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By : Mashiro
  • From Nanin on January 01, 2009
    Kitchen Table Sex?
    Well that's the first time I hear that. xD

    Poor Naruto!
    He was having a marvelous dream, only to interrupted by Iruka. D;
    And not to mention, naked in a bed with your boyfriend....
    (If I were in his shoes, I would have fainted in embarrassment!)

    I couldn't help but laugh when Naruto confessed that they had sex and, and Sasuke said ".second time was good."
    I don't think they really need to hear that. xD

    Naruto fails to realize one thing:
    Iruka said no for a month.
    Meaning that after a month, they have the permission to do it again as many times as they would like.
    So I guess Iruka finally saw that they love one another, and he can't change it. :D

    It's funny how in a dream, you have all the courage in the world, and no one can beat you.
    Then you wake up and all that pride is washed away. ;~;

    I thought it was sweet when Sasuke and Naruto tried to take the blame from one another. n_n
    All for one, and one for all.

    Time to party! :D
    I hope your New Years was good! n_n

    Love~
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  • From serenagold on December 30, 2008
    Hahahahhahaha.... Iruka is scary as fuck! >:D

    I loved Sasuke's reaction to punishment. Going from never being grounded to Iruka Grounded has got to be harsh. Although I love Naruto's loop hole mentality.
    Keep up the great work! ^^
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  • From sangohoushi on December 30, 2008
    LMAO!!! that WAS LOVE!!!

    OMG...no sex for a month?!! naruto better be very creative... and iruka was actually ...amiable about things. this was great!
    keep up the excellent word and update soon....please

    *CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*
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  • From missbri88 on December 30, 2008
    OMG. LOL. I think this is my favorite chapter. Its cute and funny. Then with Iruka and Kakashi as parents; its just too cool. I love it.
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  • From Nanin on December 30, 2008
    Ohh,and before I forget: Happy New Year! n_n

    Hope your year is filled with joy and prosperity.

    You know I love you. :}
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  • From Nanin on December 30, 2008
    Woot!
    'Easy Slide' came back for the killing! xD

    I was blushing mad when I read this chapter!
    I swear, when I went to get something from the bathroom, my face was red. xD
    (Sex as a general topic makes me stutter/blush.)

    But the situation was essential.
    It's not like they're going to run away from it forever because the first attempt wasn't successful!
    Of course they are going to be hesitant at first, but I'm glad they didn't stop fully.

    And that 'I love you'
    Ahh, music to my ears. (or eyes) xD
    I was wondering when Sasuke was going to say it, and I must say, he said it at the right moment. n_n

    Some tears that were needed to be shed, were finally let go I see.
    I know that feeling. :}
    I'm glad that finally happened. n_n

    I laughed my ass off when Naruto wiped Sasuke fingers on the blanket.
    I was near tears!
    (I imagined the face of a homemaker mother finding this certain 'stain' on a blanket... and she has a son.) xD

    I had to feel bad for Shikamaru.
    He longed for a different relationship with Sasuke, but at the same time fearing it.
    All the while, he knows that he will come up empty handed, because he knows Sasuke won't return the feelings. :{
    (But at least he knows, and it won't leave a regretting feeling of 'what if and 'maybe if' if you catch my drift.)

    The shower situation had me in a rut of giggling madness.
    Poor Naruto trying not to get in over his head, and Sasuke is trying to sabotage it. xD

    The chapter was both Romantic/sweet and sexy.
    (Very good combination! n_n )

    Now I sense another layer of trust was put between them. n_n
    (and another layer of affection.)

    Sorry I reviewed so late. :{
    My family and I went to go celebrate in Las Vegas.
    (Wedding).
    I spent a great deal of time there, so excuse my tardiness. :{
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  • From killakell on December 28, 2008
    I have to say that you are the most amazing writer ever!!! I am so totally impressed by your writing style. It is really amazing. This story is one of the best I have ever read and is one of my all time favorites.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on December 28, 2008
    Excellent job. Very honest, very cute. Update when you wish to do so.
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  • From ANON - CkA on December 27, 2008
    One of the best stories here~!
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  • From ninetailedfoxx852 on December 26, 2008
    geez how do you go it? every chapter is just as amazing as the next! honestly if this was a book -- i would have already boughten like 10 copies!!! this chapter was so great-- and not just cos of the whole sex thing although that was nice too... VERY NICE XD... but everything about it was fantastic-- how even though they had been in this same situation before it was still entirely new to them and heavy and so.... well im not quite sure but i really did love it! XD cant wait to see what happens next... was that iruka and kakashi's car light strolling across their ceiling, will shikamaru, gaara and lee know what what dirt deed they did?? geex so many questions!!!!! please update as soon as you possibly can! LYL!!!!!! XOXOXO
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  • From serenagold on December 26, 2008
    Haha!! ^^ Hooray for spontaneous !! ^^

    I kept expecting that any moment Kakashi and Iruka were gonna burst in and interrupt them. Heh,
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From Nanin on December 25, 2008
    Awww! n_n
    I could not wipe the smile I got from reading this chapter!
    Impossible I say!

    It's weird how a person can tell something is wrong with a single look or lack of reaction/habit.
    I guess it happens after you spend so much time with a person, and you adapt their habits/reactions.
    (I personally don't like it when people have me 'figured out'.
    It feels...weird.)

    I thought the date was very sweet! n_n
    (Even though it was a tad awkward for Sasuke.)
    But I think it's a (somewhat) soothing feeling when someone shares a memory with you.
    I think of it as a gift.

    That always happens to me!
    I have something I dearly want to say, but I could never blurt it out.
    It's frustrating!

    (But I see that even though Sasuke didn't say it, Naruto got the message n_n )

    Shikamaru seems like he wants to say something.
    (Well who wouldn't after all this drama?)

    At least the problem is somewhat solved for now. n_n

    Merry Christmas!
    I hope you and your brother kick it off this year!

    You know I love you! :}

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  • From ANON - Manosx on December 24, 2008
    Great story glad Sasuke and Naruto are making up! I can't wait to read what happens next.

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  • From serenagold on December 24, 2008
    YAY!!

    =^^=

    All is well with the world and I can go to sleep happy. ^^
    Keep up the great work! :D
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  • From ANON - CkA on December 23, 2008
    Brilliant, lovely dare I say seems to me professional writing. Deep psycholoigal insight.
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