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By : redhaze

From inumoon3 on September 13, 2012
Please update soon, I really want to finish this story!!! And I can't help but want him to choose Sasuke. But either way please update soon!
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From DepressedPoet on March 31, 2012
More Please!!XD
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From ANON - G on August 12, 2011
Cool story. I've never read a scenario where Naruto has three people who he could plausibly end up with.

I think of all three males, the one I'm most rooting for is Sasuke. As of this moment, he's the least stable candidate, but the reason why I like him best is actually because of that--because in order to prove his worth to Naruto, he's the one who has to do the most growing as a person. I feel like I want him to do well because of how far he has to come. It would be different if Sasuke weren't making progress (I wouldn't want Naruto with an entitled jerk), but he is. He's finally realized that he could lose Naruto, he's listening to Sakura, he's telling Naruto the things Naruto needs to hear (and not because he's being manipulative, but because he means them). Sasuke still has a ways to go, no way is he perfect, but I'd like to see him continue to grow, to become the person Naruto always wanted him to be--and for Naruto to be rewarded with that person.

Gaara is a nice guy, but between the three guys, his part has been the smallest. He hasn't had as much screen time as Sai and Sasuke, and he hasn't had to grow as a character in the same way Sasuke has. For that reason, I really feel like the battle in this story is mostly between Sai and Sasuke. For Sai...it's hard to explain because I think his kindness and gentleness are wonderful, as is the fact that he's proving himself to be a better boyfriend candidate than anyone might have given him credit for, but I don't know... I guess I feel like there's more deep friendship between Sai and Naruto than there is love and passion.

Can't wait to see who Naruto chooses in the end.
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From Ayana on March 21, 2011
Lovely, this story is really well written and so much drama. You made Mpreg valid and I love it. ^-^ keep going
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From inumoon3 on August 07, 2010
YAY!
An update!
Although I'm a year late, it was still good to read!
Can't wait for the next one!!!
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From wyntermist70 on March 02, 2010
Update sooon please I wouldn't know which one I would choose yeah I do lol all of them but call me greedy hehehe lol so heck let naruto have them all thats what I say. Just work it out you know you can lol.......
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From ANON - Athlum on December 08, 2009
This is great I'm loving it so much. I can't wait to see which one he'll pick. Right now I'm leaning towards Sai, he's just so cute. But either of them is fine I'm not picky or multiples works to. Also I hope the baby is a boy because all of the mpreg stories I've read have them having either twins boy/girl or just a girl. Plus I think a boy is cuter in my opinion anyway. Okay I'll stop now hope you update soon.
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From inumoon3 on September 25, 2009
Please update!
I want to know what happens next!
Or even who he chooses!
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From ANON - blasterblurby on August 11, 2009
I Need More More More More More More More More More More More! I'm a addicted! I need more posesive sasuke, more well-endowed Sai, more uber-awesome gaara, and more preggy Naruto!!! Pretty Plz?! ^.^
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From inumoon3 on August 05, 2009
WONDERFUL CHAPTER!!!!
I really want Sasuke to be the father and the one he chooses.
But I feel Gaara and Naruto should be close to getting together, until he realizes his burning love for Sasuke.
I think Naru and Sai are better off as friends, and I hope he gains another best friend out of this.
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From ANON - Ireyon on July 10, 2009
Great story, but I have the feeling that, no matter how thi story ends I'll feel sad. If Naruto chooses Sai the other two will end up alone, the same applying to Gaara and Sasuke. AND I LIKE ALL THREE OF THEM!!! Yeah, Sasuke is his usual bastard-y self, but really, he wouldn't be Sasuke if he acted any different, his bhaviour is one of the reasons why Naruto feels drawn to him in the first place, he always offers a challenge.

Although I admit that he's probably the dumbest genius, like, ever.

And pooor Naruto, I think he just invented speed-dating, having three suitors at the same time. ;)
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From ANON - kc on July 04, 2009
I just located your story and had a complete of thoughts to share.
1. I am enjoying the story so far.
2. I think that you are making Naurto a little too emotional for my tastes but your the author.
3. PLEASE, PLEASE do not allow Naruto to end up with Sasuke, you are writting sasuke as an arrogant ass and I don't like stories that have Naruto paired up with an arrogant ass like Sasuke.
4. I think that Gaara, Sai or even a darkhorse Neji or Shino would be a nice match for Naruto.

Looking forward to more chapters.
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From ANON - Becky on June 30, 2009
SO CUTE!!!!! Personally I want Gaara to be the father and not that jerk Sasuke. Don't get me wrong I love naruto/sasuke fanfics but in this one hes being a bastard with a stick the size of mt.fugi up his ass! Sai is ok but I can't see him as the father since Gaara was first. Can't wait for a new chapter!!!!
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From Bookworm51485 on June 30, 2009
Review ch. 10

Yeah, I think so far Gaara's proving himself to be a relatively happy medium between Sai and Sasuke. I'm still kind of rooting for Sai, but Gaara's coming up there for me. I'm still completely anti-Sasuke. Mainly because he's being an ass and a pig and just all kinds of bad things and because I really want to see a non-SasuNaru story in the sea of SasuNaru stories. I really do think it would be interesting to have Sasuke be the father but Naruto select one of the other two guys to be with. It would be complicated, though, in that case if it was Gaara Naruto selected. Because Gaara has to be kazekage, unless he decides to move to Konoha to be with Naruto and give up his position. But otherwise, Naruto would have to move to Suna, giving up his dream of being Hokage (unless there's compromise where Naruto lives with Gaara while he's Kazekage and when Tsunade's ready to retire and pass the seat on, he gives up his position and lets Naruto go and become Hokage), and then it would be complicated with a child involved. I doubt Sasuke would want his child living in a separate location but then neither would Naruto. And the baby can't go back and forth... That would be quite complicated, which would make Sai a better choice.

And if I can put in a request about the baby, could that baby maybe be a boy. And just 1 boy (I'm getting a little tired of boy/girl twins, those just feel like copouts where the author didn't want to make a choice and so just decided on one of each. And I'm getting a bit tired of extreme multiples. Because in the other set of stories, authors seem to be aiming for as many kids as they can humanly stuff into their 'mother'). I'm finding that I'm not often finding stories with boys being born. Fanfic authors seem to be on a little girl kick and for someone who doesn't especially like little girls and how stories change when girls are born (and who finds little boys to be utterly adorable in a way that girls just aren't), this isn't a very happy trend. So I'm putting out requests when I can for little boys. I might be jinxing myself because it seems that most of the time when I put this request in, the story's seem to be abandoned, but I'm hoping that won't happen in this case.

Anyways, that was a long review so I'm just going to end it now. Can't wait for your next update and here's hoping for a boy (and only 1 baby) *crosses fingers*
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From Bookworm51485 on June 30, 2009
Review Ch.9

Sexual connection is a good thing to have but that can't be the only thing. If someone only cares about what they want and cares so little about the others wants and needs, then that's a problem. Sai has shown he cares more about Naruto than he does about himself, Sasuke has shown that he feels the opposite. Being Dominated isn't able someone controlling you so they can get what they want, it's about someone showing that they care. I don't think Sasuke gets that. Gaara seems like the dominant, but caring sort. Maybe he can express that alternate view. Though I must admit I'm leaning towards Sai in this.

One interesting conclusion would be if Sasuke were the father of the baby, but Naruto chooses someone else. Sasuke and others keep going on about how they're connected and how they're destined to remain connected and it would interesting if that connection would be through a shared child and nothing more. No romantic connection like so many assume. And I would just love to see a non-SasuNaru story. We'd started to move away from them slightly, started to see a few more of the non variety but from what I've seen SasuNaru has started to come on stronger to be almost the entirety of the stories written.

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