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By : Blackwidina
  • From ANON - InARealPickle on September 03, 2008
    You tell 'em Dina-chan!
    And besides, just because you didn't include it in the fic doesn't mean that the boys aren't getting any on the side. Like you said, most of it is from Sakura's pov and when she isn't with all three of her boys, there's no telling what they are up to.

    Loved it!
    Your updates always make my day. You're so funny!
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  • From randigirl on September 03, 2008
    wow, I don't think that I've ever reviewed on AFF. But I love this story. It keeps me warm at night :) I think the plot is well balanced and the characters are as well. I have to say, I Hate Sasuke in the manga but I appreciate his influence on this story. Especially the visuals that I get of him from the new Naruto Shippuden movie trailers. giggles. My only question is, how good of an idea is it to play their "game" on his psyche? It already proved a point in showing that Sai was not his replacement, so is gonna further into the thought that they never replaced Sasuke at all? That he had a place at the table all along, nut he kinda has to earn it back? Okay, so I don't actually expect you to answer that question but now that I thought this out, the game is a good idea and Sasuke should be knocked down a few pegs before any kind of reconcilliation takes place. I would normally erase all this and leave just a "You Rock!" review but maybe you can see my thought process and the perverbial light bulb over my head.
    On a side note, I just read this story before the last update, so how often do you update? I'm not on the site on a regualr basis but dont want to miss any of your updates! okay, I swear that is all from me, keep up the great work!
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  • From Verakum on September 03, 2008
    Fuck i wish i was part of that hot Foursome... i tell you i would love to feel kaka and Naru Hentainess... also make sakura and sai fall under my cock...

    i also would like to see sasuke being raped by akamaru for being selfish he doesnt deserver the foursome but he stop being an ass... he may get some hot naru's cock, and maybe is sakura isnt busy with kaka... she may give him pussy that is what i think hehehee
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  • From takahashi06 on September 02, 2008
    I spent Sasuke's whole part of the fic acting it out in my mind and laughing my ass off. Fantastic loved the public kaka/saku! More pls!!
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  • From ANON - Gaven on September 02, 2008
    Love the story line nd the way you you are writing... I hope you will update soon...
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  • From ANON - meep on September 01, 2008
    oh congrats on the 10,00 marks! haha

    im absolutely thrilled that this has a plot! What can I say...it gets boring if it's all just sex with no romance or plot.

    But I have say that I'm not fond of the word emo very much -_- so reading the part about sasuke and his..emoness was rather strange...

    But great chapter! Keeping messing with his head! It's so funny to see him suffer a bit haha

    I can't wait to see when he finds out about them.

    btw sai x sasuke sounds mighty hot. hahaha

    i hope there will be some possible saisakusasu action in here.
    it just sounds rather interesting and I don't think anyone wrote anything with those three together yet!


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  • From ANON - nat on August 31, 2008
    i love your fanfic! thanks for uptading so soon after i'd found it:P
    the plot is original and your writing style is great)))the unassuming characterization of everyone makes for smooth reading and the lemons are droolworthy!:)
    sorry for any bad english,'s not my first language))
    hoping for a further chapter soon,
    nat
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  • From ANON - nat on August 31, 2008
    i love your fanfic!
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  • From Shadowkiss on August 31, 2008
    I so hope that Sasuke find a dom that can
    teach him the correct way. I felt so sorry
    for sasuke this last chapter and thought
    sai was asking for it. Go Sasuke !! Although
    he still need to make up for leaving team
    7 and join them in their moresome.
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  • From ANON - -xyz- on August 30, 2008
    HI!!!!!!!!!!

    My comment to your rant (don't mind please):
    All I ever wanted was a little more peeks of the boys going at each other (behind our backs or whatever) so that it wouldn't seem so Sakura-centered. You did this in this chapter and very well too! You gave peeks before but in my opinion it could have been a peek or too more to show us that they are all a happy bundle :D I never thought you there was a big imbalance just a slight... BUT you balanced this nicely in this chapter. And you showed the differences in their relationships with Sakura. :)

    Your chapter:
    YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
    This is soo great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO happy you updated! SQUUUUUEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAALLLLLL
    It's a pity Sakura wasn't there to see this! grin
    And Sasuke is noticing Sai, ne!? lol
    It looks like he is going to be part of the bundle????? I am finally hoping you will put him in this relationship----eventually :D So what happened to him..... hm?


    AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Share more soon!! PLEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Racine on August 30, 2008
    bounces around and is a happy girl. Thank you so much for writting this ... I was totally squealing during the Kakashi/Sakura in the clothes shop.....ahhhhhh. OMG!!!!! Awesome. Keep up the good work!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ri on August 30, 2008
    love how Sasuke is more possessive of Naruto than Sakura, reiterating time and time again the phrase "My dobe".. good job!
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  • From chibizoe on August 30, 2008
    This just keeps getting better and better! I love Sasuke's reactions to EVERYTHING, the whole mine, mine, mine thing is fantastic, and Kakashi...(nosebleed)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 30, 2008
    I think Sai and Naruto have the best chemistry, based on your story, not on the anime. Sakura and Naruto would be sweet and passionate because it would be the culmination of long time feelings, kakashi and the younger ones like student and mentor in love techniques, sai and naruto would be like exploring love, life and sense of humor (in sai's case) together, you know always something new to learn and feel. I don't quite picture how Sasuke would fit though, the repentant lover perhaps?
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  • From LunayaWolf on August 30, 2008
    One of the things that I absolutely! love about your story is the personality you put into it and the natural humor, everything flows along perfectly.
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