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Reviews for The Trust 'Verse, Part II - Relinquish

By : kamikumai
  • From Missfall on November 18, 2009
    Seriously, this is one of the best readings I've ever had, and I've been reading naruto FF since 2001. I love you for doing this so plot heavy and so so GREAT! Have my firstborn!
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  • From lakuniko on July 23, 2008
    woww~~very original plot
    I love it^^
    Thank for wonderful fic.
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  • From PANDAmonium on July 22, 2008
    As before, I love your writing style, like the way you describe the nervous energy we can see building in everyone around Iwa as his birthday passes and the change in Iwa's personality. Plus the hint of Iwa's growing affection for Naruto to rival Sai's is exciting (despite his age :P). But I can't wait to see if/how you'll make Iwa realize what his feelings really are. (But I wonder what Naruto was _really_ thinking when Iwa started pulling him to the bed. ;))

    It's heart-rending to see Sai and Naruto's relationship on the rocks like that (just as it was to see Iwa broken like that), to see their trust thoroughly shaken. I hope you'll mend it, like you did with Sasuke and Naruto (and give Iwa his happy ending in the meantime, somehow). I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)

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  • From Ihadadream on June 30, 2008
    Thank you so much!!! There really is a part II I guess!! lol
    I've waited for this with a lot of anticipation and you did a great job! I enjoyed it very much, Thanx!

    I'm glad to know that Iwa will have a major role from now on! You have created a really interesting character and he is so cute with his crush on Naruto!!!
    He even broke his brother's wrist to keep Rokudaime safe, kinda an extreme measure if you ask me and poor Sasuke must have really freaked out!
    It's kinda sad that Iwa distances himself from his parents like that but thankfully he has Tsunade to talk to and loves Naruto's village! Does Naruto suspect how much of his talents he really hides to the world? Or is he oblivious like Iwa's parents? I hope he will be back for Iwa's birthday!
    Iwa'd be really sad if his 'most important person in the world' isn't here for his tenth birthday! His explaination as to why he wanted to learn medical techniques was really cute and I wonder what Tsunade thought at that time.

    Though I was surprised that Sasuke didn't really seem to mind all that much his son have a crush on his male bestfriend... who is nearly 20 years older than him! though i wonder if Naruto's aging process could somehow be slowed down by kyuubi 's powers...
    I guess I would really like some Iwa/naru/iwa but that would require Sai out of the picture so I don't know... In some years poor Sai is gonna have a serious rival and I'm sure he already suspects that Iwa is head over heals in love with Naruto at such a young age. That's why he refused to teach Iwa how to draw! Iwa might have thought that Naruto loved artists or something...

    Thank you again and I can't wait for chapter 2 already!
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  • From coldXrainX1891 on June 27, 2008
    Yay! The part II is here!!! ....yeah.... i read part I a while ago and i couldn't
    wait til part II came out. Yay. I love this story. Anywho as usual update ASAP and
    keep up the excellent work!
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  • From ItaNarulover on June 27, 2008
    Love it! I'm so glad that you continued with this!
    I really love that Iwa is so much like Itachi and that he has a crush on Naruto! =)
    Take care. Hugs
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