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Reviews for Nine Tails, Two Hearts

By : rxtechgirl
  • From RichardH on October 20, 2008
    I think by now it would be pretty obvious as to why Kiba is like that.... HE'S A FUCKING ASSHOLE! all he ever does is treat Naruto like shit especially in front of her, and for what? right, to get into Hinata's pants, he doesn't care like Naruto would, he's just a perverted dumb mutt should should have been put down a long time ago.
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  • From ANON - Static Ninja on October 20, 2008
    Yo, I agree wit 'Mick' on two points
    1. ur story is the best of all naruhina 1's that i've read = congrats
    2. I also think that maybe u could give kiba a good part in ur story. i don't kno, he could do sumthing defensive for naruto and hinata, like help keep hiashi away or sumthin. atleast don't leave standin out as a prick.
    apart from that i hope u keep writin on it...
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  • From ANON - InuYoukai on October 20, 2008
    Great story so far. It is great.
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  • From ANON - Mick on October 20, 2008
    Hey,
    pretty awesome story u have going there, hope Ur gunna keep rollin it cos even tho it began as ur first fanfic, i think its ur best.
    ur character set ups are pretty guud i dont mind ino and sakura
    i wished u hadnt made kiba seem like such an arse
    also do have a pattern? like weekly? or do u just add chapters wenever?
    keep it up?
    l8r
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  • From gilbertmaxter on October 19, 2008
    sweet chapters :)

    keep up the excellent work i can't wait to read more.
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  • From serenagold on October 15, 2008
    Hahahahahahhaha... his desperation to find out who his parents were all comes down to a simple birth certificate. ^^ Hell, if Hidden Leaf keeps birth certificates like any other bureaucratic institution, Naruto probably could have filed for a copy of it on his own ages ago. =^^= hehehehe

    Great chapter! Hinata is finally free!
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From RichardH on October 15, 2008
    Dun Dun Duuunnnnnnnnn! man, I love some good epic level suspense!
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  • From ANON - Skeeve on October 12, 2008
    Excellent! Well worth waiting for. I await your next chapter with barley controlled enthusiasm. Will it be up SOON!
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  • From rxtechgirl on October 10, 2008
    No offense taken. I pulled the last two reviews because there is no need to argue. There are reasons my writing has slowed down. As I've stated before in previous author's notes; I do work a full-time job and have a family. I try to get chapters out in a timely manner, but sometimes it just doesn't happen. I rushed a chaper of another fic and it was really bad. In fact it was so bad I had to rewrite the entire chapter. I don't want to do that again. So please, I beg of you, have a little more patience, ne? I try to make it worth the wait. ^_^

    Smooches
    ~Ani
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  • From serenagold on October 05, 2008
    Hiashi is causing trouble! Naruto needs to calm down before the threats he makes in relation to protecting Hinata from her clan spoil the delicate balance of trust he has with the village! O_O

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From RichardH on October 05, 2008
    Man, always feels better to read good literature twice. keep writing my dear, or I'm afraid I will have to blast you with a lot of fire Jutsu. ^_^
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  • From ANON - King Of Idiots on September 16, 2008
    oh god please tell me there is going to me more...
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  • From Archfiend on August 30, 2008
    Yatta, a new chapter! oh I am so glad you decided to update. I wonder what Hiashi (spelling!!) wants, I mean he cannot be dumb enough to try and attack either naruto or Hinata, he`d be ripped apart. And we still have not heard Hinat`s answer to the marriage proposal (even though everybody knows it will be a "yes") Wonderful chapter, though Naruto should really know who his farther is. Update soon.
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  • From serenagold on August 24, 2008
    Awww... this chapter made me gush with girly thoughts. Yay for love. Yay for Hinata. Yay for insecure Narutos (well, maybe not 'yay' persay, but I always enjoy reading about internal insecurities.) hehe

    Keep up the great work. ^^
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  • From Archfiend on July 30, 2008
    I am so sorry for not reviewing the previous chapters, but i somehow forgot ot check up on your story, can you belive that`? I am really sorry. The past two chapters were extremely interesting, seeing as we learnt more about the past of both Hinata and Naruto. Wirh all these hints dropped now by Naruto`s surrounding, he should slowly start realizing who his father was, though I suppose that is how Naruto is. Also quite contrary to tradition, Hinata more or less proposed to Naruto and I have a feeling that the reason why Hinata was pulled of the mission is because she is pregnant with Naruto`s child. what was in the letter? Oh yeah, nice move letting Sakura and Ino have a lesbian relationship, yumm. sizzling hot images flash through my (admittedly perverted) brain. Please update soon, I am waiting for further excitiong chapters.
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