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By : nimblnymph
  • From ANON - A.J. on January 27, 2009
    Yes!! Thank you so much for updating! I absolutely love that Kakashi is really starting to think of Sakura seriously and that Naruto will be coming back into the picture. Maybe he'll be able to bring some needed brutal honesty to the situation but I can't wait to find out!
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  • From kissthesky237 on January 26, 2009
    i get so happy every time this story is updated. i really do like it. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - kitt on January 26, 2009
    Just a couple comments here. One, Ino is getting more and more annoying as each chapter goes along. There's a fine line between being a considerate friend and a downright nosy busybody, and Ino is way beyond being the nosy one. She doesn't want to know things for curiousity's sake, but to know things as in 'your business is my business' and 'you better tell me all of it or else'. What kind of friend is that? If I was Sakura, I would have already given the blonde bimbo a chakra-laced punch a long time ago for constantly being in her face about every little detail in her life. Her character needs to be toned down a lot. Seriously.
    The second thing is about Kakashi and who he last dated. It's a little confusing when you say in this recent chapter that the last person he dated was only a few months ago and that all his friends hated her, yet in chapter 6 you wrote that Asuma says it's been a few years since Kakashi was out with someone and all of them hated her. So, which is right? The way you worded makes it seem like they are talking about the same person, but not. Asuma says that Kakashi hasn't really been with anyone, however as each chapter progresses, he's suddenly been out with all these women. It's a little inconsistent. You should really go back over your work and make sure you are following what you wrote before, and not add things as you go along without being sure it doesn't conflict with what you have already written.
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  • From nekomiko17 on January 25, 2009
    another great chapter. Keep it up! :P
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  • From ANON - puppydog on January 25, 2009
    Yay! Naruto is coming home!!! That was good so far. Keep it up!
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  • From Blackwidina on January 25, 2009
    SHANNAROU! UPDATE!!!

    That was awesome. I especially liked Sakura's talk with Pakkun. And I was surprised to find out that that one chick was a jounin. Seriously, what ninja doesn't understand that you can't just bail on your teammates in a time of need? Human OR canine? And it's not like we're even talking about normal dogs; these can talk and laugh and feel hurt. I'd have dumped the bitch, too.

    And I am seriously enjoying Kakashi's internal angst. Talk about denial.

    I feel kind of bad for Sakura. By now, I'd have gone to Tsunade and told her where to shove it, midnight shifts or not. But then, Kakashi wouldn't have a reason to stick around . . . damn, now I'M conflicted!

    I can't wait to see what happens next!

    -Dina
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  • From tillean on January 25, 2009
    Yay! Another wonderful update! I feel bad for Kakashi and Sakura, so in denial about what they want... fools! Update soon! ^_^v
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  • From ANON - puppydog on January 22, 2009
    OMG that kiss was... WOW!It was soo hot!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2009
    Ah man!!! This is great!!! Update soon...PLEASE! I love Kakashi!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kaden-san on January 15, 2009
    Wonderful. That was funny and sexy
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  • From ANON - rita_blue on January 15, 2009
    oh, I'm soooo waiting for Kakashi's pov now..... he wants her, he can't deny it! lalala :-)
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  • From Blackwidina on January 13, 2009
    Dear Nimblnymph,

    Dammit. I hate losing.

    On the other hand, it meant a new chapter, so did I really lose? *ponders*

    Let's revisit the highlights, shall we? Let's see . . . first off, when I clicked on the chapter, and the first thing I read is the words, "You lose." I nearly fell out of my chair.

    Two: If these magically delicious cookies happen to exist in your real life, I'd gladly do just about anything for the recipe. Homemade cookies with dark chocolate-I drooled just reading about them. If said recipe exists, please write it up in Dummies-style. I have Sakura's cooking issues, and sometimes it transfers over to my attempts at baking.

    Three: I loved Anko's appearance in this chapter. I could SO see her throwing the whole damn coffemaker!

    Four: The kiss . . . *swoons* Omigod, that was delicious. And clever; I never thought of using a hitai-ate as a blindfold. In my experience, the metal plate gets in the way.

    Can't wait to see what you come up with next,

    Your undying fangirl,

    Blackwidina
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  • From ANON - Mademoiselle on January 13, 2009
    OMG! He kissed her on the lips!

    AND his saying to the cookies.
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  • From on January 13, 2009
    realy realy like the story man jsut read chap 15 LOVE the ending btw its cool to cause i normaly wouldint read this pairing since usaly the pair jsut doesint seem right to me but you manage to make it work sence theres the whole *mission* behinde sakuras actions yet it seems like there gonna go a bit farther then either of them intended i just love the way this is palying out keep it up man i just cant get over how good a ending for the chap that was lol
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  • From ANON - Nadene on January 13, 2009
    Is it sad that after I read your story I realize that (a) Im horrible at flirting and (b) Im taking notes on improving my "technique" from your story?
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