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Reviews for Insomniac's Dream

By : ilikeyoursocks
  • From ANON - Ayuri on July 29, 2009
    Ahh i'm addicted and I just can stop readingg!!
    Chapter four where naruto was reading his missed text messages was hilarious!
    it made my day.(:
    i love love lovee this storyy.
    bless you for having such a creative mind. :D
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  • From ANON - Khameron on July 29, 2009
    So i'm confused. In the story it says they are juniors becoming seniors but they all don't have cars? And they cant get into rated r movies? is it suppose to be like that?
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  • From Rianestorm on June 18, 2009
    Oh, and by the way, I'm really sorry I didn't review before now. I fully realize that I suck when it comes to that.
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  • From Rianestorm on June 18, 2009
    This is probably totally random, but I really want more Gaara/Kimimaro!! I mean I love Naruto and Sasuke but I have managed, in the few short scenes with them, to become slightly obsessed. So please, please, please write a little bit of them. Please?
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  • From ANON - kitchan on June 18, 2009
    Here are a couple of things I think could really improve your fic: (no flame intended, only constructive crit)

    1) and this might be a matter of personal preference, but I find the use of random Japanese words in fics quite distracting. Because I read/watch the raws, I also think about the characters in Japanese, so I understand that switching back and forth can be difficult. I'm with you. But I really suggest picking a language and sticking with it.

    2) about the suffixes: OK, so suffixes don't bother me so much. They can say a lot about people that we can't translate into English. Like the fact that Naruto calls Hinata, whom he barely knows, "Hinata-chan" That's completely unheard of, no? However, Naruto pretty much only uses them on girls. He's irreverent, remember. Having him call Kiba "Kiba-kun" or "Haku-kun" is girly on him somehow. And my single greatest Naruto-fic pet peeve is a girly Naruto. (Do people who write girly Narutos even watch the show?) *sigh*

    and finally:
    3) I think you've got too much dialogue. Pick up a novel. You will find that the good ones at least, have about one paragraph of description for one bit of dialogue on each page. Descriptions really make the story. That is where you will find your voice as an author.

    Anyway, I hope this helps. Happy writing! I look forward to your updates.
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  • From ANON - I.Drowned.My.Goldfish on June 11, 2009
    Just pointing out a slight mistake. Apparently it's cause of your Iruka/Itachi problem in chapter 12 ;)

    But, with Kakashi…things were different. While they hadn’t known each other for very long, Kakashi had already dedicated his life to his new lover. And now…dropping the “L” word…

    Then again, it was preceded by “think.” If Itachi were to dedicate himself to another man—

    Love the story, please update soon :)
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  • From Nanin on June 09, 2009
    You updated!!!
    I barely have time to read, and I'm glad I came just in time. :}
    (I see things are speeding up!)

    Side note- Aww, it's awesome you've meet someone just for you. n_n
    (still in search :{ ) *raises hand*
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  • From missbri88 on April 21, 2009
    I love you Spastic!!! Is that what you wanted to hear? Well, its true! I love this story and I so cant wait for more as Im spazzing out right now. lol.
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on April 12, 2009
    EEEH! Phone sex! I'm looking foreward to it! ^^
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  • From hisoka on April 12, 2009
    phone sex,sound so odd but im sure itll be tried soon just wondering who will initiate it.im surprised that theyre only apart for 2 weeks dont films take longer than that unless your actually taking all day to and sometimes night to do them?sasuke comes back the 15th of june ne,thats just the day after my birth so odd.well hope you can update soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 28, 2009
    Pretty good story, love the suspense with Itachi. One question about Gaara's father. In the scene where he takes Kimi to the hospital he says he owns the hospital and is a famous doctor, but in the next chapter when Temari is mothering Gaara it suggests it is because he is a deadbeat drunk. Do they have different fathers? If they are the same which is he or is he both? Maybe more than one question. Thanks Morlana
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  • From hisoka on March 28, 2009
    is that sasukes only dark secret if so than hes lucky thats all that happened.kiba and hinata married,why doesnt she want her family to know do they not approve that always sucks.itachis creaping me out nice sleep bet naruto would have had a better one if he werent being watched.glad you updated hope you can update again soon
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  • From exo88 on December 03, 2008
    Hey! Just wanted to say that I absolutely love this story, it's funny as hell, I find myself chuckling most of the time. And even with the slight OOC:ness at times, it's... just great.

    Oh, and you probably already know, but there was one misplaced Itachi in the latest chapter:

    "Then again, it was preceded by “think.” If Itachi were to dedicate himself to another man—"

    That's all, please keep updating when you have the time/energy/inspiration and I'll keep on reading! And feel free to check out my "Back to School", I have a feeling you'd like it.
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  • From Leeana69 on November 30, 2008
    Hmmmm....Seems like an excellent fic. Let's just see how this progresses shall we?

    ....I meant that in the best possible way, btw. XD;;
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  • From hisoka on November 26, 2008
    everones life sems to be going smoothly excpy itachi of orse.hope you can update soon
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