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By : BishounenKrazed
  • From Kool3Ayame on July 07, 2008
    I liked it a lot. You just sort of lost me with the June connection for a moment but then I was like "Ohhhhh!" Good story. Please write more I want to see what happens next.

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  • From crazychemgeek on July 07, 2008
    I love this so far. I can't believe you had a new fic and I missed it. I can't wait for Naruto and Sasuke to meet :)
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  • From gaara89 on July 07, 2008
    I hope to see more soon. I can't wait to see what happens when Sasuke meets Naruto. Good work so far.
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  • From lexjamandme on July 07, 2008
    You hope we look forward to the next chapter? *throws hands up in the air and huffs* I'm doing more than hoping. I shall stay up staring at my computer until the next update... even if it is days, weeks, months... *yawns* Okay, I shall stay up, staring at my computer after I take a little nap. ;)
    Awesome chapter. Great introduction with June and the little ones and then Naruto (squeals) I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on July 07, 2008
    wow, this is well written. I really am loving this. Please keep up the good work and update a.s.a.p.
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  • From Soulcaster on July 07, 2008
    good chappie can't wait for more and im cheering you on wohoooooowhooo
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  • From ANON - Sas-uke on July 07, 2008
    A likeable story, however I believe you focus far too much on characters that pull too far away from the original plot. I'm afraid to say my interest has been lost.
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  • From hanyou on July 03, 2008
    *huggles this chapter*

    too cute! far too cute to be legal, i think. it's adorable, ridiculously adorable, and i love it!

    i don't really have much to say except that i love that sasuke and itachi are marginally polite to each other, even though it's really rather obvious they don't like each other. you've managed to keep their relationship from degenerating into constant battles or overtly friendly brotherly love while managing to maintain the very delicate balance that comes with having a sibling you can't really stand but are reluctant to admit you love kind of thing. (if any of that makes sense to you, *cookies*)

    i love the twins and i love sasuke's relationship with them. and i love the glimpse at sasuke and his boys from itachi's pov. it gives it a different feel, and you can sense the pride that itachi has in his little brother for stepping up so spectacularly to be a wonderful father to his kids. it makes it sweet! and i love it! and the fact that itachi's actually looking forward to torturing the twins when they get older... although i can kind of see why... mini sasuke's and all.

    does the doc know naruto? because that would be a wonderful response to anything annoying the blond may have said, i think...
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  • From ANON - Damp on July 02, 2008
    ...(but that wasn’t so important because girls are icky, Kei made sure to tell him), his encounter with a very pretty lady that he wanted to be his wife (see, pretty ladies are different from girls because they’re pretty and give him kisses for his owies, and are therefore not icky)...

    That was a very funny and typical boy response! I loved how Kei said that! So funny...

    -Damp
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on July 02, 2008
    Love the chapters! Very interesting.

    I love that this story is actually taking its time in developing and not rushing. You get to see more of the characters personalities. But where is Naruto? I love the descriptions and the characters so far. The plot definitely seems good and intriguing.

    Please please update soon :)
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  • From ANON - sugar on July 02, 2008
    I am lovin this story I can't wait for more chapters !!!! Keep up the good work !!!! Sasuke & Itachi rocks in this story.
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  • From Management on July 02, 2008
    Yaaay!!! That's a really good Itachi. I like him. I hope you have more of Sasuke and the kids next chapter though. That would be really nice. And metting Naruto. That's sure to be fu-un.
    Anyway, great chapter and keep going!!
    I'm gonna love this story.
    XD LANE
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  • From Gwyllion on July 02, 2008
    I HATE AFF FOR CUTTING OFF MY REVIEW.
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  • From Gwyllion on July 02, 2008
    WAAAHHHHHHH! ILU!
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  • From demona013 on July 02, 2008
    What a great story so far. Cant wait for more.
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