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Reviews for Bitch Nights

By : Blackwidina
  • From ANON - nacht on October 18, 2008
    You are truly an inspiration. Every chapter has me giggling and I feel that you hit the emotional/relationship needs of each character (in the beginings of a relationship) dead on. Though Duck-butt's monolog seemed a bit forced. That's probably just me as I don't care for him. And yes, I read the whole thing through and waited to the latest chapter to say anything. The Kaka/Saku shop quickie was just priceless!! And just the thought (of the possiblity) of Sasuke's reaction to Naruto and Sai going at it (as in hearing and/ or walking in on them) has me at the end of my chair hoping you have something in mind.
    Thank you for sharing this story.
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  • From roxnroll on October 18, 2008
    That was really good. I think I felt a moment there between Sakura and Sasuke. I hope I'm right and Sakura gets action from all of her yummy boys.
    Rox
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  • From ANON - -xyz- on October 18, 2008
    Sorry about that.

    Oh girl you get some very strange reviews.

    I don't like Sasuke in many fics because he returns and everything is fine but you returned him WITH his problems and you will not ignore the break in relationship and that's great. No boring Sasuke comes back and everything is fine fic.

    Every fanfic changes the story and once you change the story the charas will change with it. But thinking about how would a chara react in the given situation and how would this situation CHANGE this chara is what keeps them "in character" even though they do not act like the 12 year old originals anymore (what a suprise).

    Please take some reviews just as a "I do not know what to write but this fic was soooooo great that I want to leave some show of my appreciation"

    (I feel mean but they deserve this)


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  • From ANON - -xyz- on October 18, 2008
    Thank you.

    And Thank you for the chapter: YAY that was great and made my day. And I felt the changes: mentioning of the others' pairings without Sakura (and how she and we want to watch them ;D ) the flirting of the guys. That keeps the feeling of "all of them with each other" and not only "with Sakura". Great Job.

    And a great job in keeping the distance between Sasuke and the others. no quick healing there, it has to be worked on and thats what you started. You did a great job with the slow teasing at the beginning and the question of why he puts up with it to the action part and the exchange of the MANY (lol Sasuke actually talks :D ) words

    Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Carna on October 18, 2008
    YAY updates YYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY keep up the good work and i hope to see more soon.
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  • From ANON - Belgarion363 on October 18, 2008
    nice that was great chapter i can hardly wait for more to come i especially like how you added to the fact that there was a final coment on how long it's been since sasuke actually spoke properly.
    also don't be afraid of the delay's that you may have for a graet story true fans will wait an eternity for the next installment. keep up the awsome work
    your fan Belgarion363
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  • From ANON - Dragonangelx003 on October 15, 2008
    I WANT MOREEEEEEE!
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  • From ANON - A nani mouse :) on October 12, 2008
    Eeeeek I love how far you've taken your story! I think the last time I read it you were on chapter four... O.o It's really good, I hope you update soon and I love how pissy you've made Sasuke. It fits him perfectly... Also one question, were you ever up on fanfiction.net. I don't remember if I first saw your story there or here.... -_-;;;;
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  • From ANON - TakaRaiIshikawa on October 05, 2008
    I LOVE THIS, LOVE THIS LOVE THIS. Who cares if they are a little out of character (not that i think that they are that off) what is the point of fanfic otherwise. This is HILARIOUS as well as fucking hot. love the sex scenes...want more...drool!
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  • From Leeana69 on September 24, 2008
    UPDATE!?!?!?!?!? UPDATE..UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE.

    Please. :D
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  • From Leeana69 on September 24, 2008
    HAHAHA I love the whole mood swing thing cause it's so true.

    BOO HOO HOOO....I'm sad.

    FUCK YOU, I HATE YOU SO MUCH.

    And now I'm sad again.

    XDDD
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  • From alleykitten on September 22, 2008
    *squees* just found this story (lol, haven't been keeping up to date with fics) and OMG! *huggles the author* it's the first time that i've seen a 3some/moresome fic with the "new" team kakashi, but... i love it! you've managed to keep everyone in character, and i especially like what you're doing to sasuke, lol, bastard deserves to be screwed with XD (i'm not a sasuke-basher, but sometimes he just annoys the crap out of me) i can't wait for the next chapter! *giggles* can't wait to see how much more sakura screws with sasuke!
    challenge
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  • From luvsimon on September 22, 2008
    LOVE IT ... omg you have got to keep writing XD i cant wait to see what happens next ... --x--
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  • From ANON - Robin on September 17, 2008
    Well, now that was a biiiiiig journey! Man, the sex overall was quite good. And Sakura sure is leaving many women's fantasies :P
    That said, this whole thing with Sasuke bothers me a lot. I would have loved the story more if he wasn't there at all, seeing him suffering is kinda making me cringe all the time. But then again, it it weren't for that, the story, sexy as hell as it is, would have no plot, so I'll just suck it up. I just like Sasuke too much to see him suffering I guess. Or maybe I am just as emo as he. Even if you know "having your whole clan slaughtered by your once beloved brother as said brother then mind rapes you" is not the same as "not finding the exact shade of black for my mascara"... I mean it is obvious that Sasuke came back for "them" ("them" being Team 7), but now they don't need him anymore and he hasn't any home anyway so... I guess he should just go away and get killed by Itachi off camera (or kill Itachi and fulfill his life mission, whatevs)... After all he is only a traitor because he left the village to train with Orochimaru, he didn't attack it or reveal "its" secrets to the enemy (and I doubt that he knows any secret jutsu of Konoha that Oro-chan didn't already know)... but meh, like I read somewhere in a fic "a hidden ninja village is like a jealous woman, you cheat on her and you pay for all your life more that its worth".
    OK, I am rambling. tl;dr version of it: looooove the sex and the way the foursome interacts, dislike the Sasuke bashing and would preffer that Sasuke never appeared at all.
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  • From ANON - dobeofthesand(too lazy to long in) on September 16, 2008
    PLEASE GIVE ME MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ME WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please, it's an awesome story, but there's just one thing missing... GAARA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's the only thing that could make this awesomely- super story into a divinely perfect story... so... anywho... it's your story so... PLEASE DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING!!!!!!!!!!

    BTW: For some reason, I can never keep up with a story I bookmark... if you would be the awesome story writing author person lady that you are... when/if/when you update... could you email me and let me know? my email is dobeofthesand@gmail.com. THANKY!
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