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Reviews for Bitch Nights

By : Blackwidina
  • From kagehoshi on June 03, 2008
    Since Naruto got her pussy first and Sai got her mouth, Kakashi should get her ass first, it's only fair. Love the story please continue to write more soon!
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  • From LadyLark on June 03, 2008
    I am enjoying this story. It is a lot of fun - I hope to see where you plan on taking it and what plots you end up running with. You do realize that there are other places you can post this story. Mediaminer.org for one. Yes I am biased, I am one of the mods there, but we do allow adult stories to be posted there so long as there are disclaimers and warnings. As for suggestions to improve, I think blocking out your sex scenes would be good as well as adding a bit more description. Sometimes you jump from one act to another without explaining how you got there. Sakura getting totally naked comes to mind. In all your grammar is good, there are a few instances where you mess up your speech tags a bit, but that is something that is hard to learn. I look forward to seeing more from you, and good luck with writing and being a single mom.
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  • From ANON - Guardiandevil34 on June 01, 2008
    My, GOD, I love this story!!!!!!! normally when I read any threesome it is revolved around Naruto, and he's normally the bitch. I like tha angle you took with this one. I nearly got a nose bleed at the mental imagery of the foursome.

    Keep it up,
    Love ,
    Teh Guardiandevil
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  • From ANON - lilly bet on June 01, 2008
    I love your story. there are so few stories that have the right amount of love and lust. I love it. I laughed and i laughed. I hope to read more soon and I hope for a sequel in the future or other short stories. keep up the great work and update soon please.
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  • From MysticPanda on June 01, 2008
    haha, I love this story.
    is there going to be more?
    if so, UPDATE SOON PLEASE! ^.^
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  • From ANON - mmartini on May 31, 2008
    Wowww! It was really good again! I especially liked the bet part it was funny! In my oppinion bringing in Sasuke -agonizingly slowly - could be fun. So go ahead and follow Sakura lead!
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  • From chibizoe on May 31, 2008
    *laugh* I've really been enjoying this - keep up the good work :)
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  • From ANON - meep on May 31, 2008
    omg lol!!! the bet scene was hilarious! haha

    and the fact that sai said "it was fun" to be uke was even funnier. oh man haha

    lovely story :] this is definitely good since it actually has a plot haha
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  • From ANON - Lanier on May 31, 2008
    The part with Tsunade was so funny. I loved it. I am glad they are all working well together still and the end cracked me up. Cant wait for more.
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  • From SpawnofMorgoth on May 31, 2008
    Incredible. I loved it. Especially the lemon, for that being your first time writing one, it was better than most veterans I've seen. Also,"Just leaned like a drunken one-legged hermit on a windy hill." Best. description. ever. X3 I can't wait to see how this all ends up. I really wanna see what happens to Sauskay, and how the relationship devlopes.
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  • From ANON - Pickles on May 30, 2008
    Hiiilarious
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  • From roxnroll on May 30, 2008
    I really enjoyed this. I'm also looking forward to what's going to happen to Sasuke. I'm hoping that it's nothing too bad.
    Rox
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  • From ANON - Pickles on May 30, 2008
    OMFG
    The ending was fucking awesome!

    Sasuke's back?

    LMAO
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  • From ANON - Liz on May 29, 2008
    Update, pls! i luv this story. it's so damn funny!! great story...
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  • From ANON - - on May 29, 2008
    Oh, this was great! Very funny and sweet and sexy, and the team dynamics were perfect. Have you posted this on chuunin or any of the other big LJ communities? Just that I haven't seen it anywhere else, and it deserves more promotion, since it's one of the best Tean 7 OT4s I've read.
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