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Reviews for Onesided Heartbreak Leads to Something Better

By : UndercoverRocker
  • From DevilnBlue on October 31, 2010
    Girl... guy... whatever >< You fricking sent me on a roller coaster of emotions. I was all thinking from the summary that Naruto couldn't accept the proposal because he wanted to be the one to propose becuase he was the domm or something naive but otherwise understandable like that. Not... that he was in love with Itachi's brother. I think I had a little minature stroke back there when I was like 'nuuuu I wanted naruita!'

    Don't get me wrong... I'm not opposed to SasuNaruSasu. But I tend to gravitate towards more odding pairings that could actually happen in the canon. So I was all hopped up and ready to get me some ItaNaruIta loving when bam you hit me with this. Completely did not see it coming. I was ready to strangle the other guy right with Itachi. I would have so been his get-a-way driver.

    I even held out a small hope that Itachi would spend the rest of the tail winning Naruto back and ultimately getting him once he really one him over. Especially when Itachi went out psycho and was like I'm not giving you up. I... by this point... didn't mind if he ruffed up our favorite blonde a bit >< Rough him out of love of course
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  • From ladywolfTerri on May 22, 2008
    Good fics so far, but have you considered getting a beta to help with your spelling and grammar?.. just a suggestion.. and if you ever need help or someone to bounce ideas off of you can contact me on msn or yahoo at ladywolf_5@yahoo.com
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  • From nm1716 on May 21, 2008
    I love it, I love it. I can't wait to see what happens next. The lemon was great. PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON.
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on May 21, 2008
    i really like this story i admit i like both yaoi pairings but sasuke was meant to be gay and don't change that it scared me lol....
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  • From ANON - bowy on May 21, 2008
    That was good. I don't like Ita/naru either but even i felt a bit sorry for Itachi at the beginning. Nice ending
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  • From FairyNiamh on May 21, 2008
    This is fairly good, You need to work on your spacing and flow of your story. It started off slow and then shot off like a rocket...

    *shurgs*
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