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Reviews for Love Knows No Bounds

By : nekluvshp
  • From slayerette0 on February 08, 2009
    You used your own name in a self insert lemon fanfiction... that's like one of the lowest levels of fangirl hell. You're surprised you got criticism?
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  • From AkiChan123 on October 10, 2008
    I really like this story. It kinda has a fangirlish view, but its still a nice story. Whoever flamed it is a stupid fuck nugget who deserves to have a pineapple shoved up their ass 8D
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  • From Lunar84 on October 03, 2008
    Hi there!

    I came across your story and wanted to just leave you with some of my thoughts. First of all, I am going to say straight out that I only read your first chapter. There were some elements I didn't quite understand. If the following questions are answered elsewhere in your story I am sorry.

    What is the age difference between Natasha and Kakashi? Also what were his reasonings for making out with her in the first place?

    Something that I would like to point out is that when you write your first fic using an OC it can be tough to please the masses. Most people are looking for that "familiar" pairing. Yet, I think it takes alot of imagination to think of and develope your own character. I commend that.

    Another plus, though your grammar and spelling are not perfect I can tell that you are at least trying to make it that way. There have been many times that I come across slop written down that people try to pass as the English language. I like that you are spacing your paragraphs out and it isn't one giant wall of text, but one thing I would like to just suggest is that perhaps you could put all dialogue in its own seperate peragraph. Many writers do this and I think it helps with the flow of the story.

    I would also like to comment on the Anon reveiw. I haven't seen the first review that was left so I can't say it was flaming or not. Some people would considor even the mildest constructive criticism a flame. One thing I would like to say is, please don't erase any reviews good or bad. Unless it flat out said "this story sucks" it shouldn't be deleted. Everyone is entitled to their own opinions and I think that with being a writer comes the good and the bad. I know it might upset you, but you can always look back at that reveiw and use that as motivation for making yourself a better writer. That's just a chance you take when you post it on a site like this. There will be people who like and dislike different things.

    Although this is kind of off the subject I want to mention an incident between an author and reader kind of like this. This particular reviewer had followed this author's story since chapter one and reviewed every chapter with nothing but positive feedback. When chapter 15 or so was posted, that same reviewer still gave an overall good review, yet they had posted one thing criticizing some OOCness. The author lashed out in the next posted chapter telling that reviewer to "fuck off" and that she didn't care if her characters were OOC, because she didn't write for other people she wrote for herself. Which of course isn't true, because had that been the case she could have written stories in a journal, not posted them on a site for others to read and review. Which btw, at the end of every chapter she put "read and review".... Just thought I'd share that with everyone in hopes that this is not that kind of situation. And no that reviewer was not me =)

    Overall, this story isn't something I personally will be reading on a regular bases. That doesn't mean it's a bad story, I just don't really like OC's. But, I do respect you as an author, simply because you are trying to improve yourself as a writer. I understand that writing is very hard and perhaps I will read other stories you will write one day. You said that you are in the midst of writing another story. I will take a look at that as well. I do hope the best and I wish you the best of luck!
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  • From ANON - carlie on September 29, 2008
    i love this!! i printed every chapter LOL ive read it so many times. you rawk!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 29, 2008
    wow hun, it really looks like you took my review to heart, I really was just telling you more bluntly than I should have that your story could be better. You dont have to sugar coat something to make you feel better cause awww you felt bad..well its reality hon, youll get a lot of people critiscing your work and some people aren't going to be nice about it. Get used to it. Life isnt sugar coated sometimes, and when its time to be honest, its time to be honest. The fact is that I know you deleted my review cause you couldnt accept the reality and accept the fact that people were going to know how harshly I critisised your story.

    So yeah are you going to get mad when another person flames your story? huh? Are you going to delete that too? If so, you have a bad case of deinal, honey. You need to learn how to accept critisicm, and make yourself stronger from it. People critisise others because they think they have potential. This story could have been better, if it were written more maturely, and you hadnt used your own name, or used a more creative name. A character and its name have to FIT the story and the timelike. Yeah I was mean about your story, but who gives a fine crap really? critisism is critisism whether its nice or not. The important thing is that it was honest. Would you rather have bullshit critisicm, people lying to your face about how good your story really is and not learn from it, or would you rather have a harsh, honest review and learn from it to make your story stonger? Think about it,Learn from it, grow from it, mature from it.

    I dont really care how you are doing in other stories you have written, cause I didnt read them and I really wont waste my time doing so. If you improved, yeah woopdie fucken doo. If not, well oh well keep trying.

    Last point, If I DID have a profile on this site, I wouldnt mind constructingly critisicing your ass about this story directly from it. I dont have anything to hide love, really. So as you have wasted my time..AGAIN, I wont bother you again, and I wont "flame" you again, i wont say anything again, feel free to delete this as you wish darling, I dont mind..and im sure you dont either, so read it and delete it ^^
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  • From ANON - Tige321 on September 29, 2008
    Crap,it cut off the end of my review. I also said that I enjoy your story,and never stop writing!
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  • From ANON - Tige321 on September 29, 2008
    @_@ YEAH!!!! RIP THEIR FACE OFF!!!!!! BAM!!! LMBO You're a lot like me in the way you respond to getting flamed.
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  • From ANON - anon on September 28, 2008
    Well thanks for deleting my review! I know you read it and understood it thats why you deleted it haha

    well you got the message, and thats all that counts, peace out love
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