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Reviews for Almost Sucks

By : Mashiro
  • From ANON - shoujo_sparkles on June 24, 2008
    HELLO... sasuke is kind of rude and angry... VERY angry, and Naruto is... Well, naruto, i'm reading the epilogues in fanfiction, (Shikasasu...^^), 1 question: this new AS is going to be Narusasu or (maybe...) narusasunaru? well will be waiting next chapter and hope you're ok and uhm... take care ^^ bye
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  • From Management on June 21, 2008
    Awesome chapter! I love Naruto. And we've leaft Sasuke's dark depressing thoughts for the amazing cheerfullness that it Naruto. Oh, and I decided I'd read this version anyway. Even if I have to wait till september, I think it'll be worth the wait.
    And I have to say, poor Naruto. Everything is going all wrong, and he has little chance of making it right, considering who he's dealing with...
    But, Suke will be glad to get his smokes back... Maybe he'll at least appreciate that... You never know.
    XD Update soon!!! (And you already told me when you update, I just like putting that there.
    XD LANE
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  • From ANON - SpacePirateDoll on June 21, 2008
    At first, I have to admit, I didn't like Naruto's 'Love-at-first-sight' kind of personality, but then I remembered that that's totally him xD

    To love completely without any sort of stopper and look just at a person without prejustice, yup, that definitely sounds like Naruto.
    I'm glad I wasn't quick to hit the back button on this one, I really do like it.

    Especially your wording, if it was anyone else with any less talent, I'd say 'fuck it' I wouldn't be able to read it. D=

    But you make it cute, yet not soo agonizingly so.
    I can't wait to read more~

    -Space.
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  • From KotoneHime on June 20, 2008
    This is so cute. I love the way Naruto fell for Sasuke. Makes me want to hug them both! Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - shoujo_sparkles on June 17, 2008
    hello, you send me a reply!! i was so happy :D... are you deleting the old almost sucks? so sad... well i have it printed!!! i like the second version too, is more detailed, like the robot incident, well i will be waiting for the chapter 3, and is not like my english is good or something because is not my native tongue and i know i can't write in english because my english sucks, but in chapter 1:" Noo... At fifteen you were too old to take of yourself", is not "too old to take care of yourself?" well will be waiting for next chapter (and the epilogues!!!!) i really like this fanfic, is one of my fav, bye!
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  • From dogdemon6narutofan on June 16, 2008
    Great first chapter, i didn't no u posted it here, i was so happy when i found out. i read it first with lj.

    can't wait to read more
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  • From goodchaos on June 15, 2008
    I Like it! Please continue. ^_^
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  • From ANON - shoujo_sparkles on June 15, 2008
    hello, i love almost sucks, i love it so so much that i printed the entire thing... OMG more than 100 pages... (arial 7.5 .8mm space, i think i'm going blind XD)i think i will be reading the second, new and improved almost sucks but this time online, because... (more than 100!!!! and in arial 7.5....is like a really big book with really small letters XDDD)will be weaiting for the epilogues bye
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  • From vinternatt on June 13, 2008
    I really enjoyed the first chapter.. and I'm so looking forward to the following ones. I hardly ever read stories on FF.net, and I don't know the first version. I'm also not a person that reviews often or regulary, but I want you to know that I added the link to my favourites and I'll check on updates. :)
    Hehe, reading made me feel like being a teenager again. And I can understand Sasuke's aversion to "perfect towns" and "faked smiles, happiness,..."
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  • From ANON - Meep on June 13, 2008
    Hehehe

    When I started to browse the new stories posted here on aff I came across the title of a fanfic Ive been following for years - but there was only one chapter. I thought "wtf, is someone trying to steal this great awsome story of doom?!" and I went on to the reviews and to my horror I found 3 innocent newbcakes that had decided to praise this Thief to the skies! Have they not read Naruto fanfic lore?! Do they not know that this story is one of the "must reads before continuting"?!
    Filled with unexplainable rage I decided to take a better peek at this Destroyer of Innocence before calling the Fanfiction Police to have the guy arrested... but after starting to read my eyes turned into big Os.




    Welcome to AFF, Ive been waiting patiently for this story to have an official ending :P
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  • From GMHR on June 13, 2008
    EEEEEEEEE!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! *fangirls all over you* It's being posted, and then there will be epilogues, and, and *explodes*. I'm so excited! I liked the changes you made in this chapter. Sasuke seems angrier and like he really wants to leave. Not that he was all that accepting before, but in the first version it was more like he was kinda going along with stuff whereas now his distaste and annoyance and frustration over Kakashi and being dragged somewhere that he does not want to be is clearer. Looking forward to the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - Lane on June 13, 2008
    I love your writting style. It's seriously awesome.
    Poor Sasuke, it seems he's going to be taking a while to adjust...
    XD Please post the next chapter soon!!
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