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Reviews for A Subtle Seducing

By : Lisea18
  • From ANON - Fayte on July 09, 2008
    Absolutley love this story!
    And the Plot thickens
    Omg your view of the characters personalities are amazing!!
    Cant wait for the next update!
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  • From Avonne on July 08, 2008
    This is really good so far, I love the Sasuke/Itachi dynamic in this and that Naruto is such a relentless little stalker for his Bastard, lmao.

    Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From charmpit on July 07, 2008
    Nice twist to the tale. I can't wait until their ultimate encounter. Go with the buildup, though, it's working well.
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  • From ladywolfTerri on July 07, 2008
    Great to see another chapter!! and I loved it! so smexy and hot.. and I love how sweet Itachi was, going to check Naruto's intentions and all... XD
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on July 07, 2008
    Excellent job. I love the twist of Sasuke being a teacher and not a student. Btw, could you list ages in the next chapter? Thanks. Please update when you feel inspired to.
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  • From Tensai on July 02, 2008
    OMFG, I laughed my ass off reading this story)))XD
    Can't wait for update))
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  • From ANON - cally on June 11, 2008
    i love this!!!! can sasuke please be uke?! there is not enough sasuke uke stories out there!!
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  • From Fayte on June 08, 2008
    *giggles* I really like this story alot and you write really well to,
    no over analysing or to much use of a name, it just flows!
    I cant wait till Sasuke figures out its naruto lol
    I can just imagine
    Thanks for the Update, Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - maki on June 08, 2008
    love it so far. you're French aren't you? ^_______^ it's 'flood' in English not 'inundation' btw. and it's spelled 'inondation' anyway. if your spell-check says otherwise its cause your dictionary is probably set to 'English' when it's a French word.^-^
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on June 06, 2008
    Yes! I knew Sasuke liked it. I'm very gald we got a little insight on to what Sasuke's thinking. And Naruto is just so relentless!

    I can't wait to see the second part of the plan. You english is written very nicely, a few mistakes here and there but who doesn't make mistakes? It's excellent.

    Please update soon! Do you know how many chapters this will be?
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  • From ANON - Gabby on June 05, 2008
    Goshhhhh, i love it!!! my man, u officially rock! i love this story, plz upgrade soon!!! ^________^ a bit disturbing with all that body parts abuse, pet-fishie-suigetsu. but damn, it was soo funny i almost fell from my chair laughing like an idiot. my roomie came in with frickin scared out of her mind face, which only hardened my laugher.... sorry i began babbling... yeah, u'r great and i love this story, waiting for new chapters - that what u need to know, ja ne.
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  • From ladywolfTerri on June 05, 2008
    What's the next step?!! I need to know.. I mean.. how do you go from being the pervert that molests someone on the metro to the boyfriend???.. lol..please update this soon
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  • From Management on June 05, 2008
    I'm glad that you're making it longer than two chapters. This is a really promissing good story.
    ANd I love the way you're making Suigetsu.
    And for the writting, don't worry. There are a few mistakes here and there, but nothing horrible, and you can't tell that you aren't english at all!
    I love the way you're doing it from both point of views as well.
    Update soon please!!!
    XD LANE
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  • From CianisDeRolionus on May 31, 2008
    Haha very cute so far!!! I like Naruto's eccentric-ness!!! It's very.... Naruto XD Great job so far!!! I cant wait to read the next chap!!!
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  • From ANON - ff on May 31, 2008
    Naruto's too funny.and I got to wonder how his hedgehog is going to react or how long will it take him to do so. Definately looking forward to seeing some more interaction between those two.
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