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By : AkashaEmily
  • From TheWidow on March 21, 2009
    I am really enjoying this. I just kind of stummbled onto it and I read all the chapters in one sitting without a bathroom break. I hope you continue soon. And i look forward to your next update.

    Now if you will excuse me....
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  • From ANON - Ominee on March 21, 2009
    Sasuke is fine, I like how he's written. I'm just sad that updates will be far away....
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  • From serenagold on March 20, 2009
    As always, an excellent chapter!!


    (Also, you're wrong. The opening scene with Sasuke battling the snake would make an excellent image. I would rise to the challenge, but I'm currently swamped with school work and personal art projects. Perhaps another time. ^^)
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  • From Raholea on March 20, 2009
    *shrieks* i may not be a sasuke fan, but you'd better not have killed him!! *huffs* so anyways, wanted to say i've enjoyed this story and keep laughing at poor doll-sized sasuke-chan. lol. can't wait to see what else you're going to do to him. hehe. MORE (when you can, of course)
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  • From cynaga on March 20, 2009
    Great fun! Pls keep it up. Thx :)
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  • From Vixenreborn on March 20, 2009
    Yay! I came here not expecting much, but when I found your recent chapter up, I got so happy. I love this installment just as much as the rest.

    I had been having such a terrible night, but your recent chapter really got me laughing and cheered up. I love the adventures of mini sasuke. I have to say I love Sai in this story. He is just so great. The fact that Sasuke wants to strangle him greatly helps to show they are pretty well in character.

    Keep up your awesome writing. I look forward to the next chapter
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  • From Halskr on March 20, 2009
    I thoroughly enjoyed this. It was such a novel concept. Thanks for writing and sharing it.
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  • From jessysuki on February 22, 2009
    Loved your fic!Very creative and unnexpected the small Sasuke, and now will Sai join in a love triangule?Looking foward to next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on February 20, 2009
    Well I roared with laughter, Sasuke emerging from his flies, it was three in the morning and led to an even greater partition between the humans around me and myself, of course I couldn't speak to clearly and funny shit just kept happening in the fic ,oh well.Seems to me they where having sex just fine, it was kinda hot.Remember they have chakra, seems to me that could be useful, well maybe Sas doesn't have it but Naruto can bunshin small or use his tounge.Just a thought..
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  • From ANON - blisblop on February 20, 2009
    If he gets him a Barbie car I am so out of here!!! Uh, no, really it was oddly touching.if you can keep the surreal real, this could be a trip.Brave idea/attempt anyway.Luck.
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  • From ANON - jazzy on February 19, 2009
    absolutely adore you!!! I just so love this story it cracks me up and at the same time keeps the balance of Narutos mixture of seriousness and mischeif more please...
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 18, 2009
    Chapter Six: Heh—trust Sai to say the unexpected. ^^ ____ That’s nice of Sasuke. =) ____ Wait—where’s Sasuke bleeding? I thought he was okay. ____ Lol, “Dobe number 2”. ^^ ____ (*splash*) Ouch. >.< ____ Lol, love Sai’s reaction to when Naruto moves. “Lean forward immediately! O.O” ____ I imagine that it’s quite one thing to be examined by Naruto, and quite another to be examined by Sai. At least, Sasuke might feel like it’s so. Still, it’s nice of Sai to be so considerate. I like how he’s treating Sasuke. (Though I doubt Sasuke appreciates it that much.) ____ I like the “clear indication that Sasuke was upset.”
    Clever, Sai using the paintbrush for the salve. =D ____ Yikes—being 6 inches does NOT agree with Sasuke, does it? He’s got enough to worry about with the snake venom and rats. And now this. Naruto’s probably going to be extra-sensitive for a while, I’d wager. And Sasuke’ll probably be partially appreciative of the efforts and partially annoyed because, as he said earlier, he’s not made of glass. But it’s a tough world, alright. ____ I’m not sure I understand the reference to Hinata there. What did she do? Was it her that sent Sai over? ____ I’m not sure I believe that Orochimaru and/or Kabuto would do the marker stuff, but I’m pretty sure they’d find some other way to mess around with Sasuke. ____ That’s Sasuke, all right. He pushes himself so that he’s not always aware of how badly he’s been injured. u_u
    Mm—“There seemed to be some sort of vice surrounding Sasuke’s chest . . .” Actually, you meant “vise”. ____ I take it that his ribs swelled up and are throbbing horribly, right? ____ Heh—I can hear Sai saying that “conversationally.” ^^; ____ And the “maddeningly patient voice,” too. ^^ ♥ ____ “He’d gone soft . . .” He would think that, wouldn’t he? He hasn’t gone soft, things have just gotten unexpectedly a LOT harder. ____ Awww. ó_ò Naruto’s scared of hurting him, not knowing that Sasuke’s a lot more comfortable around him than with Sai. ____ I’m wondering when Naruto’s going to ask Sai why he hasn’t spilled the beans to anybody about Sasuke being back in Konoha. ____ Okay, Sai, that was lamest penis-joke I’ve heard from you yet. Surely you can come up with a better one. 9_9
    Sasuke must hate all these fade-outs. ____ It’s kind of interesting how automatically Sai fell into the role of looking out for Sasuke in this story. ____ Okay, I don’t like that look on Sai’s face. What’s wrong with the outfit here? ____ I like how Naruto’s searching Sai for “any sign of judgment of subterfuge in either his teammate’s expression or tone.” The question is, however, how well can Sai hide those if he is planning on them? ____ Lol: “Sasuke and his lame answers were such a bad influence.” ^^ ____ Huh—did the story mention earlier about the district being destroyed? I can’t remember. And I wonder why Naruto doesn’t want to tell Sasuke about the sentence. The more Sasuke knows, the better chance of survival. ____ I think Sasuke’d rather hear about it from you than anyone else, Naruto. ____ Bad idea to wait once the jutsu wears off. Sasuke needs to be prepared. It’d be pretty bad if the jutsu suddenly wore off while Naruto had Sakura or someone else over to visit. Sasuke won’t be able to hide as easily. ____ The stuff Sai is telling Naruto . . . I wonder what would’ve happened if somebody told Itachi all that stuff in the past. ____ Interesting. I like Sai’s question and how his judgment of Sasuke rested on the answer. We only found that out after he asked and Naruto answered. Interesting. ____ Ahh, here comes the question. ____ “Duty had been etched into the artist from birth?” I don’t understand the question mark at the end of that sentence. ____ Oh Sai, you tease. >D Though I’m sure Naruto would’ve definitely stopped Sai from telling the Hokage. And if he couldn’t, then he’d try to find some safe way to get Sasuke out of there. I know it’s a conflict about “which friend do I betray”, but him saying that he wouldn’t stop Sai if he tried to tell seems . . . too easy. It’s a bit like saying, “Oh, okay—here’s Sasuke.” I would’ve expected Naruto to put up more of a fight. ____ I wonder if Sai has a thing for Naruto. ____ Nice ultimatum, Sai. ____ I like the silent communication between Naruto and Sai, there. =) ____ Heh—love how Sai subtly breaks the mood by asking, “Does this mean I’m a conspirator?” ____ Heh—I love Sai’s reaction to being “a conspirator”. ^_^ ____ Ahh—so that’s why Sai was frowning at the PJs. ____ Oh, that’s nice; Naruto rescued some of Sasuke’s stuff. =) ____ I wonder how Sasuke’s going to take the news of his home being destroyed. The entire area, not just his house. ____ That is a sad scene, when Naruto cries at the destruction of the district. Makes me almost feel like crying myself. ____ I like it how Sai is supporting Naruto. ♥
    Heh—seems almost ominous when Sai closes all the windows and everything. ____ Ooh, love the mystery of what he’s doing. At first it began to look like he was going to make some new and more suitable clothes for Sasuke, but then the story mentions his “dislike” for Sasuke. And it’s emphasized by one-line paragraphs. It makes the scene even more ominous. =D

    Yeah, Sai is a tricky character. He seems alright, though.
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  • From Narcoleptic86 on February 18, 2009
    Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com

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  • From ANON - shinningvixen on February 17, 2009
    Not to sound like an all out fan-girl, but I love you and your writing, and the story, and even Sai in the story.

    I stumbled across your fic, and the first thing I thought, was "wow, someone who writes really well." I love that not once have you said anything linking sasuke to ravens. Others do that, and it causes me the urge to beat them.

    Your story is really well written and I am very anxiously awaiting your next update. And don't worry. Sai is awesome in your story. You did great with him. He is actually one of my favorite people.

    Great job. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - sangohoushi on February 17, 2009
    omg i love this! go sai!! figuring out his emotions and all...wooot!
    thanks 4 the update!!
    update again soon!!!

    *CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*
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