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Reviews for The Driver

By : brook13baby13
  • From ANON - aki on July 10, 2008
    that was utterly wonderful. you really need a bata though cause there were some spelling mistakes.

    I can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - megumi0505 on July 03, 2008
    awww that was so cute, i love the way naruto reacted and how sasuke didn't care that naruto was pissing off his date, them eating subs on the limousine hood at the end seemed almost like a date to me heehee ^^ i'm a big fan of sasunaru/narusasu hope to see some lemons in the future ~_^ keep up the good work ^^
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  • From ANON - basilika on July 03, 2008
    hmm, interesting and promising. would enojoy reading more. :)
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  • From charmpit on July 02, 2008
    I think you've got a winner on your hands.

    Next chapter?
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  • From Jiro on July 02, 2008
    It's a good concept, but your execution needs some work. You get words that sound alike confused with the words you actually mean (e.g. "I could care less" should be "I couldn't care less"), your tenses are jumbled (choose ONE), your dialog is awkward as often as not, and you have some obvious (and consistent) grammar problems. In short: find yourself a beta. I like the premise though. Thanks for posting!
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  • From kaimono on July 02, 2008
    quite an interesting start. though it kinda went out of window with the quarrel between naruto and the girl. do update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 02, 2008
    amazing! this story seems promising! update =]
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  • From Management on July 02, 2008
    Woot! I'm going to love this story.
    Sasuke reaslizes that he doesn't actually like girls right? And that you don't usually get subs and eat with your employer. If he doesn't, he's damn stupid, that's for sure.
    I thought for sure that they were already together and that Naruto just had to put up seeing him with other girls because of the parents. But hey, this is better!
    XD Update soon!!!
    XD LANE
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  • From Dragon7 on July 01, 2008
    Very good start!! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.

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  • From Soulcaster on July 01, 2008
    intrestin very intresting yepp
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  • From LadyRonin on July 01, 2008
    interesting i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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