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Reviews for Snake Bites

By : SilentSanctum
  • From ANON - Miss Lynxx on August 27, 2012
    I know you have t updated in ages but my dear friend made me read this and well i wasn't a disappointed! She knows that I love dark fics and you sure delievered! I truly hope that you one day come out of hibernation and complete this amazing twisted and fascinating story!
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  • From LaMariposa3795 on September 06, 2008
    That was like.....THE.....MOST.....EROTIC....shit I've read in a REALLY long time!!! Wow....great job....poor Sakura though....
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on August 10, 2008
    I've read this story and I was completely enthralled by these two chapters. They were so well written and its shortness they managed to characterize their stories so well. You've captured Sakura very well and how her love for Sasuke causes her to do "anything" for him. In turn, you accurately characterize Sasuke and how he'd view Sakura's actions. For Kabuto and Orochimaru, you captured the sexiness (at least I found Orochimaru sexy >> ) and the villainy quite well and blended the two wonderfully! I hope to see stories that are not one shots from you as you've the talent, and your work is a joy to read.
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  • From whitefrost on August 09, 2008
    Wow, that was a horrifyingly angst-filled ending. It makes me all shuddery inside. Screw artistic creativity!I WANNA HAPPY ENDING!!

    On a side note, it was really hard to read the way it was formatted. I think you need to add a text wrap to it 'cause the lines just go on and on and on and....further on.
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  • From VixenKiss89 on August 09, 2008
    Wowie. In the first chappy, Orochi was pretty kinky with all of that lover talk. I definitely liked the story over all and can't wait for a second ending.
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  • From tenohikari on August 05, 2008
    ::Dies of blood loss:: Ooh I do sympathize for Sakura, sequel???
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  • From Lunar84 on July 01, 2008
    I really liked this. The story flowed nicely and for it being your first lemon I really thought it was done very well. Dark. But, I liked that aspect. I only noticed a few minor spelling errors. Nothing big. One thing though I will mention, is that I think it would help if you spaced out your paragraphs. Including all dialogue in a seperate paragraph. It looks like a giant wall of text and is rather hard to read at times. I almost didnt read the fic for that reason when I saw how it was posted. But, I did it anyway which was good for me. I will be looking forward to more updates!
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