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By : Mashiro
  • From Management on December 10, 2008
    This chapter was kind of weird... Like... Really.
    Orochimaru is... Weird.
    That word is incredibly useful isn't it?
    I thought we'd have some more Shika this chapter. Or some Naruto. But we got some Sasuke instead.
    Yay. That boy is incredibly messed up though...
    Well, can't wait for the next one!
    XD LANE
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on December 10, 2008
    I love the way you've written Orochimaru. You have his character down to a 'T'. Excellent job! Please update once more when convenient for you.
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  • From Nanin on December 10, 2008
    You know what I love about December?
    Lying in your cozy blanket, warm with hot chocolate, while reading your favorite story.
    Ah, that's what I call tranquility.

    You know what is funny.
    You're the very first author who does not make Orochimaru the antagonist in the story (When they include his character).
    Very first.
    It's kind of nice to see Orochimaru from a different perspective, and not the same old (He's evil!) one.
    And more into a 'I'm a buddy' type.
    (I think you did a pretty good job 'capturing' him)

    Is that true?
    That the look in someone's eyes go when virginity is taken away?
    (The childish innocence?).
    I never heard of seeing an innocence taken away straight from the eyes.
    That's interesting.

    The saying ' You never appreciate something until it's gone' comes to mind.
    I know from experience that it is very true.
    And I see that Sasuke can say the same thing.

    Venting is easy.
    Almost too easy.
    Thinking, on the other hand, is very hard.
    Reflecting, almost near impossible, depending on the situation.
    I'm glad Sasuke is actually taking the harder route, and not wasting his time.

    This chapter got me thinking/reflecting quite a bit.
    (Which I hardly ever get the time to do.)
    I had to call my parents/family that I loved each and every one of them.
    (I had the urge. Probably from the chapter).

    So I thank you for that. :}

    Loved the chapter.
    Hope your day was good!
    Love~
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  • From ANON - Sneakyfox on December 09, 2008
    Oh no! Sasuke just had his realization and Orchimaru has a weird smile... I hope he doesn't stop him from leaving!!! :x
    Gah! I don't trust you not to write the worst thing possible. Update soon or I'm gonna develop more grey hair. :(
    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - CkA on December 09, 2008
    beautiful, beautiful, beautiful writing. I hope it never ends!~!
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  • From sangohoushi on December 09, 2008
    omg FINALLY!!!

    it feels like forever since u updated. update faster
    *gives cookies as bribe*

    oh, and, duh!, love it!!
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  • From ANON - realitybites on December 09, 2008
    ahhh so glad to get an update!! and definitely pouting because i'd like to know what is going on behind orochimaru's never virgin eyes. i suppose the mystery is alright and the tension as we wait for him to do something that reveals himself as undeniably a pedophile or undeniably bad is somehow pleasant ^_^
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  • From Sigart on December 09, 2008
    Oh. Oh dear.
    I'm so glad Sasuke realized what a good fellow Naruto is and how good he is for his fucked up mind, but... I somehow think that this means that Orochimaru won't allow him to go. Like because now that he realized that Sasuke's in love with someone else, he'll realize Sasuke won't be coming around and so Sasuke won't ever take over Sound and so it's totally OK to rape him. AAAAAARG! Must. Not. Happen.

    Please update! Soon! Please?
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  • From Nanin on December 07, 2008
    Sorry I didn't review earlier, I was sick. *sniffle*

    It's funny how such a relationship that is labeled 'friendship' can become something a bit more deeper, yet not become exactly 'love'.
    And all the while, one of the friends is trying to decide whether or not to cross the thin line between love and friends.
    In the fear that the line itself will disappear completely.

    I see Shikamaru has some speed bumps in his plan. :[
    But I know sooner or later, they'll be gone.
    I hope. :{


    A end to a good day.
    Hurray!
    Hope yours was a good one too. :]

    Love~
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  • From ANON - LANE on December 05, 2008
    SHIKAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    XD.
    Hm.... Well, I think that's about all that I can say about this chapter!
    XD IT WAS AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWESOME!
    XD LANE
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  • From ANON - masako on December 05, 2008
    Wow i have missed alot...came online for the first time in forever to see like 5 new chapters waiting for me...WOOT! things are getting really exciting now aren't they, but crap you know how to take your sweet time getting to the main event. Its not bad so don't think i'm insulting you...it just feels like one of those suspense scenes in movies. I'm biting my nails, pulling out my hair, and yelling at the moron to "not go in that room." It's that type of feeling. i don't know how this is going to turn out but honestly i don't see a happy ending....please tell me i'm wrong. Anyways...still the best story on this site. I love it...anxiously waiting for more. Happy Writing!!!!
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  • From Nanin on December 02, 2008
    When I was a kid, I used to think there were bush ninjas in every single bush.
    I would always run away from the bushes. xD

    It's sort of sweet to see that Naruto still feel defensive/protective of Sasuke.
    It must have been really hard for Naruto to not beat Neji black and blue.
    But I guess with Shikamaru there, he didn't want it to be a scandal.
    (Who am I kidding? Naruto would have jumped head first and beat him to a pulp. xD)

    Darn no fight. }:

    I see how Shikamaru's idea going to work.
    Very clever.

    I just hope it doesn't screw up. :[

    In all honesty, I knew that Sasuke's pre-teen years were tough.
    I was anticipating the look on those pictures.
    But who can honestly say they could hold a genuine smile after all that pain?

    My day was okay today, thankfully.
    Hope yours was good!

    Love~
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on December 02, 2008
    I love the way you have throughly characterized Shikamaru's personality. Excellent job! Please update again when you have the chance.
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  • From serenagold on December 02, 2008
    Did Shika drug him? o_O
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  • From SecretNekoCAKE on November 30, 2008
    I can't wait for the next chap!
    Actually i don't like SasuNaru/NaruSasu, but this is really good!

    And i love the way you wrote Itachi in the story...

    Keep the good work going!
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