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Reviews for My Chibi Dobe

By : AngelofSorrow
  • From ANON - Sadistic Demon on January 20, 2011
    Hey there. I really like your story on chibi Naruto. It's cool how you give all the characters someone to love and make sure they're all happy! I'm especially happy that Gaara and Neji got together so that Naruto and Sasuke aren't the only yaoi couple. I just have one complaint. I don't know if it's because of uploading or not but your grammar check is pretty bad. Words are doubling up and some of them are just spelled wrong though you can tell what you meant to say. Is there any chance you could go back and fix it or maybe find someone too? I don't even mind doing it. I'm only complaining because it sometimes gives me a headache to read it. Other then that I love your story and can't wait to see the next chapter. Take care!
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on October 07, 2010
    Chap. 16 This chapter develops and flows so fluidly with the characters and troubles each one is dealing with that it keeps you glued to your seat and computer!! I was so happy and excited when I saw this up!! YAY :) I really enjoyed this chapter and am so cheering for Shino and hope to hear wedding bells in his future!!
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  • From ANON - Shadow83 on October 04, 2010
    That was the best chapter yet. I am such a fan of your stories! Keep on writing! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - ptiteyuko on October 02, 2010
    Thanks for the new chapter! always so great!!! I love this story^^!
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  • From Dorkchic on September 30, 2010
    I love your story and I am sooooooo excited that you updated. I have actually re-read it several times! I do not know if you are an author who wants someone to point out typos or not, but just in case....here goes. When people are eating in this story you keep saying that person A severed person B. Severed is the past tense of sever- which means to cut. As in, "The kunai struck deep and severed a major artery". I think you meant to type served and your spell check is messing it up because it is that way through the whole story. The other typo was when you said that the firefly princess was in a comma. A comma is a type of punctuation that I abuse regularly. I think you meant to say coma- which is a deep, non-responsive, sleep-like state. If I have overstepped my bounds I sincerely apologize and hope you do not take it too much to heart. Looking foward to the next chapter.
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  • From meowkuu2 on September 28, 2010
    yea!! happiness for the new chapter I hope more is coming soon??? please?
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  • From ANON - animelover on September 27, 2010
    yeah baby you so totally rock! omg, that chappie was sooooo intense, and the matchmaking is just so much fun to watch. keep up the good work!
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  • From arabuzumaki on September 27, 2010
    long chapters like these pull my heart strings XD I loved every long detailed day. I'll go digest this chapter.
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  • From ANON - Black_Piskie95 on September 25, 2010
    Hey, 'I just wanted to say that your story is really inspirational, and that I hope ypou update soon. You've gotten everyone togethjer mostly, except for Sasuke and Naruto. Is that what the next few chapter are going to be about? Other then re-aging naru-chan, of course. Anywho, I just wanted to express my appreciation for this wonderful story!!
    Ciao~Back
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  • From ANON - Julian on August 04, 2010
    Very good story! From the first chapter you sucked me into this story. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - blu kat on July 11, 2010
    I'm rereading your story because I like it and the prequel.
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  • From ANON - Tsukuyomi Amaterasu on June 18, 2010
    Just finished chapter 5. Really good so far, but 100 yen is roughly $1.00 just so you know.
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  • From ANON - Tsukuyomi Amaterasu on June 18, 2010
    "All but a few of the clans and the Sandaime wanted Naruto to be put to death to eliminate the threat of the Kyuubi ever escaping. Sandaime-sama wouldn’t have it"
    This is from chapter 2, see anything wrong here?
    Other than this is really good and I can't wait to read on.
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  • From kittenblueheart on June 18, 2010
    This is an amazing story! Please continue to update. I love this story on whole. I love that Naruto is getting the chance to relive his childhood but is also making everyone's life better. He really has quite the power and i think you captured that perfectly. Please keep updating i can't wait to see Naruto "Grow up".
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  • From ANON - ptiteyuko on June 18, 2010
    Yaayy!! Chapter15 is here!! thank you very much I love your story!
    Do your best for the next! ^_^
    bye!
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