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By : sameyler
  • From tawanawelch on July 29, 2008
    OMG!!!!! That was ABSOLUTELY GREAT!!!!!!! Thank you so much!!! Man you wrote that like a PRO!!!!!! Can't wait for the tables to turn for them next chapter. Neji will be so great as a Seme. I can't wait to find out what these plans are for helping Naruto and the gang.
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  • From tawanawelch on July 27, 2008
    Thank you for answering my comments. I just so love this story. I can't wait for the Neji/Gaa Smex. So you've paired Kaka/Iruk too, Nice. Things are getting a little deeper with the story line. Can't wait to see more!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From kyuubifreak on July 26, 2008
    it alright, my comment was the sex scent is hot!! how nice of ur friend offer to beta the story. the story to me have a good chance to be one of the best i have even read!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on July 26, 2008
    Ok so you've got Gaara and Neji and Kiba and Shino. This is so exciting because you have Itachi in it too. There are alot of questions about Sasuke and the way he's acting. Can't wait to find out about it. Oh and I like Iruka's character. What is he the prison counselor or something? He's so sweet to Naruto he needs a friend right now.
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  • From tawanawelch on July 26, 2008
    OOOH!! LEMONS!!! Will Neji be paired with anybody else? As well as Sai??
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  • From tawanawelch on July 26, 2008
    OOOOH!!!!! You added Gaara!!! I hope you pair him with my man Neji!!! I love that pairing!!!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on July 26, 2008
    OK! There's alot going on here which is exciting. I like that you've added characters that are hardly EVER used.
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  • From tawanawelch on July 26, 2008
    Well, I like this story so far and the characters in it. You don't read many if any prison fanfics this is definitely one to keep up with.
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  • From CanadianGinger on July 24, 2008
    You really need to consider getting a beta. Your grammatical errors bothered me so much that I didn't even make it past the first paragraph. :(

    What a shame.
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  • From kyuubifreak on July 07, 2008
    if u looking for beta go to: http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showforum=82, hope it will help
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  • From kyuubifreak on June 30, 2008
    thanks, i agree that you need beta, it is not hard to find one here, you can request one
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  • From kyuubifreak on June 30, 2008
    i like the story but it hurt my eyes, can you as least give it some more space?? the story is so hard to read but keep up!
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