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Reviews for Unspeakable

By : sasquatchsnake
  • From ANON - Autore on May 08, 2008
    I vote continue! And it's nice not to have it precisely follow The Little Mermaid :P more interesting / novel that way. Why should the transformation be sexy? It's not supposed to happen! Also, I like that the merfolk are even fishy looking than in the Disney movie. More, por favor!
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  • From ANON - meshala101 on May 08, 2008
    seems interesting, have to see more to know whether it could be great, but its a good start in my opinion
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  • From ANON - leasan on May 08, 2008
    I love it!! It's great so far! And the transformation is very realistic and very well written, I really enjoyed reading the whole chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one!
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  • From Zrina on May 08, 2008
    I think the transformation was perfect. The whole gritty details of it plus the bird shit covered rock and everything. Would be interested in learning a bit more about the binding with the merfolk sex though... do they bind to each other or just the sumissive to the dominant? You would think that Orochimaru wouldn't take a chance if it was a mutual binding, obviously.

    Very interested in seeing this continue!! XD
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  • From Mikra on May 08, 2008
    I think you should definitely continue :)
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  • From CianisDeRolionus on May 07, 2008
    Wow!! What a unique concept! Sure there have been other "merpeople" fics, but this one sounds like it could be something great!! I liked the beginning so far! Your writing style is flawless and engaging! I thought the transformation was awesome! Prefectly detailed! I could practically see it happening in my head! Wonderful so far! I cant wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From Aikotina on May 07, 2008
    I like it. I'm not one for the merpeople scene, but this has started out good. I think you should continue! i would greatly like that! Sides, i'm always up for a good NaruSasu story! ^--^
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