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Reviews for Father Figure

By : CassandraIncognito
  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on July 18, 2008
    Yaaaaaaaay I love love love this story!!!! I hope you can write another chapter soon!!! Im really curius I can't wait to see kakashi's and naruto's relationship develop!
    Also I think it is amazing how you got to make naruto smarterand more reserved without really changing his personality! I think it is a great accomplishment!Because sometimes his whole personality change (not that that's something bad because I like those fics too, but it is still amazing how you changed while at the same time you didn't!)
    Please write soon!!!!!

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  • From mcpnoi360 on July 18, 2008
    i just found this fic and i am totally in love with it! i think that the whole thing about naruto and his brother closely resembles what hinata and hanabi have in the real series... i hope they finally find out about the council but that seems a long way off for now... plus i am such a haku fan so im glad he isnt dead in this one! yay! i'll be waiting for the next update! this fic falls under my top 10 faves of all time! good luck with your writing!
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  • From Sagenwarrior on July 15, 2008
    Please tell me someone gonna give naruto's father a talking too! And a butt kicking. Okay that off my chest i really like this fic, and can't wait to see more!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 13, 2008
    Great chapter!
    ZabuHaku isn't weird... it's actually pretty cute! I love Haku!
    I feel for chibi Naruto...
    update!
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  • From yaoihentai69 on July 13, 2008
    ooooo, I really really like this story. XD It's really good. And I just want to hug Naruto. Looking forward to the next chapter. ^^
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  • From ANON - Jen on July 13, 2008
    I really hate the Hokage now. Poor Naruto even though in this story he has his dad, he's still alone.
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  • From ANON - HumanInfiltrator on July 13, 2008
    Just a small thank you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2008
    cool i hope you update soon

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  • From Raholea on July 12, 2008
    *squeals rants and raves*

    you handed naruto over to haku and zabuza??? not right!!
    oh, and i have to say, i like the little twists in the story that you're making different- leaving naruto's parents alive, etc. i can't wait to see what you have planned next. this is very good and interesting and i want more!!!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 12, 2008
    This is crazy good!
    update!
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  • From Xoteem on July 11, 2008
    OMG LOVE IT!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 11, 2008
    Violent reactions are only for when you do a bad job, and you did a beautiful job. Thank you for the A/N in the beginning, I'm happy. I hope you update in a reasonable time frame.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 10, 2008
    I beg of you not to give in to readers who want Minato to be evil. You had the right idea. You seem to be an original writer and for your sake I hope you stay that way. So please keep Minato a misguided but loving parent. There are too many stories out there that lack creativity and I don't want to see a great story like these to end up like the others. Remember you write for you, you just let others read it. Thank you and stay beautiful.
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  • From Soulcaster on July 06, 2008
    its good um are u planning on making naruto evil

    and no the hokage is nicer i quess but still scum

    and i like the paert were u made sakura have a brian and some sense cause she's never had them before
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  • From ANON - Dee on July 04, 2008
    An idiot yes, scum no. I have see what happens when an older sibling hurts a younger sibling, but when the parent is not there to see the action he/she will most of the time listen to all sides. Minto did not really listen he bought in to the crowd. That is what most parents will tell you is the worst thing to do. Quoting my mom "Listen what others say but not to buy it right away. Think for one day or two."
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