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Reviews for My Chibi Dobe

By : AngelofSorrow
  • From ANON - qwerty on July 23, 2008
    Awesome chapter!
    I love chibi Naruto!
    update!
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  • From mikepd87 on July 23, 2008
    I luv Naruto the way he is now...u got a great story on ur hands and i cant wait to read more...I like the way u hav Naruto gettin the chance to be a lil kid... wen u think bak in the manga it must've ben hard on him and thats y i luv the fact that u give Naruto a second childhood...
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  • From lovelessjayson on July 21, 2008
    wow now this could go so many ways I hope you keep this going. good job
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  • From ANON - Chibi on July 17, 2008
    Aww! X3 Please update soon, this story is just getting good!
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on July 17, 2008
    damnit what the hell happens?! i wanna know
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  • From Mort on July 17, 2008
    You have my attention with this one-
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  • From ItaNarulover on July 17, 2008
    I just keeps getting better and better. I love you for not killing Itachi.
    So keep up with the good work, I can't wait for the next chapter to get updated.
    Good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs

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  • From Mija on July 17, 2008
    omg you sooo have to right moreeee, I cried when the first things out of chibi naru were Im sowwy Im sowwy, broke my heart, and I am sure that all those side jobs Naru did for his friends parents were out of good nature not bad, I hope and I like that Sasuke and Itachi are brothers and not enemies, but I so have to read more, loving this so far, want to delve deeper into little Naru's past, i want to see what the others think of Naru was as a child, know his torment and regret that they did not make it better by follwoing thier parents dislike of the child, but most of all I want to see them fall in love all over again with Naruto as a child, that is going to be priceless, ok I am done babbling but I am hoping you update very very soon, cant wait for more, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - Lilica on July 17, 2008
    Chapter 3 was a pretty sore thumb in the plot so far. Suddenly, Sasuke has a contact, Kakashi knows of said contact, Konoha has the technology to make untraceable cell phones and Itachi is still alive? I know that this is a fanfiction but if you're going to make changes, make them realistic. In a setting where ninjas use knives and throwing stars as weapons, suddenly there's the modern cell phone? Why not just make guns and silencers for ninjas to use, and call them the mafia, get what I'm trying to say?
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  • From ANON - Ivy on July 17, 2008
    Great chapter! The code was too funny ^_^ I hope whatever Naruto saw wasn't too painful...I mean he's only five and the fact that I care is attributed all to your wonderful writing!
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  • From solitare1 on July 17, 2008
    This is a great story so far. I love how you went back to the past and stayed in the present with Naruto's fear. I am really looking forward to more of this story, soon I hope.
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  • From Madamdragon on July 16, 2008
    Yay an update. Poor Naruto I wonder what his father did to him. Please update soon!
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  • From LadyRonin on July 16, 2008
    this is a really cute story. i like how kyuubi claimed iruka as one of his kits. i have never seen that before and i think it's really cute. i also like that itachi is a spy and not dead by sasuke hand and has a really funny sense of humor when it comes to his little brother. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on July 16, 2008
    I really liked this chapter!!!! I hope you write again soon! Im really curius as to what sasuke's father did to chibi naruto! And Im kinda happy itachi isn't the bad guy here! and the code name was HILARIUS!!!! ahah itachi sure is clever to find ways to annoy and teach his younger brother of his mistakes!!ahahah
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  • From ANON - Briryan on July 16, 2008
    Cute! Looking forward to the next update.
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