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Reviews for Love's Misconstruities

By : Idleflame
  • From LizzyBer24 on March 16, 2019

    Im just finished chapter 7 and I absolutely love it!! *-* I can't stop reading. I love it that it's written from Gaara's perspective (most of the time), giving the reader the opportunity to get into his thoughts and fights with Shukaku. The idea of how they are gonna meet and get to spend time together is great! I think it's really difficult to explain/to put Gaara's feelings in words but you managed that so easily it's not at all difficult to read. :) the reader gets through the chapters fluently which in my opinion is really nice. It makes me not even notice how much I have already read.

    I'm really excited of what is going to happen next *-*


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  • From ANON - AngelicChaos on November 19, 2009
    I loved this story! I started it along time ago, but for some reason never finished it. I am sooo glad I did now. I really do hope you do write the sequel to it. I really want to know how Neji protects he baby's from the curies mark. And see shika/timari wedding, and maybe see if Kankruo ever gets a girl friend. *giggle* I just love this story, and I really do hope you write more. Great Work!!!! XDDDD
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  • From ANON - Angela on June 20, 2009
    This story...totally muy bueno! por que don't you have more reviews? i enjoyed every chapter, so thanks for the great read.

    PS - no bueno on the title however...::shiver:: but i refuse to hold that against your story. i personally can't title my stories for shit.

    PPS - also, i've never read a better shikamaru/temari.
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  • From winterkaguya on November 17, 2008
    wow....love this story!! i love the chemistry between gaahina and its pretty cute and at the same time smexy!! i wonder what happens after hinata gives birth to the twins?? its definitely bad news when one of the twins possess the byakugan huh?? and i wonder what is gaara going to do about it??

    awesome story!!
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  • From Anlynn on June 21, 2008
    omg i loved this please write another

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  • From SandmansAngel on June 19, 2008
    I just want to tell you that I love your story, and even though I saw some errors in it yet it was still good. I hope you do a sequal to this story, and I would love to see what happens to Gaara and Hinata, as well as Shikamaru and Temari. I would love to see more of your work, and hope you write more as well in the future. Also I agree with xoxgaaraxox (or at least I think that's how it's spells) your story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 11, 2008
    Excellent story. You are right about one thing, there are not that many GaaraxHinata stories out there; nevertheless ones that have such length and substance. You are the kind of author that I strive to see writing fanfiction. On another note I truly think that not only does this story deserve a sequel, but I think you are more than capable of writing one.
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  • From gaara89 on June 09, 2008
    OMG Write a sequel!!!!
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  • From gaara89 on June 09, 2008
    I just read this story through and I really like it a lot! I'm utterly sickened that it only has one review. It's well thought out and has character development. The characters are mostly themselves, the way you've written Hinata is nearly flawless. I'm so sad that this doesn't have more reviews, I will be putting the link to this story in my next update!


    ~Reigh~
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  • From Archfiend on June 07, 2008
    Well, I enjoyed your story a lot, though in my opinion the chapters were as often as not too short, which not enough information in them. This was partly remedied by the amount of chapters, but I wish the story and character development was a bit shallow for my tastes, Nonetheless excellent story and I do hope you write a sequel to this story as soon as possible, because there are still a few issues to get over with, such as the fact that one of their children posses the Hyuuga kekkei genkai, Temari`s wedding, and of course we all want to know who Kankuro will end up with s.. (although my guess is, that it`ll be Matsuri hehe) any way either update ths story even though it`s complete, or write a sequel pleeease
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