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Reviews for Night, Day and Sunrise

By : CrimsonIris
  • From ANON - Seraphim-san on June 10, 2009
    Wow, your work astounds me lol. I don't have many chapter fics I actually keep tabs on, I'm more of a one-shot kind of girl, but your story has me hook, line, and sinker. The way you artfully yet tastefully describe the physical parts of your book and the amazing way you stick to character with only little deviance that fits the story really makes this an amazing work. Kudos to you and I'll be refreshing my favorites every day just to keep an eye on this one. Good luck on finding a beta!
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  • From ANON - Let.It.Die on June 10, 2009
    I'm so sorry, I didn't see that you had responded to me. If you are still intrested my e-mail is : I.want.to.hurt.you.just.to.hear.you.screaming.my.name@hotmail.com
    Thanks :) sorry again
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  • From cynaga on June 09, 2009
    Fast paced, exciting and well written. My heart aches for Naruto.
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  • From ANON - Tonboku on June 09, 2009
    Cool. Wonder if Neji could tell who's it was by the chakra? Who knows if his eyes can do that, though it would be kinda neat. If you're a grammar freak, then I'm a spelling fiend. Between us we've got half an editor. I've been itching to write a story for years but never felt like I had a good enough grasp of the characters to do so. Maybe we could work on something together? It might be mutually fulfilling. I really like what you're doing with this story and look forward to more.
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  • From Tricia1224 on May 14, 2009
    This story is really good. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From roxnroll on May 14, 2009
    Very nice. I loved the emotion going on here. I hope they find Naruto soon. Can't wait to read more.
    Rox
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  • From ANON - Tonboku on May 14, 2009
    Good chapter. Will we find out who snagged Naruto before the final confrontation? You did make an error though. Gaara is from SUNA, not Iwa. Hope you fix that. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From LyeLye on May 14, 2009
    One more thing, your chapters are EXTREMELY short, omg if I were reading this and had to wait days for an update I would want the chapters to be three times longer then this. Also, NEVER stop in the middle of a sex scene, I dont care if its lime or not, most people just read these stories for the sex scenes, theres no reason to stop in the middle.
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  • From LyeLye on May 14, 2009
    I have a few things i am ticked off with. Sakura doesnt even act like a virgin here in the first sex scene, and the cum strip thing? After the second time she would be begging them to stop, let alone be completely naked for the FIRST time infront of not one but TWO guys, she would be embarrassed as hell, more so then what you portray her. And I dont know about you but I didnt even look at my boyfriend from the waist down when we had sex, that was the shower afterward and I was incredibly embarrassed to even look down. It started interesting and then just turned into smut, I like a good story with my smut thanks, and this really wasnt that great. Check out the story "Like a tattoo" its a sai/sakura fic maybe you can get some idea's from that and improve on your story.
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  • From ANON - ChrystalRobby on April 25, 2009
    Keep Writing this, your a very good writer and i don't bother to say anything when i don't like the story or the way it's been writen.
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  • From SecretQuill on April 02, 2009
    i don't get why sakura would have any problems with her child being a "bastard"? they are ninjas for C's sake! no one cares about such things these days, not in reality and not in the naruto world. look at kurenai and asuma, they weren't married, but who cared? no one. please don't make a mess of the story by adding and making such a a big deal out of a stupid narrow minded way of thinking! i love the story and would hate for it to be ruined by that :P ... though I do know that it is up to you.
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  • From roxnroll on March 13, 2009
    I loved it. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I don't know who to feel more sorry for. Great job.
    Rox
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  • From ANON - mmartini on March 12, 2009
    I love this story! So please continue. I cant wait what will happen next!!
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  • From Ikippiki on January 25, 2009
    OMG! How could you stop here?! AAHH!! Please tell me you have surprises in store and Naruto isn't dead! It would be sooooooo sad if this is the death you warned us about! And the anime is called Naruto, he can't die!!
    Ok, maybe I'm over-reacting,... anyway... I love that story and can't wait for your update!
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  • From ANON - MommaG on December 30, 2008
    Overall, it's a good story. I can't see a threesome working with the characters' personalities, but I can understand Kishimoto's perspective with that one. I also am not overly fond of lemon, but I can deal when I can skip it. For SecretQuill, unless you yourself are a mother, you have no idea what you're talking about. It's hard enough to rear a child with a spouse; alone would make things exponentially harder. Also, the term you are looking for is "narrow-minded" or perhaps "closed-minded"; and, no matter what you think, people always do care. Take Naruto for example. His ostricization is not soley due to the Kyuubi, but also because no one knows who his father is. If they did, there is no way they would be so rude to a Hokage's offspring.
    Finally, if you pay attention and read the manga, Asuma and Kurenai are married. Please note the ring on her left hand.

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