!

    I love how the characters are written and so far how the story is developing!! So looking forward to digging into the rest of this story!!
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