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By : BishounenKrazed
  • From sweetangel23 on October 05, 2008
    totally awesome story so far...cant wait to see what happens...update soon ok....PLEASE!!!!!
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  • From Management on September 14, 2008
    I NEEEEEED A NEW CHAPTER!!!!
    WHere are youuuuuu!!!! Are you still alive? I hope so! I mean, seriously, your health is more important than this story, but still, I mean, if you update, we'll know you're alive!
    Wouldn't that be great?
    Well, please update! It would really be awesome! this story is the best, seriously.
    XD LANE
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  • From ANON - Lea on July 25, 2008
    Gaara & Naruto. That's hot.
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on July 08, 2008
    Loving the thrird chapter.

    Finally Naruto is introduced! I knew he was the new teacher :P I can't wait until Sasuke and him meet. And the June factor? She's okay I guess. Maybe I'm just more used to a guy perspective.

    Please please update soon :)
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  • From Management on July 08, 2008
    WAY to go for the chapter. Loved it. Oh, and I love June. She's awesome. And Naruto's child (I think it's Ayame, but I read this chapter yesterday, and couldn't review, so I ca't quite remember), she kicks arse!!! Alreay... SO she'll be awesomer later!
    I can't help but try to imagine the meeting between NAruto and Sasuke though. I CAN'T WAIIIIIIIIIIT!!!!
    Please please please, update soon!!!
    It's greatly awaited!!!
    XD LANE
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  • From demona013 on July 08, 2008
    Wow!!! What a chapter. I likey. Cant wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Mignonne422 on July 07, 2008
    Aiiiee!!

    moar! moar!! Moar!!!

    Darling, this story is just pure, unadultered wunderlove! I'm sooo excited for it. I just read all three chapters and can't wait for the next installment. I'm loving the intrigue and the setup and oooh! i can't wait to see the ItaJune thing XD lolol.

    And the kids are OMG, adorable! Just WIN! hee hee. I'm loving it to no end!

    A+++
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  • From Allys on July 07, 2008
    Oh my god!! *Big wet sparkly teary eyes*. June is all in love with Naruto and he doesn't love her back... She's now automatically forgiven for EVERYTHING!!!. I Love Naruto!! And anybody else who loves Naruto is a winner in my book. Poor Lady. I love that he called her Junebug. And she helped Kei!!!! And Touya held his hand!! *Dies of overdose of Uchiha cuteness*. Okay, okay so I really like June. And LOL, okay Doctor's are people too XD. She's very allowed to have her pissy moments. And Jeez Louise Sakura!!! Potty mouth much!! I mean I can cuss with the best of them, but not in front of the babies!! The absolutely adorable orange clad ninja babies *squees like an idiot*. Ayame is so CUTE!!! And Kei!! (AGAIN) - "You can be our friend, we don't have a mommy either!" *Glomps them ALL and you too ;)!!!* I'm so freaking excited!!! And GAARA!!! LOL *Loves all over the head of Suna mafia and then runs for my life*. Naruto would go out with damn gangster. *Shakes head* I can't wait for Naruto's point of view!!! He's so my favourite!! *Huggles you to bits* Thank you so much for the update honey!!
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  • From on July 07, 2008
    This story is really awesome! I can't wait to read more! Whoever Ayame's mother is, she must have hurt Naruto a lot for Sakura to say something so nasty about her. I'm usually not into OC characters unless they are kids, but I really like June, she is pretty awesome. She must have a huge heart to be willing to break her own heart in order to see Naruto happy even if it's not with her.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 07, 2008
    “Hey, Ayame-chan!” June and Ayame both turned to the voice, blinking their eyes when they saw Kei nearly falling out of his chair, hand waving back and forth. “You can be our friend! We don’t have a mom, either!”

    Dude!! That was so cute! I loved it! 'was so funny too!

    -Damp

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  • From ANON - hanyou-elf on July 07, 2008
    *dodges desk*

    yay! we finally get to meet naruto! this makes me happy. *love for naruto* and i'm really glad that he's not dating gaara anymore, that way the door's open for sasuke. :>

    and ahs. now we know why june acted the way she did. although i suppose that's an appropriate reaction when dealing with somebody as arrogant as an uchiha. when naruto meets sasuke, is he going to end up throwing things?

    it was nice to get to know june a little bit. and shame on her for breaking naruto's heart. although, i guess it's okay because she's still hurt. but itachi's going to make it all better for her, ne? i really like her though. she's cute. and i love how girlish she was before she went to see naruto. it was quite appropriate. because who can ever forget those dazzling baby blues?

    and... and... ayame! oh lordy she is adorable. i'm all like... mini-naruto! complete with a naruto-esque outfit. that makes it so much more fun! and what she said about her mother! shame on sakura for teaching her that! (and i certainly hope that your sakura-hate doesn't spill over into this! unless it's supposed to be...) but ayame is so cute! and kei! and touya! *loves them* i think these are among my favorite oc's created, just for the sheer adorableness of them. and i get a feeling they are going to be quite manipulative when it comes to getting their fathers together.

    another great chapter, nomme-kami-sama!
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  • From serenagold on July 07, 2008
    The better question is: why not Gaara? Gaara is fucking hot. =^^= (Plus, you know, he and Naruto can relate to one enough for whatever the reason, no matter how AU a story can be... but thats not import right now. The important thing is that Gaara is hot! *ahem) hehe

    Keep up the good work. ^^
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 07, 2008
    Great chapter!
    update
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  • From Gwyllion on July 07, 2008
    Just wanted to let you know my keyboard's all slimy from my drooling. My inner fangirl never scream so hard either when I saw this update! THANK YOU! And how riggin' ADORABLE is Ayame?! She totally reminds me of a younger naruto...that little babycakes. Seriously...you don't need to hear this from me in every comment, but I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH HOMGWTFBBQ! June's a pretty interesting character so far and I'm kind of glad to read more of her BG. The ending suprised me a bit...but all will be forgiven. When Sasuke meets up with our Naruto of course! ;)
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on July 07, 2008
    its cute. though i kinda confused, is naruto ayame's dad? my japanese slang isn't all that good and she called him tou-san, does that mean dad?
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