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Reviews for The Driver

By : brook13baby13
  • From Ikippiki on January 24, 2009
    Why do I feel like Naruto is in for a surprise with that "play"? lol
    Once you get a beta you should ask her to look at the already posted chapters, they are loaded with grammar and tenses mistakes. It spoils your AWESOME story.
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  • From animegamergirl on January 18, 2009
    I would beta for you! My email is moocowsareawesome02@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - GravitysAngel on January 12, 2009
    I really enjoy reading this story as well as the others you've posted, so if you're still in search of a beta, give me a jingle. I'd be happy to assist you. ;)

    kamapahl@gmail.com

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  • From tawanawelch on January 03, 2009
    Oh I was thinking all sorts of bad things about Sai and was mad as hell because I got caught up with Itachi's emotions.:) Now that I know he's in college and working as well I feel kinda bad for him. Maybe he and Itachi can develop a sort of relationship as friends first then possibly something more. Since Itachi knows he has changed and is in school. Poor Sai. He must've gotten a bad rap.:(
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  • From sakuyalove on January 03, 2009
    sakuyalovesme@yahoo.com
    I'm a writer with block, I'd be willing to beta. Let me know.
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  • From ANON - Griffin on December 05, 2008
    This is such a great story and I love the new element of being a double agent, it only makes the inevitable more complicated lol. I cant wait for Sasuke to FINALLY figure things out, and deliver us the scene were all waiting for lol ;)
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  • From ANON - so yeah on December 03, 2008
    if you could update soon i would be mad happy.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 22, 2008
    I really liked Chapter 4
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  • From ANON - HI on November 22, 2008
    Update soon
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  • From ANON - ....... on November 22, 2008
    YAY MORE
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  • From ANON - TY on November 22, 2008
    I really like this story!
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  • From ANON - bulve on November 14, 2008
    TA-DA-DA-DAAAAAM!!! What's Naruto to do now? it is going to be hell of a life knowing that Sasuke is gay AND he can't have him because of the mission from Hiashi... muahahaha... XD that's cruel to say the least. Anyway, I really totally and unquestionably adore your piece of writting and am waiting for updates every now and then when I have time. Even if I don't, I check if you have submitted another chapter like, let me see, each day! love you lots!!! =]
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  • From zanax on November 09, 2008
    “…that wasn't my cum?!”

    BEST LINE EVER!!!

    UPDATE SOON!
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  • From Halskr on November 09, 2008
    Thanks for the update on this. I ahve one question thought. who speaks the last line, Sasuke or Naruto?

    “I didn't think I was…that way. After that whole thing I started to…wonder...and came to the conclusion that…I'm… I’m gay.”
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  • From serenagold on November 08, 2008
    "... or rather.. I'm gay for you. You did this to me."

    "This is my fault?!"

    "Yes. What are you going to do about it?"

    "Wha-- nothing! I didn't do anyth--"

    Naruto snorts and walks off, cutting Sasuke off midsentance.

    "Hey! Don't walk away from me! Hey! Come back here! Don't ignore me!!"



    Later, Naruto hears a knock on his door and opens it up to find a desperate Sasuke immediately in his arms. Lips, wrapped around his, in a passionate kiss! Yowza!! ^^




    (Nah. Obviously, this is why I am not a writer. hehehe. Keep up the good work! ^^)
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