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Reviews for Parent Trap

By : BishounenKrazed
  • From ANON - Word_Slave on July 01, 2008
    I really enjoy this story and I can't wait to see Naruto
    Thanks for making Sasuke a great character.
    Slave
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  • From ANON - narutoandsasuke on July 01, 2008
    very awesome job keep up the good work!!!! oh and when does naruto come in? is he going to be the twins new substitute teacher? that would be so cool!!
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  • From nawatia on July 01, 2008
    Great story so far! 2 chapters in and I am already captured!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 01, 2008
    Very cool story so far.
    I love the chibi Uchihas! Sasuke's kids are so cute!
    update!
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  • From Allys on July 01, 2008
    Awwww I like cute! And so far this story has lots of it XD. I'm not sure how I feel about June. I love her name by the way, that's always a contention with me and OC's, it's silly I know, but I think names are really important and shouldn't sound completely off when compared to everyone else's in the story. Like for instance Jeff or Bob - Hey Naruto, Hey Jeff ... o.0 *shudders*. But I love June's name so I'm happy with you XD. LOL, yeah I know I'm a dork. But meh, my whole thing with her is I've been in Itachi's position, not the going blind part, but the 'repetitive doctor's visits that seem to go nowhere and serve no purpose other than to waste my time telling me things I already know' part. And I think that if someone threw my chart down the hall I would quickly follow it and then exit. Now see if she had said that part about Tsunade not being an eye specialist from the start, okay. She recovered really well, but that start... *frowns*. But then there is all the hope concerned with getting a new doctor and a new perspective. And it always starts out kind of excting, and then blah. It makes me sad a lot. Urgh... I'm slowly growing to despise doctors. LOL I completely understood itachi's urge to just lie and say no, nothing happened this morning, but I'm glad that he didn't. If nothing else June intrigues me, I'm more than willing to give her a chance as a character, despite her being an evil chart-throwing doctor XD. I'm dying to know who was on the phone, that part cracked me up. I kinda wish it was Naruto XD. And Deidara as Mr. Dependable Guy and the 'voice of reason'... LOL. I loved that for some odd reason. It was strange but cool, like watching Colin Farrell play the staunch, upstanding police man in Minority Report XD. Trippy XD. I love Itachi's character, he's wicked but sweet and caring with it. The disease also lends an enormous amount of humanity to his character which in the manga is still, even after we know his motives, ambiguous. LOL, I guess he just hides it really well, it's nice to be able to get into his head and actually see it. *Hugs u* Thank you so much for the speedy update!! *Showers you in giant sized smiles and candy*
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  • From Dragon7 on July 01, 2008
    Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

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  • From gaara89 on July 01, 2008
    I do hope you continue this soon. It is one of the more original stories floating around here. I'd like to see how you introduce Naruto, since I already love the way you've written Sasuke so far.
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  • From Avonne on June 30, 2008
    This premise is so cute. Sasuke is such a good daddy, I love it! I love Sasuke's two lil uchihas - Touya's so wise and Kei seems a bit Naruto-esque (I wonder how the boys are going to interact with him)! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
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  • From ANON - hanyou-elf on June 29, 2008
    wonderfully well written as everything you ever do is.

    i love the characterization, the way you make sasuke come alive in this story. he's completely devoted to his family, which is something i would imagine him being. i like the way he devotes himself, the way he makes himself available for his family. and i really love that itachi does his best to help sasuke, while still maintaining his corporation.

    it'll be interesting to see where you take this, how you bring naruto into sasuke's life (although i have a feeling it would have to do with iruka becoming a teacher in the twins classroom, ne?) it'll be wonderful to watch the story progress and its nice to see all the characters coming together. it looks to be another interesting story! keep it up!

    *loves*
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  • From Infek on June 29, 2008
    This is going to be a very amusing story, I presume. I really thought it was cute. =)
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  • From ANON - Gwyllion on June 29, 2008
    *cries* AFF ate my review....T__T Copied and paste....

    O.M.G. I'm in LOVE!!! SO IN LOVE!!!!!
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  • From Gwyllion on June 29, 2008
    O.M.G. I'm in LOVE!!! SO IN LOVE!!!!!
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  • From Allys on June 29, 2008
    I missed you like crazy!! I'm so happy that your back and writing again. Yeah I know I've been awol too, but everyone has to a certain extent. *Loves on you* Personally I adore this idea. So much that I tried to write it once. Right down to Naruto being the kids substitute teacher (if that is what you have planned). But LOL, the kids were Itachi's. I made him kick the bucket and Sasuke sort of inherited the children who were a girl and boy named Tomoe and Takeshi. But yeah I SUCK at writing. i was only trying cause I really Really wanted to read it! And now I CAN!! XD *Loves on you some more*. You're excellent and I love how you read my mind sometimes. I hope you get bitten by a writing bug and find yourself exploding with this extreme need to churn out chapters XD *luffles*. It's really good to have you back XD. Oh and I like the name. I loved the movie (first and second time) so i only have good associations ♥
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  • From ANON - Damp on June 29, 2008
    “Chouji?”

    “Yes, sir?”

    “Shoot me.”

    Funny!! And the thought of Sasuke being a single family man, god, I was just loving this chapter!!! Can't wait for the next installment!!

    -Damp *And I can't wait to see you updating your other stories!!*
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  • From Dragon7 on June 29, 2008
    Very good start!! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.

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