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Reviews for Father Figure

By : CassandraIncognito
  • From Xoteem on August 01, 2008
    I bet I know who Snake and Raven are. :P It's awesome so far!! I'm in suspense for the next chapter!! :D
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  • From ANON - x on August 01, 2008
    kushina is so clueless here and minato is such a push over, poor naruto. Hope his name gets clear soon and wonder how the concil would use him as a anbu now? since minato is hokage he gets to know right?...
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 31, 2008
    "Conscience: Awwww...
    Me: -Barf-"
    hahaha^^

    Should I find it creepy that you would be okay with a Jiraiya-like person as your grandfather or lover??! Hehe... though I know what you mean.
    Damn Naruto! Always sacrificing himself for his precious people. How long will it be till Kakashi find out that Naruto is in Root?
    Great chapter!
    update!
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  • From Akina on July 31, 2008
    "...well Zabuza was, but in all honesty he was a pussy cat with the influence of Haku. Zabuza had mellowed drastically when compared to his former state, and the teen had gained an inner strength from him in turn. They fit each other." I love that part... it's so true! Haku and Zabuza! T_T
    *cries* I HATE GOODBYES! Little Inari and his big brother Naru... *sniffs* Whoa, and I actually felt bad for Sakura, poor girl. *hisses* BOO! MINATO, FAKE TEARS MEAN NOTHING! >_> Um, you aren't gonna make this SasuNaru or NaruSasu are you?! I sure hope not! That would ruin it~!
    Yes, well... once again, AMAZING CHAPTER, C-Chan! ^_^ I look forward to reading more~ :)

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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2008
    That was so great! But I hate the whole "Better to love and lost then to never love at all" that bullshit from hell. But whatever, keep up the good and I might bake you a cake if you update in a reasonable time frame.
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  • From dutsada on July 31, 2008
    OH my goodness! Who is that Sasuke had confessed to?! and Naruto is in the clutches of that devious Danzo! This is all getting exciting. Can;t wait to see how everyone reacts to this! more pls~~~~~ thanks for updating
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  • From JossiKun on July 29, 2008
    wonderful story! i'm looking forward to the next chapter so please update soon ^^
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  • From Xenosangel on July 28, 2008
    Very well written story. I love the changes you made to the story from the original. I know its a kaka/Naru fic but I'm interested to see what you do with Sasuke as well. Ive put it on my favorites list and will check regularly for updates. I wish I could see more guys reading this stuff as I am a gay guy who enjoys it but eh whatever. I'm happy to find such a wonderful story on this awesome website.
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  • From ANON - Dee on July 27, 2008
    I think the way you make Naruto out is different and wonderful.
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on July 27, 2008
    Sorry for saying this but I just have to: I LOVE IT!
    But besides I will add something else to this comment that I hope will help the writing. I think you did a really good job with all the mision on waves, and I think you got to make something diferent(like you said you wanted to) because even though it is similar to some this was completely different, especially in the fact that it was the villagers who killed gatou.I think that's somenthing I've never read before.
    And I just LOVE kakashi's and naruto's realtionship! I can't wait to see it grow eveen more! I think that's what I'm looking forward the most! Well that and seeing more and more of naruto's personality!
    Also I have a curiosity that Im not too sure about: is Raven Itachi? Or if someone else, then who?? Well maybe you wont tell me this because it will come later on, but Im just curius!
    Ahahah Anyway I really liked this chapter, and here you have SOME of my mind. If I were to try and put more I think I would just start ranting, so.... I will be looking forward for your next chapter
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 27, 2008
    That was an awesome take on the mission to the land of Waves!
    I love the depth of emotion coming from Naruto. I think that is what makes this story good; real plausible emotion with your own creative twist on it.
    update!
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  • From ANON - x on July 27, 2008
    sweet story! Poor naruto, wonder would his name ever clear? looking forward to read what happens next~
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 27, 2008
    This story is getting juicier each chapter. I must say if you keep this up I might actually fall in love with you. But I'm not putting any pressure on you or anything. I know you have a busy life, I just hope you will update sooner. TTFN!
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  • From Vibora on July 26, 2008
    wow! great fic and very original (well as far as i know anyways)! great interactions between characters and i love how though everyone (ok-not *everyone*) has their negative aspects, they're all pretty much good(not really mean or evil). i can't wait for more =D
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  • From ANON - akume on July 23, 2008
    I must say I'm quite impressed with this fic. It's truly original in it its context. Anyway, I can't wait for your next update, whenever that may be. Until then. Ja ne.
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