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Reviews for Search for Strength

By : naracest
  • From yuki3000 on August 18, 2008
    I-I n-need mooore!!! (twitches on ground)
    I've read chapters 1-7 non-stop and i haven't slept a wink during that day... i know Im a slow reader.

    I loove! it! is basically what Im trying to say XD

    more please!!
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  • From sris on August 04, 2008
    You really write long chapters. And you have a thing for cinnamon, ne? Th dance scene was fabulous... the way Kakashi reacted! I was giggling to myself, once again ^_^. I could picture "Kakashi's horribly jerky moves".
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  • From jordash00 on July 31, 2008
    Falls backwards from utter blood loss!

    I need a tissue!
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  • From ANON - sris on July 31, 2008
    Okay, that was refreshing (3rd ch). I was giggling as I read this. Loved the way Kakashi and Iruka both thought sexual things and tried to hide it from the other. I still giggle as I think about Gai running naked around Konoha. Confused Sasuke was also great; maybe the best line was "--and Neji's greedy hands on Naruto. For some reason that seemed extremely important." Just hilarious.
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  • From sris on July 30, 2008
    Okay, I'm at a bit of a loss here. Maybe I misunderstood something... can't seem to be able to find the other chapters of this fic. Have you uploaded them to AFF?
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  • From sris on July 29, 2008
    Thanks for your wonderful reviews. Last night, as I was trying to get some sleep, I started thinking what is it in this story I like so much? Well, there's definitely character depth and it's very well written, but that's not all. It's dark and it's much more mature than most fics here. You've got the talent to keep Iruka and Kakashi (perhaps Mizuki too, but I don't know so much about him) in character while playing with them, and still make it realistic. It's not a common gift. You did an excellent job describing the twisted relationship between Mizuki and Iruka. You made it real by writing about how deeply rooted the fear and Iruka's succumb to the abuse was, those things really don't happen over night. The scene where Kakashi took Iruka to his place and tied his hands behind his back made me bite my nails. I was completely feeling Iruka's panic and disbelief, and at the same time I was hoping Kakashi wouldn't do anything stupid. That scene was especially well written. Kudos. Now I'll make myself something to eat and read the Drawn to your Darkness, Addicted to your light.
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  • From sris on July 27, 2008
    First of all I loved your story. It was absolutely great! Only I thought Kakashi wouldn't be dumb enough to threaten Mizuki and leave Iruka to deal with the consequences alone. I think the fic is perfect as an one-shot, but I was left with a wanting to know what'd happen next. What is Iruka going to do (to Mizuki or otherwise)? Will Iruka and Kakashi get together? I'm just dying to know! So please, write more. Anyway, thanks for sharing. It's a great fic!

    PS. Just to let you know, I added this as recommended reading to my profile.
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  • From mourn on July 07, 2008
    Please upload more chapters
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  • From Ainsel on June 12, 2008
    hello, I love this fiction! I think that you are a very good writher, update soon, please!
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  • From kakasasulover on June 11, 2008
    wow...that's all I can say. Keep writing, it was so good!
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