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Reviews for Father Figure

By : CassandraIncognito
  • From ANON - Karlia on January 20, 2009
    I like alot, please update asap, you have in soooo interested!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2009
    Well damn I always like a damaged Naruto. I don't understand if he had the council killed why there still some left and why can't he get these people killed too? Oh well I just hope that you update sooner for I can see how Naruto going to rape...I mean seduce Kakashi.
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  • From ANON - Emily on January 13, 2009
    Oh my god, I just read the whole thing straight through and I couldn't walk away. I don't even ship KakaNaru, and this is just...it's breaking my heart. I felt so sick reading chapter eleven and watching Naruto be debauched by anyone aside from Kakashi (even if it was kind of hot...>_>). I love that you're taking the plot slowly and really developing things as opposed to simply jumping into XOMG!Sexallthetime! And I absolutely adore your reinvention of the canon to fit this universe. My only criticism would be that there are occasionally some very distracting typos...but it happens, it's really nothing bad enough to make me enjoy the story any less. =D. Now if only I could figure out how to get an alert for when you update. >_> *not aff.net savvy*
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  • From Ichiro on January 12, 2009
    Ohhh please updat when you can, I have a new found love of KakaNaru because of this story!
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  • From bob665 on January 10, 2009
    Lemons with plots the best type.
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  • From ANON - darklove on January 08, 2009
    this story was very good i would love to read the rest of it
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  • From jessysuki on January 04, 2009
    Hey!I really like your fic!Hope you update soon.It's kinda the first fic of Kakshi and Naruto with a great plot!
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  • From ANON - SasukeXItachi on January 04, 2009
    This is such a sweet story! I hate Minato in this!!! I normally love him, but you've changed my mind (at least in this story.) I feel sorry for Naruto's little brother, though. Yoshi, isn't it? The poor thing has no idea what's going on!
    And is Sasuke's mysterious lover Itachi?!??! I hope so!! I luuurve that pairing! ;) I can't really think of who else it would be in this fic, actually...
    And, speaking of Itachi, when is he going to grow a pair and speak up about the kunai he found? Grr..
    Poor Naruto! You've written this so well. I just love it. I hope to see more very soon! XD I can't wait to see how Naruto's mission goes. XD I hope he gets to save himself for Kakashi. That would be so sweet!

    Anyway, sorry to ramble. I love your story. Please update soon. XD
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  • From ANON - momo on December 29, 2008
    ahhhhh!!! the smut is yummy!!! (even though its not actual sex, its still sooo hot!) i can't wait for you to update again!! and for more kaka/naru action, the way you write it is sooo sweet! mou! ;)
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  • From ANON - Shingo the Pest on December 11, 2008
    I just read all chapters of this story. Started it last night, and I just got to the latest chapter. To be honest, I really didn't get into the first few chapters. I just didn't recognize Naruto as being Naruto and it turned me off. But the portrayal of him has slowly changed into the sweet boy that I know and love. I'm really enjoying the story now.

    I like that it was Idate and Aoi that sexed Naruto up. There's something very delicious about sex with people who aren't the main love interest. Builds up the anticipation. Who is Naruto going to have to 'distract' on his mission? And will this stranger get to have Naruto before Kakashi does? Personally, I'd love the bitter-sweetness of Naruot's first time being with a stranger.

    This chapter was full of a lot more than nothing. In fact, this chapter was the one I most enjoyed! It was probably the mix of character development, intrigue, and descriptive lemon (puckered holes always turn me on, especially when they're being played with). I'm hoping to see Naruto fall deeper into this cage that Danzo in building around him. And I also expect that Naruto might be more than Danzo can handle. I'm also hoping that Ibiki might find out that his little brother is still alive, and practically a captive. (But I hope he doesn't find out too quickly. Prolong the torture for the enjoyment for the audience.)

    I really loving this story, and I'm looking forward to what happens next. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Fate-Angel on December 11, 2008
    Great update, can't wait for the next one.
    Keep up the good work!
    =^-^=
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  • From Drumanel on November 30, 2008
    I love the way the story is going, but did you have to leave off right when Naruto said he is the reason they were killed? My brain comes up with the worst case senerio, that is never true,so i can never trust my brain. Sad, i know. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 27, 2008
    that was the best non-sex i've read. i can't wait until kakashi comes back into the story!!! loooooove it
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  • From mistressofyaoi on November 25, 2008
    omg idate i love you so much right now! omg i am loving this fic!
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  • From ANON - Briryan on November 17, 2008
    Great chapter! Looking forward to the next chapter.
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