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Reviews for The Trust 'Verse, Part I - Return

By : kamikumai
  • From CassandraIncognito on October 01, 2008
    That. Freaking. Story. Made. Me . So. Freaking. Happy.

    I don't do fan-girls squeals. And I did one over this story. So sweet and perfect. I love it.
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  • From sonotgoingthere on June 04, 2008
    Lovely story. I like how you remained sensitive to the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke, without taking from the relationship between Sasuke and Sakura, or Naruto and Sai.

    Great job.
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  • From Ihadadream on June 04, 2008
    Part II is coming, YEAH!!!!!! ('lovely hinata-chan'? *blush*)
    Thank you thank you thank you!
    I just love this story so much that i printed it so i can read it over and over again! YES I'M CRAZY LIKE THAT!
    So I reaaaaaalllly look forward to part II especially since there will be more sai/naru (they are so cute) and especially more Iwa (I'm so in love with the new little itachi and his hokage teddy bear).
    That sasu/naru scene was really a new starting point for their friendship and I do believe sasuke needed it just as much as naruto! Since Sai is OFFICIALLY (hinata-chan does a happy dance here) naruto's lover so that means sasuke can be his best friend again, right?
    Thank you again for this wonderfull story!!!!!
    Did i already mention that i reaallyyyyyy look forward to part II? Yes?
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  • From ItaNarulover on June 04, 2008
    Loved it! you can't make bad chapters...you're amazing..*completely astounded* Can't wait for the next one, so keep up with the good work! Take care. Hugs
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  • From LadyVorlana on June 03, 2008
    Yes! You must do Part II and SOON! The Frizz commands it of you! I wanna know more about Iwa and the whole Naru/Sai thing is just too pretty. Definitely wanna see Sai try out the toy idea! LOL
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  • From nawatia on June 03, 2008
    Great chapter - I am glad to know that there will be a continuation of this story - especially since it will be looking at Naruto and Sai's relationship. I'll be keeping my eyes open!
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  • From PANDAmonium on June 03, 2008
    Aww, that's so sweet! ^__^

    First of all, I like your writing. The descriptiveness, the lulls, the anticipation, even the technical points and formatting. It all comes together very well. And the SaiNaru smut was appreciated too. ;)

    Most importantly, I love the characterizations of everyone, from the main chars to the OCs to (as little as she appeared) Tsunade. The emotions, their interpretations, their misunderstandings, the maturity of their actions, all of it. How these characters we knew as teenagers have grown up and changed and understand each other, you show that well in your writing. Yet, you also make sure that elements of their youth linger, as in Naruto's whining about Ichiraku and then the babbling when he's talking to Sai then later Sasuke, it's very adorable and almost nostalgic to see that in a fic where they're clearly adults. I liked it. :)

    Oh, and I for one absolutely ADORE Iwa. (Hell, the whole Uchiha family here.) The way you described him to come into talking with full capacity. Cute. A little unnerving, yes, but cute. I love imagining Sasuke's face as "dumbfounded" when Furiko was born. And when Sakura slapped Sasuke on the arm? ^__^b

    I like how you ended the story, that final confrontation and the friendship that Sasuke and Naruto came to, a very conclusive acceptance of where they stood and where they came from. Down with angsty endings! =D jk, but I do love a happy ending.

    Anyway, I love this story so far~! And news that you're going to be writing more about Iwa = yay! ^__^ Definitely looking forward to it.
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  • From Ihadadream on June 03, 2008
    I LOVE your story! Please continue! I always liked naruto/sai pairings! Apart from Naruto the character i liked best in your story is Iwa! He reacts so differently around naruto, I hope we will see more of the 2 of them, anyway naruto has to say goodbye to him before he leaves, maybe he will mend his friendship with Sasuke - teme at the same time, that teme really is socially retarded! He couldn't tell naruto that he really missed his friendship! I hope things will get better between them! Please continue this story, the universe you created is really GREAT!!!! Anyway 'Part I' means there is a part II, right?
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on June 02, 2008
    this is an awesome read. i eagerly look foward to the next update.
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  • From nawatia on June 01, 2008
    I LOVE THIS STORY! Great chapter! Sigh!
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  • From on June 01, 2008
    I really like this fic, beautiful work on the characterizations and the detail. I look forward to reading more and to see how everything plays out. I'm glad that Naruto has moved on and loves Sai. Don't get me wrong I like fics about Sasuke and Naruto but I adore Sai and feel that he doesn't get enough love.

    I'm pleased to see that this is going to stay an Naruto and Sai fic. Keep up the fabulous work.

    Cai
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  • From steisi on June 01, 2008
    Hi there, love. Just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on a wonderfully written story. I absolutely loved it. The plot, the characters' personalities, everything. I'm not usually into OCs, but I gotta say, Iwa really grew on me these short three chapters. A mini-Itachi with an apparent hero-worship for Naruto...Brilliant touch! I really loved the way they connected. And I've always thought that there weren't enough Sai/Naruto stories out there; yours more than makes up for it though. The interactioon between the two is a wonderful thing to observe and read about. These three chapters, in my opinion, were sort of a base for events to come. I'll be looking forward to seeing where you decide to take things next, sugar. Once again, congratulations on a story well done. I hope to get to read more soon! Kisses!
    P.S.
    I strongly recommend you listen to 'The World is Not Enough' by Garbage. It's an absolutely mind-blowing song, in my opinion, and I think the lyrics go beautifully with this story.
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  • From ItaNarulover on June 01, 2008
    This chapter was as amazing. I loved it. Your such a talented author, really, it's so nice to read the cahpters because the language and structure are so well written and placed that you really enjoy reading it. And the contents are, of course, incredible. I really love that you've made it so realistic and that's really rare here at AFF, not many people are able to do that actually, they try, but they never succeed in the way you have.
    And again, SaiNaru is a rare pairing. Usually it's just oneshots. So thanks again for writing one!
    Keep up with the good work, and I'll be there reading and reviewing it.
    Take care. Hugs

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  • From Sagenwarrior on June 01, 2008
    Wow i just love your fic. The interaction between Iwa and Naruto is so sweet. It's amazing when one person can change the life of someone for the better. Oh and sai and naruto loveness is super cute. Can't wait to see more~
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  • From ItaNarulover on May 31, 2008
    Love it! There are so few SaiNaru out there, so thanks for writing one! this fic is really good, i can't wait to read more. So please don't take to long at writing new chapters and updating them. Take care. Hugs
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