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Reviews for Hatsu

By : dragonslover1
  • From Chiyo_Sumizome on July 23, 2014
    I really liked your story! It's so heated and sexy! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Gemini on May 18, 2014
    I am LOVING this fic so far! Suzaki is awesome, totally believable. I can really relate to her, the way she thinks and feels and talks. I find myself rooting for her all the time, and it makes me smile. I can't wait to see more of this fic, and find out what happens. Thank you for writing it!
    ~Gemini
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  • From AnSiogOlc on June 01, 2011
    This story is truly amazing. It is so well written. Every sentence you read makes you want to read more. It'll be a long, long time before I read another fanfic that is close to being as great as this one. I really commend you on your skill. I love it!
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  • From ANON - lo on June 15, 2010
    Sock puppets for all!!!!
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  • From theklvkid2 on May 23, 2010
    This story is deliciously amazing. The buildup to their realizations and actions, and the still-smooth momentum of the story is just breathtaking. I feel like I just read the whole thing just now, even though I only read this latest chapter. It all came rushing back, and there was just enough allusion to past events to integrate everything perfectly. It's like an amazing souffle that never collapses. That's how good this is. You've got to have some sort of otherworldly inspiration, or something. And I can't remember if I commented about this before, but YOUR OC IS EXCEPTIONAL.
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  • From theklvkid2 on April 27, 2010
    This is glorious. And likely. Awesome. And now I go to check out your other story.

    klv
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  • From starcrossed on April 05, 2010
    *tackles* Yea! I was waiting for this chapter...only to find, it was a cliffie...sort of...*goes off and cries*

    Btw, I really like your descriptive writing style. Keep up the good work!


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  • From Jelizaveta on April 05, 2010
    (The comment above as JELIZAVETA was me, forgetting I've got an account on this site (A) )

    WOW. What a chapter! You do not disappoint me at all with this story, it only gets more and more delicious with every chapter you write. ;)
    Keep up the gorgeous work, can't wait to see how the next chapter turns out!
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  • From ANON - Jelizaveta on April 02, 2010
    You have got to carry on writing this! You can't leave it to this point and not continue, it's torture! :D
    Gaara. Ahh. What can I say? I always knew I had a thing for him but this fanfic only feeds the flame!
    Please, for the sake of my sanity, carry on!
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  • From ANON - savvy on November 18, 2009
    O_O
    awesome.....please keep writing!!!! i can't wait for the finish!!!
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  • From hup on November 14, 2008
    aww. Gaara-kun has a crush. i love stories where people pair Gaara up with someone worthy of him. i love Suzaki by the way. she has an interesting two dimmensional personality. i'm glad you didn't make her fake or too simple. anyone capable of capturing Gaara's interest should have something that makes them outstanding and very special. you are a great writer. keep up the awesome stories.
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  • From Archfiend on July 14, 2008
    whoah!! now that was a twist in the story. I can hardly await the next chapter for this story captivates it´s reader leaving him breathless. I am also very interested in how you manage to get such a good insight into Gaara´s mind and character.Oh and what secret does Yone have? That little irl is certainly mysterious.
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  • From ANON - Gaaraluver887 on May 16, 2008
    Well hon,

    idk what to say...
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