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Reviews for Konohagakure no Gakkou

By : Miryoku
  • From LadyRonin on June 25, 2008
    i like this story so far i love jealous possessive sasuke he is the greatest and having hinata as his rival with ten ten support is pretty cool too. i think that having them jump into sex maybe not the best thing for them right now only because right now their relationship seems too antagonistic for that right now although possibly having hinata show more courage and coming onto naruto or even convince him to have a relationship with her. please don't think i am a naruxhina fan i am not I(i do not like her just for the fact that she has stalked naruto without telling him that she liked him). anything that makes him delay having sex. although what you have planned is sure to be good as well. anyway i can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
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  • From LumiiSol on June 25, 2008
    I like this story! And don't worry, sometimes it takes a few chapters in until people will really start to review, so don't give up hope. I'm a little surprised by the glimpses of the background stories of Ino and Sakura and I'm excited to see what becomes of that. I feel kind of bad for Hinata, but maybe Kiba or someone can come in and sweep her off her feet. And if there is a lemon in the next chapter, well then, I am definitely waiting for that to happen, hehe. Good luck continuing; keep up the good work!
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  • From shadowsonata on June 05, 2008
    *Smiles* It was actually very good for it being your first fic. My only suggestion would be to watch out for small grammatical mistakes (or find a really good beta because, yeah, a second set of eyes really help) and maybe use the exclamation mark less. Other than that I was pleasantly surprised how entertaining the introduction was. I am planning on keeping my eye on this story to see how it progresses. Good job!
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