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Reviews for Double Edged

By : nimblnymph
  • From VirusVescichetta on March 12, 2010
    I can't even begin to describe how many times I've reread this thing. Probably cuz it's what I turn to if I ever need any sort of inspiration. As much as this is a terrible way of putting it, bitchin' story. Characterization is beautiful, and the length of the chapters is actually very good. Very...filled without ever being overbearing. Well, I'm rambling like a fool.

    TL;DR - Awesome story; update soon
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  • From angelnomiko on February 15, 2010
    wow that was awsome ... please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Mademoiselle on January 16, 2010
    OMG! Ino walked in why they were 'playing.'

    I loved it poor guys they can't catch a break. Update soon?
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  • From Alpine02 on January 05, 2010
    AHHHHH!!!! Your the best... I love this story and I was hoping that maybe they would actually hook up... but alas, foiled by the Pig... Can't wait to see more
    Hugs
    Alpine ^_^
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  • From ANON - Chaney on January 05, 2010
    HOLY COW!!! I've been waiting for this forever..wonderful job you've been keeping me on the edge of my seat since chapter 1. Keep up the GREAT work!
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  • From Blackwidina on January 03, 2010
    dkjfa;slkdjffasljgf;askljnas;ls;lgk ja!!!!!!

    Sakura-Kakashi-both-GUH!!!

    ................ *goes to hunt Ino down to skewer her like the smut-interrupting pig she is*

    P.S. Pakkun and Kakashi are fucking CUTE. Badass shinobi or not, he luvs his puppies!
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  • From ANON - Blackbutterfly on January 02, 2010
    Holy hell, this is amazing 0___0 I read 23 chapters of this stuff in just over a week (which is a record for me)! Thank you so much for writing such a good story, which has both interesting development of character AND plot and is also written in some of the most exquisite language I've come across in this genre. In fact, I got so caught up in the fanfic that it inspired me to finish writing a song I had problems with for months, so I'm going to officially dedicate it to the KakaSaku pairing. Feel free to contact me via e-mail if you're interested in the lyrics =)
    There also might be some fanart coming your way to illustrate "Double Edged", so you'll probably hear from me again after the next installment (::wink::)
    Once again, thank you and good luck with this story. Ja!
    - BlackButterfly.
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  • From ANON - savvy on January 01, 2010
    omg...you wrote Gai so well....congratulations....i am so loving this!!!!
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  • From ANON - iforgot on December 30, 2009
    Just a couple of comments. When Kakashi and Sakura leave the other couple's apartment, you wrote that Kakashi had slipped his arm around her shoulders twice. It was not in consecutive sentences, but only a few lines after you first wrote it. A very little mistake. Second, when Ino walks into the apartment, I really doubt that Kakashi would have been facing in her direction while pulling up his mask for her to see him. He's very careful about people catching a glimpse of his face, so he most likely would have turned his back on her to prevent any thing from being seen (especially that hard-on he had from his activities with Sakura). Third, it was a little disturbing to read a sixteen year-old girl think about who she wanted as her first lover and maybe being her only lover. It comes across as if Sakura's a slut-in-waitng who has a list of potential lovers she would like to go through. Her character is not like that, and not many real young girls think in that direction as well (I sure as hell didn't when I was that age). I do like this story, however there is something wrong with a sixteen year-old thinking along those lines. Maybe you didn't word it correctly, but it is unacceptable either way.
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  • From slayerette0 on December 30, 2009
    Oh man, please please let Hinata stand up for herself as a subplot! I was getting all jazzed up about that during Naruto's tirade. It was rather distracting from the sakura/kakashi plot. But in a good way! lol
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  • From ANON - liz on December 30, 2009
    I really love this story. It's not all sex and violence but it has a nice dose of both that adds some tension and spice to the mix. Your timing for humor is wonderful and the characters are well developed from outside of the manga or TV shows. All in all I'll pretty much read whatever you provide! I am looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From NarutoVixin on December 30, 2009
    dang that pug has him wraped around is little paw lol then again so dose some one else lol
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  • From Blackwidina on December 16, 2009
    ..............I come back to the Internet after over two months of not having any, and this chapter is my what I find?

    I could kiss you.

    THANKYOUSOVERYMUCHFORSUCHANAWESOMECHAPTERYOU'RETHEMOSTAWESOMEAUTHORINTHEWORLD!!!!

    *pants for a few moments, then takes a deep breath*

    Seriously, I love the way you blended the series' events in with your story, and Naruto . . . god, he's so priceless. As subtle as being hit in the face with a dump truck.

    I can not WAIT to see how things go. Seriously, this ties with one other fic as being my favorite in the fandom, and I STILL CHECKED YOURS FIRST! Because I love you and you're awesome.

    I humbly grovel in your presence.

    Dina out
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2009
    I'm DYING to know what happens next !
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  • From ANON - Miss Penny on November 05, 2009
    Oh My God! You have to update, have just read this entire story in one sitting, I was enraptured.

    I love the whole relationship between Sakura and Kakashi, you can really see them develop from student/teacher to more. :D Fantastic job, will be checking in every day from now to check for a new chapter :)

    Keep on writing, I can't wait to see what happens next ^_^
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