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Reviews for Double Edged

By : nimblnymph
  • From Alpine02 on December 11, 2008
    I really don't know what to say other than WOW.. Everytime I get to see a new chapter, I am exstatic... I think this is my favorite story and have read a lot of these fics, so that is saying a lot for me... To be honest, you could update once every 5 months for all I care as long as you keep updating *-)
    thanks so much for the great read and I am really looking forward to seeing what happens and possibly some lemony goodness too????

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  • From Blackwidina on December 11, 2008
    Okay, normally, I'd be fangirling all over you and your latest chapter . . . but I'm afraid at the phrase 'pink, floral printed sleeping bag,' I all but died from laughing too hard. That mental image is going to make me giggle hysterically at random moments for the rest of my life!

    As for the rest, you know it all ready. Great characters, plot, dialogue, plots within plots, hilarious wit, fascinating takes on the characters . . . 10+/10. I love you. You are awesome!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2008
    Booyah! Nice update!
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  • From Alpine02 on November 19, 2008
    You know... I just can't get emough of this fic... I read a lot of them and this one really stays true to the characters so much more than ones I have been reading. I truly appreciate it and always look forward to a new chap..
    Love It..
    Thanks again for the great read
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  • From ANON - mmartini on November 18, 2008
    Less is more technique? I see. :) I like it very much! Both character is in my heart now, I wish this story could go on forever. I like every little thing in it. Ahh and will the dogs corner Sakura for a little scrape? Because I like Pakkun comments! But of course if your muse tells you to not include it, its ok too. I like it that way as you write it:)
    Thank you, and I hope I can read your wonderful story soon again!
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  • From Blackwidina on November 17, 2008
    That was an awesome chapter! I thought it was excellently played, from beginning to end. To be truthful, though, there was one part that literally had me slumped in my chair, giggling madly: the POV change, where it's revealed that Kakashi sabotaged the dinner. That floored me. I was all feeling amused/sorry for Sakura for burning the dinner(which was the conclusion I'd expected, actually), but to find out it wasn't even her fault-that was great!

    You're an awesome writer. I love your dialogue most of all, and your sense of humor's along some of the same lines as my own, which is awesome. I think you keep the characters in character pretty well, too. Oh, and your plot twist are divine. I was actually kind of thoughtful when Sakura was talking about why she likes mysteries, and the point was brought home when I found out Kakashi was the one whodunit.

    And I'll be thinking of your story as I wait for the next installment: Will Sakura figure out Kakashi's duplicity? Will Kakashi make it on time for once? Will Sakura find 'The Dress?' Will Kakashi kiss her in the restaurant, where he's 'safe?' Which, by the way, would be a hell of a lot more original that what I'd thought up. If it were my fic Bitch Nights, I'd have done something kinky like have Sakura offer Kakashi a blindfold, and tell him he's out of excuses.

    But I ramble. Please, ignore me, and continue to do a wonderful job!

    Your humble fangirl,

    Blackwidina
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  • From ANON - MademoiselleAnna on November 17, 2008
    So cute! I wanna see this date Kakashi is rushing for! SO HURRY UP! I COMMANDE YOU!!!
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  • From LadyPiro on November 08, 2008
    Oh my god....this story is wonderful, you are wonderful. Marry me!
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  • From nekomiko17 on November 06, 2008
    Your story is great! Keep it up!
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  • From pibi on November 05, 2008
    hey i love this story! i read all of it in just one sitting yesterday!lol
    well theres nothing i can say coz the plot is great!
    bt theres just one thing...i think the development of the pair is quite slow,

    but i have no problem with anything! so just write and make us all happy!lol
    nice job! im a fan;b
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  • From Alpine02 on November 04, 2008
    Every single time I see that there is a new chapter.. I jump up and down and do the happy dance... I love this story and I can't wait for more... Thanks so much for keeping up on it..
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  • From ANON - tomstar on November 04, 2008
    hey, just to tell you that im really enjoying this story. i always look forward to reading new chapters and i think that you are a great writer. please keep updating,
    best wishes xxx
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  • From ANON - Lynn on November 03, 2008
    Another amazing chapter! Really really can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - mmartini on November 03, 2008
    I've vaited this chapter so much! It was really good, I especially liked Sakura and Kakashi interactions. So give us some new treat soon, please!
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  • From GirlCat817 on November 03, 2008
    So, like, wow. Complete and total WOW, is all I can come up with at this point. I've read from the beginning and just wow... This is insanely funny, up there with the Dave Barry fiction novels level of funny (which has been known to send poor souls to the ER with head gashes after falling from chairs because they were laughing so hard). And the dates, absolutely to die for, just keep setting the proverbial bar higher and know how jealous you've made me of fictional characters. The part about making up the dialogue to the movie in the woods was brilliant but I loved the paintball-training date. I am just still completely stunned by how awesome this is (and I so totally mean that in a positive way). I absolutely love the back and forth between Sakura and Kakashi and love your story. oh, and I am so totally looking forward to reading more. Really, truly awesome work.
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