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Reviews for Father Figure

By : CassandraIncognito
  • From ANON - Sara on November 17, 2008
    OH DAMN! That was a good chapter, yes yes!

    Aww, I must say I doubted how Idate and Aoi would fit in here but I should remember to remember that you can never fail at any idea you come up with! XD

    X3 Idate is so adorable, hopefully he'll have a happy ending or will at least die.

    *dances around* I look forward to your update!!
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on November 17, 2008
    I really liked this chpater! And I really liked your version of idate, also I think it was a good idea not to taint naru too mcuh and at the same time give him experience, poor kakashi he will be shocked when naruto starts seducing him that's or sure! eheh
    I hope to read more from you soon!
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  • From ANON - Calimora on November 17, 2008
    I like this story and the twists, but I have to confess, only KakaNaru smut amkes me happy!
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  • From ANON - Meli Christophorous on November 17, 2008
    um...yeah. what the hell? how did a ten-year-old have the entire council kil- even as i'm asking this i keep thinking that's it's naruto so duh. anyway, what the hell, man? i've never liked danzou, the old fuck should curl up and die already, the team seven interactions you've written are so sweet and adorable i love them, kakashi's acting like a...shit i don't even know, why the HELL did you write it so that i can't stand the family naruto has (god, i just want to punch minato cause you've written him as some naive innocent twit and even from the litle on him i gleaned from the manga i know he isn't that), and i know who raven is! jesus, that was a mouthful. welp, sasu-kisama is in love with his nii-san again. oooo....maybe i'm wrong. hn. anyway, i kept getting confused as hell over chapter eleven and i read it twice. okay, i skimmed it the first time but still. my point remains valid. i'm confused and intrgued and pissed and i want danzou to die and i don't really think it was necessary to smut up naruto before throwing him to the Wolf (like my pun? heh), cause if he's as smart as you've written him and reads as much as you've written him, he could probably store the kama sutra in his adorableness blond noggin. what a surprise that would be for kakashi! well, before my brain crashes completely, i'd just like to give you a sharp nudge into getting to the next installment. i'd also like for danzou to die *smile*. well, love and and many blessings. ja ne. Meli-chan.
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  • From ANON - Keidra558 on November 16, 2008
    gAH! YOU FUCKER!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS!!!!! UP-FUCKING-DATE!
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  • From Xenosangel on November 16, 2008
    That was great. Even though my vote ended up losing I still enjoy giving out the secret at the end...I don't remember enough of the details in the story to say if I had guessed any kind of secret like that though. Thanks for updating. Your a fantastic writer. And the smut made me feel all giddy inside more then horny. good stuff though
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  • From ANON - Pastel on November 11, 2008
    Hmm, I know that you want us to be understanding towards Minato, but I still can't help but hate him for his idiocy. He should know that even the higher ups would have some sort of hatred towards Naruto just like the villagers so they would do anything they can to make life difficult towards Naruto. I want to see the day when Minato finally finds out that Naruto was innocent all those years ago. I'm also going to guess who the anbu that took care of Naruto are. We know that the wolf is Kakashi, but I'm going to guess that the Snake is Anko and that the Raven is Itachi. Also, why didn't Itachi tell about Minata about the evidence for Naruto later on since it has been years since the incident? I would assume that he is higher up now and has no fear if stating the truth. Anyway, nice story. Update please.
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  • From mosewolf on November 07, 2008
    great story. I think I actually feel more sorry for this version of Naruto than all the ones with him as an orphan. I am wondering when Anko will make a present appearance in the story though. She has been one of my favorite characters in Naruto ever since she made an appearance. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From inumoon3 on November 01, 2008
    Loved the story so far!
    Read all of it it in one sitting!
    I hope that you update soon, and I was wondering if you could send me an email when you do!
    Inumoon3@yahoo.com!
    Hope to read more soon!!!
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  • From Xenosangel on October 22, 2008
    Hehehe... Well at least I made all my reviews 1 whole sentence a piece...lol. I figured you would say that I was just in some kind of crazy mood and forgot about FF.net. I looked and saw that there were only 70ish reviews and thought I should slowly work it towards 350... I couldnt figure out how you came up with 350 when there were so few. But anyway I still love your story and glad you at least counted the first vote and didn't just disqualify me.
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  • From ANON - momo on October 21, 2008
    this story has made kakashi/naruto my new favorite pairing!!! its such a dark fic, and i love the slivers of hope from kakashi's love that gets into naruto's life! and now ANBU????!!!???!!!! o dear. girl, you better update! i can't wait!
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  • From ANON - Nyves on October 21, 2008
    ZOMG!! I absolutely this story!! You have to update soon 'cause I really want to know what happens next. I love Kakashi and Naruto together, and I'm happy that Zabuza and Haku didn't die on the bridge. I spent all day reading this fanfic instead of doing my chem lab and my laundry. So I hope you're happy, your story is so good, that I haven't been able to do anything else. Now, please, please, please update soon.
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  • From CassandraIncognito on October 12, 2008
    Okay. Chibamaster, your vote is counted, and although I love that you gave so many reviews, and voted so many times... it only counts for one vote. However I'm sure you'll be happy to know that secret is winning in the polls without those extra votes anyways. However it's only by aslight margin. So hopefully secret and smut fans will keep voting.

    Oh. And while I'm here, thanks for voting guys! If I were to combine this site with FF.net I would have over 350... however I was counting just FF.net's votes... but I think it's only fair to give this site a chance. If I get over 90 + reviews I'll do my best to update here. And no flooding with one comment reviews from the same person, (Looks towards Chibamaster), it will not count.

    Anyways, thanks and I look forward to updating.
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  • From Xenosangel on October 07, 2008
    I love your writing and I cant wait to see where you take the rest of the characters either. (Voting ......you guessed it. Secret again!)
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  • From Xenosangel on October 07, 2008
    I very much look forward to all the little plot twists you changes versus the original storyline (Such as Naruto's parents and Zabuza and Haku surviving) (Voting Secret again)
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