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Reviews for Unfaithful (Based On The Song By Rihana)

By : ShouraiChan
  • From ShikaNejiLover on October 22, 2008
    I only have one complaint about this fic. I hate that Naruto forgave her so easily, I have been cheated on and you don't bounce back from something like that so quickly. Maybe he should have taken more time to heal. I dunno, some ppl might feel just the opposite. Other than that I really like how you used the lyrics in the story, good job. I would give you a 7 out of 10 on this fic.

    =D Peace-Love-Yaoi
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  • From on June 15, 2008
    wow that was just...Wow so amazing i loved it so much.
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  • From XFactor on June 15, 2008
    I mean no disrespect when I say this, but you could've done a lot better, especially seeing as how you've had some success previously, standards are a bit higher.

    When I saw this and read the summary I was intrigued, and you did alright, but again, it could've been a lot, lot better.

    Regardless, you still did an alright job.
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  • From sarge on June 15, 2008
    and like you mentioned can you also do the reverse one were sakura cheats on sasuke with naruto. tnx
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  • From sarge on June 15, 2008
    i like the story although can you redo it to make the sex scene more graphic and could you also make it a little longer
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