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Reviews for Double Edged

By : nimblnymph
  • From MissPenny on October 29, 2009
    Hey nimblnymph! Just started reading this two days ago and have finished it already...you sure leave us readers gasping for more :D

    Have to say I love your style of writing, very descriptive and the characters are all sticking nicely to their personalities from the manga/anime (not sure whether you watch or read or both lol) Kakashi is by far my fave character, who can resist a man in a mask? Sometimes I notice little spelling mistakes (heal for heel etc) but to be honest you could have far worse, and I have seen far worse, and I would still read this to the end because of the portrayal of their relationship...Very sweet and sexy, I love it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2009
    AWESOME story !!!
    Best story I've read since "Stripped bare", and that is saying something seeing as I'm not that much into reading in the first place, and that both stories drives me mad in pure anticipation ! Please, for the love of all that's good in this world, DON'T STOP WRITING !!!! You've got some serious skill and I can't (probably a mutual feeling amongst readers) WAIT to read the rest of this story. I'm down to chap. 21, sorry for not reviewing sooner, but it's a rare event -.-

    From me to you; pure bliss from an awesome author !
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  • From ANON - taixi on October 25, 2009
    sorry, just to clarify as I guess AFF doesn't automatically associate a chapter with the review...the review I just left was for Chapter 8...
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  • From ANON - taixi on October 25, 2009
    Oh man, this chapter was absolutely painful to read! No matter what Kakashi came up with at the end of the date it completely didn't make up for what he made her go through in the beginning (making her wait 2 hours, failing to actually have breakfast with her (who cares he brought her a pastry?), forcing her to change her clothes after she spent time getting ready, and still keeping everything a secret... you have no idea how much I wanted to jump into the story and make her ditch his a**, bet or no bet). I'm sure the situation would have been salvageable later on and gosh was he being annoying (and it would have so served him right to have gone through the trouble of planning and stealing the projector to find that she wasn't going to put up with his sh*t).

    Beyond my annoyance at what Sakura had to put up with, I also found it strange you have her again even considering trying to steal the individual book, after the discussion with Ino et al re: what a bad idea it would be to steal the books piecemeal. Doesn't she realize that would give away her motives? (I understand you're trying to create drama for the characters but it didn't make sense to me that she would still be aiming to steal the individual book...)
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  • From ANON - namouri on October 24, 2009
    loved it!!!!! please update soon.
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  • From DewiSri on October 24, 2009
    Thank you for updating again! Really looking forward to the next chappies! (as impatient that i am)

    You're doing great, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Chaney on October 24, 2009
    OMG!!! When I checked to see if you had updated I ended up spilling my damn mountain dew all down my tank top and on my leather chair...lol should have seen me was trying to link up and read and clean the chair and change tops at the same time...needless to say my boyfriend has told me that everytime one of my favorite authors updates it's hilarious to see my actions. LOVE LOVE what you have done with it I like the what you said about Kakashi and emotional situations, thought that was really good...Can't wait till your next update this chapy felt like a teaser lol
    GREAT JOB
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  • From ANON - Mademoiselle on October 23, 2009
    Another adorable chapter. I wann know how Naruto is gona react & this bet between Tsunade & Jiraira? Also cannot wait for thier dinner daite with Genma. xD
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  • From ANON - cruisegirl on October 23, 2009
    Wooooo It been a while since I last read a great storyline on fanfiction!! You rocks the world!! Keep going!!! YOu get me exciting so badly!! update ASAP!!
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  • From ANON - Kimberley on October 23, 2009
    OMG I Just love this story!!! Out of all the fan fics I have read this is defiantly my all time favorite! The latest chapter was SO good! I already dying to read the next chapter! THANK YOU for writing this AMAZING story!
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  • From NarutoVixin on October 23, 2009
    i like this bell test better then the anime one lol
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  • From ANON - Chaney on September 18, 2009
    I miss you...(sniff) please i'm dying here, lol I know, I know you have a life and you will update when you can/want...but please
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  • From ANON - Mademoiselle on August 09, 2009
    :o Naruto showed yup! I do wonder how he will end up taking it.

    & this bet between Tsuande & Jiraiya? what is it exactally?
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  • From Blackwidina on August 09, 2009
    ZOMGWTFBBQ!!!! You updated and I didn't realize it!!!

    I don't even know where to start! Naruto's back, Jiraiya's the perpetrator of the bet, Kakashi's asking GENMA for relationship advice! Holy hell, look at my blatant abuse of exclamation points!!!

    *grovels humbly*
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  • From DewiSri on August 08, 2009
    Haha, love the update, please keep on writing.
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