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Reviews for Unspeakable

By : sasquatchsnake
  • From meowkuu2 on December 19, 2010
    wow, I only stumbled on this by chance... but .. I sooo want to read more! Will you be updating this anytime soon?..please?
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  • From Ihadadream on April 16, 2010
    hey! that's a great start!!
    is there a chapter 3?
    naruto isn't the prince then?
    i wonder what sasuke will think when he wakes up between 2 naked men!!!
    please continue
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  • From ANON - Fan on March 29, 2010
    You have an interesting take on that old story, it really caught my attention! Also, politics and history - yum!


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  • From daughterofvirgo on March 29, 2010
    I really like this story. At first I was hesitant about the whole merman thing but the story really drew me in so I couldn't stop until I got to the end. I would have figured Naruto was the Prince but seeing Kiba acting so ambitious makes it more interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next so update soon, please.
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  • From ANON - Hami on March 28, 2010
    Wuooo, this is wonderful idea, the merman and the other stuffs. And you did write it well, keep it up. And the transformation, albeit, gross, it felt mature not too cliché or worth of rolling my eyes.

    Chapter 2 is short ne?

    Anyhow, ganbatte ne!

    PS : When will you be updating this. It sucks when there is no email alert T~T
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  • From goodchaos on March 27, 2010
    I don't know what you're talking about! That transformation was Awesome!
    And I'm loving the story! Shocked me that Kiba's a prince O_O wow

    Can't wait to see wait happens!
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  • From arabuzumaki on March 27, 2010
    Prince Kiba O.O I look forward to more. I like the little mermaid feel of this ^_^
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  • From ANON - Drago on June 27, 2008
    Hn, I can't say much about it after reading one chapter but it has potential. So I want to read more, 'cause plot is nice.
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  • From ANON - Meep on May 16, 2008
    :3
    Wow
    this is one of the most original fanfictions Ive read! AND its nicely written too! I really dont see any flaws in it, other then the fact that its so horribly short!
    So keep up the writing :D
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  • From ANON - False-Image on May 12, 2008
    I think this is such an interesting idea! I hope you continue with the story. It makes me think of a more twisted version of little mermaid..hahaha
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  • From ANON - Ada on May 12, 2008
    This seems like a cool plot, and you really make it work! I could totally read it if you continued, I feel hooked already. ^^
    And your writeing is ace, very fluid. :D
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  • From ANON - Nami on May 09, 2008
    This looks awesome. And I love the way you write, furthermore I love your voice of everyone thus far. Sikamaru the lazy mermaid who somehow makes me think of a salty seadog and Sasuke the war minded little mermaid who has almost been sexed up.

    The transformation was most certainly unsexy, but I liked it that way. Somehow, Sasuke twirling like a ballerina as he effortlessly turns into a human just wouldn't fit. That and it wouldn't allow for him to confused and drowning, allowing him to be pulled to the surface by a (hopefully) sexy stranger (who is hopefully Naruto or closely related to him in a friendly manner? Maybe it's a pirate who would be sexy by virtue of being?). Anyway, anonymous sexy stranger pulling drowning after unsexy transformation Sasuke out of the water balances to a sexy encounter. Therefor, it and the transformation is sexy. Needless to say, I am hooked and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From crazychemgeek on May 09, 2008
    This is awesome. It's so novel and different version of the little mermaid & naruto. I can't wait to see how you develop it.
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  • From ladywolfTerri on May 08, 2008
    Great start! Now I can't wait to see where it goes! So please update soon because I'll be checking.
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  • From LindyStar on May 08, 2008
    Oh, this is lovely!!!! I only hope it doesn't end in tragedy like the original Hans Christian Anderson version of the story.... BTW, two things: 1st, have you by chance seen the MerSuke pictures over on DA? If not....
    http://felisdeityus.deviantart.com/art/Poor-unfortunate-sod-49738717
    http://felisdeityus.deviantart.com/art/Mersuke-and-Mertachi-72160546
    http://felisdeityus.deviantart.com/art/Siren-of-the-Sea-50094494
    http://felisdeityus.deviantart.com/art/The-trouble-with-combustion-50395608
    http://felisdeityus.deviantart.com/art/Sasuke-the-little-mermaid-49359734
    http://felisdeityus.deviantart.com/art/Put-it-away-mersuke-69707443
    http://felisdeityus.deviantart.com/art/She-s-my-merman-75165513


    and 2nd, in the Japanese movie of Kingdom Hearts, guess who plays the voice of Ursula....wait for it...wait for it....the VERY SAME voice actor who does *le gasp* OROCHIMARU!!!!
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