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Reviews for Parent Trap

By : BishounenKrazed
  • From Gwyllion on September 06, 2009
    Yay!!! Another amazing chappie by you! I'm loving the fact that we get to know more about June's past. i feel bad about her, but then she wouldn't become this beautiful and strong woman we're reading now. I think she's perfect for Itachi. And ITACHI! You sly old fox you! Lol! I wouldn't mind cuddling with him.... ;)
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  • From Management on September 06, 2009
    Yayyyy!!!
    Awesome chapter! I want to know the stories about Sasuke too!!!! I hope you'll reveal them in the future.
    Still hoping for Naruto's point of view! And another update!!!
    As soon as possible would be nice (angelic smile).
    XD Mysterious June... What shall we learn next? And why the hell did Itachi have to fall asleep with tubes all over his body?

    XD LANE
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  • From Management on August 30, 2009
    THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!
    Little over enthusiastic there, maybe. I just love your story, and I'm always pretty over exited when you post a chapter.

    The chapter was awesome. Your writting is still as good, and I couldn't find any inconsistancies or anything like that.
    I would really love a chapter from Naruto's point of view though.
    I want to know what the hell he's thinking.

    Anyway, I'm really really glad that you updated, and I can't wait for another chapter!
    Hope you'll update soon!
    XD LANE
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  • From Calcifer on July 15, 2009
    Haha, man I'm lazy; been meaning to read this since it was posted...

    You've done brilliantly with this chapter. I like where you're going with Naruto and Sasuke's previous encounter. I look forward to your next installment in this fic. It promises to be interesting.

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From ANON - Aimee on July 07, 2009
    It's a very well written story. I really like the character development and the plot is also great. The only drawback I see is an OC who is quickly becoming a Mary Sue. Too perfect is no good: good looking, smarter than Tsunade, best friend to one of the main characters, etc. Is it too much to hope that there will be no pairing OC/Itachi?
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  • From ANON - Nami on July 07, 2009
    Smiled all the way through the chapter. I liked it, and how awkward Sasuke makes his life XD. I find him hilarious and the kids are all so cute I could just eat them. Playing ninja's and the boys running away after Ayame appeared to defend them XD. And the dinner and Sasuke's calm face but internal dialogues. I love him too much. And Itachi. And Naruto. And the kids. There's nothing I don't love (but I loved that little flash back snippit most, hurhurhurhur }:D~).
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  • From Mija on July 07, 2009
    omg I am sooo glad you have continued this, I love this fic and was hoping to see more someday, soo glad you wrote more and cant wait for more chapters in the future, omg Sasuke's reactions to Naruto are just priceless, I kept snickering, trying no to wake my 1 1/2 month old nephew but alas he woke up when I was a bit loud when Sasuke called his mother the B word in his head lmaooo too funneh, ty ty ty for the wonderful read, cant wait for more, glad to see you back, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - gwyllion on July 06, 2009
    *flails like a mofo* How friggin' ADORABLE!!! Ayame doing her ninja moves while chasing after Touya and Kei was the most cutest scene here. I absolutely adore them. In my mind, I already had them down in a pic as grown up children. Beautiful and cute lil' teens they will be. With the brothers being the protective ones while Ayame is a blooming flower ready to be picked. And for some reason, they will always remain childhood best fiends. Ignore me...I can ramble all day on how I see the kids. I love your characters so much!
    Now that we know how and where Sasuke and Naruto had met, we can now picture what will happen if only Sasuke would just give into his lust and feelings for the blonde. That was a very sexy scene where they were making out in the club. JUST YUM! Now I shall have to wait patiently for your next chappie. Gwyll is addicted!
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  • From ZeroZoey on July 06, 2009
    Very glad you updated, I really love this story, it has been to long. Anyway keep up the great work and update soon.
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  • From Daydreamer79 on July 06, 2009
    OK first off, you are amazing. Seriously, how did I miss this story? Is Sasuke afraid of his family finding out he's gay? I also love that you are making Itachi straight. I love OCs in M/F since there are so few of the female Naruto ppl that I would want to read about. I really look forward to reading more of this story. I nearly cried when I got to the last chapter, I was so dissappointed that was all for now. I'll be keeping an eye out for this story.
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  • From ANON - Angel on July 06, 2009
    Please don't toy LOL. Love it! I first encountered this story when I was new to "the FANDOM" and completely foreign to the idea of 'yaoi'. Only interested in canon timeline stories, surprisingly I read the whole then 4 chaps.

    And reread them again tonight. You've certainly upped the ante and I can't wait I CAN'T WAIT!

    Loving evilly awesome Tachi and childishily evil Sasuke. As for Naruto shucks he's coming off hott seme LOL.

    Cheers
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  • From Dragon7 on July 06, 2009
    I can’t wait to read what happens next.
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  • From Management on May 10, 2009
    Just went through the end of that chapter again.
    It really is intriguing.
    I hope you post the next chapter soon!
    Lane.
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  • From Calcifer on March 23, 2009
    This is brilliant -heart heart heart- I'm loving this and looking forward to the next chapter. I'm totally curious about how Sasuke and Naruto know each other, and why Sasuke ran away.

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From Management on March 20, 2009
    OH THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Okay, that was the long scream of distress which is meant to show you how unhappy I am at not having the next chapter right under my eyes this instant. My enter isn't working, so this may look pretty weird. Anyway, I am so glad that you updated! And this was an awesome chapter. And considering I'm a stupid reader, I have not the slightest idea where they know each other from! BUT IT WAS AWESOME AND I WANT TO FIND OUT! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON! Here you will recognise another cry of distress which should indicate that I would love to have the next chapter soon. Oh, and it's good to know you aren't dead. XD Anyway, hope to read more soon, and I'm glad you got all your inspiration etc back. It's so sad when people just don't want to write anymore... XD Lane.
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