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Reviews for The Return Of Uzumaki Dandji

By : garsdal
  • From skeeve on December 14, 2008
    Great Story idea. I like the concept you are developing and cant wait to see where you take it! As far as you voting goes, I would vote for Naruto to have both of his bloodlines powers. As for the second question I would go for a Harem. It seems to me that your version of Naruto has to big of a heart to say no to any girl. And he seems to be good at endearing himself to the girls. Good luck with the story and if you need someone to proof read your stories, let me know and I'll do what I can.
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  • From writer33 on December 14, 2008
    i like to vote for .... danm fro got how to spell heram (i am saying multiple women. my head hurts).
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  • From DragonMan220 on December 14, 2008
    I vote for Harem, I think as long as she's with Naruto Hinata will be happy. And Haku deserves some happiness to!
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  • From spooksies on December 13, 2008
    i vote harem and to have BOTH of his parents bloodlines!

    anyways.....happy holidays!!

    miko ~_^
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  • From Cyraxr on December 13, 2008
    Yes you have given Tayuya a reason to be in the harem (holds up "V" for victory). Before you ask I have a thing for Tayuya. As long as they don't conflict with each other I vote for both bloodlines. I am glad to hear my continued reading is appreciated and unless I hit a good zone you are updating faster then I would be. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari.
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  • From serenagold on December 12, 2008
    Kushina never gets any play when it comes to these stories. Not that the whole bloodline limit thing isn't overdone to death in fanfics anyway, but in every story its always something he inherits from his father. Give him a bloodline limit from Whirlpool country. That would surprise everyone - including Dandjii!


    Keep up the good work!
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  • From Cyraxr on November 20, 2008
    Yes I knew it was Haku. I say go for the harem. Frankly I am surprised nothing attack her in the week she was chained up. Oh she had to of managed to get some water while she was chained up because seven days without water is out side almost everybody's limit of three days that the human body can go with out water, and before you ask that is a hard line that can only extend a day or two at the most. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari.
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  • From serenagold on November 17, 2008
    Hmm.. I don't wanna vote. Forcing Hinata to step up now that she has competition is great, but I somehow can never picture a believable Hinata participating in a Harem. Unless... maybe... ohh what if Haku initiates it? That would be interesting. Meh. I'm withholding any voting at this time and will just look forward to the surprise at whatever you come up with.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From blackninjaphoenix on September 27, 2008
    good so far
    i think you should stick with a three genin one jonin squad
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  • From Cyraxr on August 11, 2008
    Writing the dialogue that way make things look bunched up but if that is the way you like to write so be it. I know Hinata's dad was a cold bastard but to put that seal on her is low. I say the girl in the forest is Haku. On the number in a team it depends on who you want the characters to interact with a lot, I know it means more work for you but I say for this story go with the four plus Jounin it just feels right for this story I am not sure why but is just does. Signed a fan of Hinata, Tayuya, Anko, Kuerani, and Temari.
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  • From serenagold on August 08, 2008
    Dandji finally comes out of the closet regarding his identity! I look forward to the next chapter when he has to explain to Naruto why. ^^

    As for voting... um, I personally really don't care as to how many people there are per team so I guess why mess with a well worked out formula and just stick with three genin per team. :P
    Keep up the good work.
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  • From on August 02, 2008
    just finished reading1-3 chaps, this is really good. yay he's gonna use kyu chakra, wonder who what will happen with kid at the end of chap. 3.
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  • From Cyraxr on July 11, 2008
    On the sexy jutsu your logic works for me. So the tailed beast have two cats in their ranks in your world the other being the two tailed cat who is in a female ninja from the village hidden in the clouds, her name is Yugito Nii not sure which is her last name. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Naruto this is the wikipedia page it might be of some help for some of the jutsu and other things. On the writing when you change who is speaking or thinking you start a new line it makes it easier tell you is talking and is easier to read. About the end of the third chapter it is odd that the Anbu would jump to that conclusion and even if they had they would of either taken her with them or would have left her guarded while the others went to get backup to help escort her back to the village. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, Temari, and fem Kyuubi. P.S. I did like the chapter.
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  • From Cyraxr on May 24, 2008
    Another interesting chapter and I say go for Tayuya. If Dandji wants to help Hinata and Naruto get together he should have Hinata train with Naruto. And the fox should be trying to push Naruto towards Hinata like her demon is trying to push her to Naruto. On Naruto's jutsu what no sexy jutsu? Signed a fan of Hinata, Tayuya, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari.
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  • From serenagold on May 24, 2008
    hehe.. nice chapter!


    Also, I find it completely unacceptable that you can not buy ramen in Denmark. Feel free to send my your address via email (serenagold@gmail.com) and I'll send you ramen. My god. Ramenless... I did not think such a thing was possible.
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