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By : Mashiro
  • From ANON - masako on November 04, 2008
    AHHHHHH!!! i'm sooooo confused. there this giant hole from 45 to 46. whats going on? correct me if i'm wrong but 45 happened after the visit to the clinic? that wasn't some flash into the past dealy and i missed the curtain. so what did i miss?

    And a cruise...i'm with Sasuke and amazed at Kakashi's powers of persuassion.

    brain hurts...too much studying...need food...bed...

    Well as always, Hot Stuff. can't wait for more.
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  • From Halskr on November 04, 2008
    I really liked this chapter. You really conveyed that sense of awkwardness and insecurity. At this point in the story they are so connected, and yet their age really comes through here. It is a very nice touch. However, I am still so confused about the last two previous chapters, but I have an idea what it is. Thanks for the update on this.
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  • From Nanin on November 02, 2008
    Alright.
    I had to read these chapters twice to grasp what is it talking about.

    What I came up with was:
    Sasuke and Naruto went all the way, and then Sasuke ran away to Orochirmaru.
    Got hyped up, and felt bad about that and leaving Naruto.
    Am I close, or completely wrong?

    I'm terribly confused.
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  • From ANON - silverfox on November 02, 2008
    O.O I....I'm lost!!! The last two chapters?????? SASUKE WENT BACK TO OROCHIMARU!!!!???? What the heck??!!! O.O My...*criys uncontrollably* My poor NARUTO!!!! I think this is what dying feels like o.o
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  • From missbri88 on November 01, 2008
    Okay... I just got lost as hell... Hopefully I'll get straighten out in the next chapter though...
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  • From ANON - Morlana on November 01, 2008
    Well I read the last 2 chapters and I can honestly say that I'm lost with the last one. One moment they are on the bus and the next after what I assume is Itachi thinking, Sasu is waking up from having sex w/someone else other than Naru. I guess it won't make sense until the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Daph-chan on November 01, 2008
    Hey Mash-san =)
    I need to calm down... i'm really involved with AS and i have a big problem over here. The last 2 chaps (44 and 45) were read twice each, for proper assimilation of all new and confusing informations... but need a clarification. Really need. I'll never ever critisize you work because it's totally awesome and i'm toooo far away to have guts to point anything wrong, but i have a trully horror related to "no going back" bad occurances. I'm so involved with AS that for me to continue to read i need to know if Sasuke has lost his virginity to Orochimaru. I'm really sorry if i'm not being professional enough, don't be insulted please, but i'll not be able to read anymore if that was true.
    I know i'm crazy, but just for the hint about Orochimaru being the "cherry popper" you gave in the chap 45, my eyes burned and i had to stop reading for a wile^^ I'm feeling like Naruto huh? =D
    Please, help me? =(
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  • From serenagold on November 01, 2008
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    Ok. I've had to read and re-read the last chapter a few times after reading this chapter twice.

    WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON??!!! ((O_O)) HOLY FUCK!

    I mean seriously. I feel like I missed out on a huge gap of information somewhere. The last chapter didn't really make any sense, but I figured it was either a dream or the inside of Itachi's head or something - and whatever the something was, it would be explained in the next chapter so I wasn't too worried about it. Now this??? OH MY GOD>>> did you forget to update a chapter somewhere? What happened??? Why is Sasuke back with Orochimaru?? What did he have sex with him? Why did he run away from everything and join up with the creepy pervert and jump head first -far more than he ever has before- into a life of drugs?? What's going on??? I'm so incredibly upset right now. Obviously Sasuke fucked up everything beyond all reason to be in the situation he is in now. But what happened to get here??? I'm missing some very important information and am in dire need of a exposition or something! ç_ç

    Last thing I understood was that Sasuke was beyond grateful and finally accepting the life he has now in the suburbs with Naruto, Kakashi, and Iruka. Somewhere something has gone horribly wrong.

    I need explanations.

    I need something!!

    :(
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  • From ANON - Nadenes on October 31, 2008
    Now Im going to wait in anticipation. From the last two chapters, it sounds like Sasuke slept with Oochimaru.... but sentences in the last one make it sound like Naruto or tried to.
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  • From Aikotina on October 31, 2008
    . . . . uhh... i'm really REALLY confused. what just happened? why did sasuke go back to the city? to orochimaru, no less? why is naruto sad? why doesn't he want to go back?! *starts crying* i- its?! WHAT HAPPENED?! th-they had sex, right? and... sasuke didn't like it...? so... he left in the middle of the night...? *sniffles* please update and explain as soon as you can! i don't like being confused!!
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  • From Halskr on October 31, 2008
    I really like this story. The last two chapters have thrown me (44 and 45). It goes from leaving the mental institution after Sasuke getting his pills from Shikamaru to Sasuke waking up in Orochimaru's apartment after having sex with someone. I thought chapter 44 was a chapter about Itachi being crazy and having a split personality. So yeah definately got lost here somehow. So hopefully the next chapter will clear some things up a bit. Thanks for the update on this.
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  • From ANON - masako on October 31, 2008
    yeesh...that sooooooooooo did not make me feel any better. i kind of feel like hitting someone i'm so frustrated. if naruto doesn't hit sasuke then i'm going to...the one in my head anyways. maybe Gaara will? oh man, now i have too many questions in my head to go to sleep...thank you very much. Well YAY updates...boo butt heads and can't wait for more. :)
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  • From ANON - masako on October 31, 2008
    WOW!!! it has been awhile since i reviewed this story, or read it for that matter. 42 and 43 were extremely emotional. Some of the thoughts of Sasuke were going to make me cry. Now 44...I'M CONFUSED!!! i kind of have an idea but i want to know who that is...again the whole whining thing. Anyways, as always, awesome socks!!!! happy writing!
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  • From ANON - rose on October 29, 2008
    I am really enjoying this story. I think that you have really keep everyone in character, and you have made it is much fun to read this. I am really happy that you have Lee/Gaara in you story because that is one of my favourite pairings. I hope that you will update again soon because that would be awesome!!
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  • From Telpei on October 29, 2008
    Awww, that was so cute! Naru-chan is adorable. I love how he thought Shikamaru was Neji. ^_^'' And once they got talking a bit, their interactions were cute too. I like how they ganged up on Sasuke haha. "I could have been Neji." Priceless. Poor Sasuke.
    I like how you had Sasuke tell Naruto about his past. It was concise and to the point, without any fumbling around in the bushes. I really think that it was representative of Sasuke's character. And I really liked Naruto's reaction, too. They're so cute together! I love it.
    And poor Itachi is so sad!!! *huggles Itachi* Man, that sucks. Personality disorders are the worst. No cure, hard to diagnose, lifelong disorders, that are manageable at best. I just hope he's in a high security establishment so that he doesn't escape and try to kill anyone else. Scary. I would like to read more about him in this story though! :( I wish some things could be resolved between him and Sasuke. Do you think you will write more about him in the chapters to come??
    This was a great chapter, I really enjoyed it! Some of my questions were finally answered and my anxiety has gone down somewhat lol. I swear you're trying to give me high blood pressure or something! :P
    Please update soon!! I'll be waiting for the next chapter :D *glomp attack*
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