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By : Mashiro
  • From ANON - starriecat on July 09, 2008
    (chapter 8)
    Awww, they are just soo kewt and mushy. xD I just love them.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on July 09, 2008
    I loved the interlude, always up for some IrukaxKakashi loving. Please update again when you can.
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  • From Management on July 08, 2008
    Hmmmph. It's a good thing you appologised in advance, or I would be yelling at you right now (in capital letters,no less). That was much shorter than your normal chapter though. (you know it, I know it, there isn't anything I can do about it... Pffff)
    Sounds like Kakashi and Iruka are getting on really well...
    Last chapter, I thought that Kakashi had like, rearanged all of his room or something, and thrown out the boxes, but this chapter seems to have changed that... My bet is that he finally found the lock on the door... And wrote a note... (well that was obvious) telling him where to get his dinner... (is he actually going to go? Let alone EAT?)
    Anyway, where has his cigarette addiction gone... His packet must have run out (by the end of the first day...). But he doesn't seem to be smoking much...
    Hehe, Kakashi's curse. He knows alot. Maybe someone should give the crab explanation to Naruto... XD

    Well, waiting impatiently for the next chapter (can't do it otherwise...) and you had better make the next one longer... Or there will be many capital letters...

    Oh, and the next chapter will most likely be the last one I read before september... If it isn't this one. (But I think I'll be able to read at least the next one). So, I won't be reviewing (sorry, I would love to review, and to read, but hey, it's hard when I don't have internet...) =(

    Anyway... Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Way to go!!! Looooooooooove the story!!
    XD LANE
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  • From ninetailedfoxx852 on July 08, 2008
    i love this story so much! at first i have to admit i was a little wary aboujt reading but boy am i glad i did!! XD i love that thing about the secret club lol its just too adorable -- please update as soon as you can because i am just dying to read the next chapter!!!!! XOXOX
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  • From ANON - CkA on July 08, 2008
    Great story - great writing and characterization.
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  • From sweetciel on July 04, 2008
    I love love love! this fic!!! It's wonderfully entertaining.
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  • From Management on July 04, 2008
    Ohhh. That...; That. That is mean.
    Seriously! I mean, he gets all better and stuff, and then you stop it just when it's about to be hilarious. Seriously.

    Other than that, liked the chapter. Lots of Kakashi and Sasuke, and that was awesome. I wish you would just tell us what was going so wrong in the city that he HAD to move though. It's getting... Frustrating. Yes, I know suspence, okay, I'm impatient and you'll get to it. Jeez.
    But I really want to see naruto's reaction to Sasuke skipping school. As well as Sasuke's when he gets home. And I still love Kakashi. He's way awesome.

    Is Itachi going to be in this story any? Hey, maybe that was the reason they moved...

    Maybe not.
    Well, until tuesday right? Either way, I feel it is my duty to say this: Update soon!!!

    XD LANE
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  • From ANON - Miranda on July 03, 2008
    ok...I give up with trying to get the whole post together, BUT I SHALL BE HEARD!!! um...so...like I was trying to say in the last two posts (that aff so rudely cut short) I would absolutely love to beta for you! Please let me know if you ever want a beta. My e-mail's keitaros_kero_neko at yahoo dot com Please let me know either way...ok?

    *bow* Please continue transposing your awe-inspiring magnificence into written fandom, oh Enlightened One *bow, bow*

    ~Miranda
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  • From ANON - Miranda on July 03, 2008
    Ah~ Sorry about this, stupid aff cut off the second part of my post...so...let's try this again, shall we?

    *drools at the promise of 67 chapters (it's like a fangirl's wet dream)* I love your story, it's so cute!! haha, I can't wait until Sasu's like "OH SHIT!! I LIKE HIM! @%6@$#^ !$%!$$#!!!!!" uber kawaii. Oh~ and that would totally suck to have a wet dream be censored (even if it was only the language, kinda defeats the whole point, you know?) Poor Naru-chan...Anyways, I love your story
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 03, 2008
    *drools at the promise of 67 chapters (it's like a fangirl's wet dream)* I love your story, it's so cute!! haha, I can't wait until Sasu's like "OH SHIT!! I LIKE HIM! @%6@$#^ !$%!$$#!!!!!" uber kawaii. Oh~ and that would totally suck to have a wet dream be censored (even if it was only the language, kinda defeats the whole point, you know?) Poor Naru-chan...Anyways, I love your story
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  • From ANON - dragonlady sakura on July 03, 2008
    Hilarious! I love it already and I'm completetly hooked. Naruto reminds me of being a little kid again and when they liked someone, they were mean to them. Cute!
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  • From ANON - shoujo_sparkles on July 02, 2008
    Hello, a new chapter, (really new!) “You’ve been bullying him!”

    “I... I have not!” (XDXDXD)“If I’ve been bullying him then he’s been bullying me back,” “I feel bullied too.”
    poor Naruto, but well poor Sasuke too (naruto is so dense), “I’m gonna be grounded when we get married,” OMG i really like the way you write, are you going to add other new (NEW) chapters?
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  • From Management on July 01, 2008
    LOVE the last line. That was perfect.
    I was wondering when Suke was going to crack. seriously. He doesn't seem to be one for patience...
    I'm glad you added this chapter in... It's gooooood. And Iruka is going to crack sometime.
    I really want to see how Kakashi and sasuke are really taking this though. I hope that comes in sometime... They're so funny together.
    Oh, and I have to say, It's awesome to have an author answer your reviews. Seriously. Makes you feel real special, like you're involved in the story for some reason.
    Anyway, keep it up!!! And I have to say that Naruto seemed a bit less annoying and useless in this chapter. He finaly got tired of sasuke... It's a good change... Even if he still wants to marry him.
    Well, update soon!!!
    XD LANE
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  • From Management on June 28, 2008
    What I have to say: Poor, poor Naruto. Persistant or not, he's having heck of a time.
    I think I prefer the chapters that are in Sasuke's point of view...
    He is slightly less confusing, and all of that...
    Anyway, impatiently waiting for your next chapter!!!
    XD LANE
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  • From GMHR on June 24, 2008
    Yay! Sasuke is still super pissed. It's great, because his nasty attitude highlights Naruto's determination even more. Naruto feels less...whiny somehow. Not that he was annoying in the first version, but the way that he thinks seems more mature even if the thoughts themselves aren't. I really hope that makes sense. :) Two lines that I really loved:

    "Maybe Sasuke just wasn’t a late morning person."

    "If Sasuke hadn’t refused to unpack his sense of humor, it would have been funny."

    That first one is so Naruto. Such an optimistic, yet somewhat ridiculous thought. The second one is...well, it's just wonderful. Says so much about how Sasuke is feeling at the moment without spelling it out. Nice and subtle, and funny too.

    Also, I owe you some thanks. I'm writing my own multi-chapter right now and it wasn't until I read Chapter 2-4 (revised version) of Almost Sucks that I realized how much reading the first version has helped me find my own voice for Naruto. I think AS was the first AU I'd read that embraced Naruto correctly. I've seen other authors who try to show his optimism and energy, but it often comes off as annoying, or a much too exaggerated version of who he is.

    So, thanks again! When I post my next chapter, you're going to get a mention because you deserve it. xD

    P.S. No worries about the smiley faces in your reply; they make me smile!
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