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By : Shiruy

From ANON - move_them_hands on August 20, 2008
*dies a happy person* This story is AMAZING!!!

You make it so believable and freaking sexy that one just can't look away! Damn, I love you so much right now random stranger. This fic is just perfect, fabulously well written to the point of sinful X3

I hope you can update soon! And when you do I hope you can email me to let me know? ^^; email: Invisible_Pink_unicorn@live.com

Thanks so much for the awesome story!
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From Felixia on August 13, 2008
do you know how much I freakin' LOVE you?! Huh!? DO YOU!?!? I love you! I love you! I loooove Yoooouuu!! *glomps*

*tears of happiness* oh God.. *wipes blood from her nostrils* I'm so happy...! you UPDATED! *weeps with joy* you're my hero - Such drool-worthy description of a pairing I'm recently obsessed with.. namikaze-slash-cest is soo RARE! And here I have this one, golden nugget that with each new chapter gains additional 3 feet in diameter of pure GOLD! I've saved Your fic onto my HD in case of travel and/or disconnection from the internet, just so that I always have it in the reach of my cursor. I've already read it .. *counts* first chapter 7 times, second 5 and third 2 (to catch anything I could have omitted in my first, frenzied, read). Most - about 99,7% - authors are awful in their leniency in updating, but you.. you don't leave your fans hanging out in the cold, moaning and begging for meager scraps. I admire you and send my deepest thanks. Thank you. Keep up the AMAZING work, as there is no visible drop in quality of the chapters and may health, fortune and Muses favour you.

p.s. I have nine 3 week old puppies from a pair of pure german shepards. I'm going to name one of them with your nick: Shiruy and lavish it with love and kisses :> just so you know how much I love you and your writing ;D
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From sweetciel on August 07, 2008
The most delicoius father/son story on the internet! The sexy and lengthy lemons are just amazing.. I love you
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From HikariAi on August 05, 2008
NICE, very nice.... Update soon, ne... ^_^
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From LunakaWren on August 05, 2008
Wow...I'm not usually into incest, but this fic is sweet.
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From ANON - H. on August 05, 2008
Good... Uchihacest just suck! Why pl dont write more MinaNaru!?! Why? They are so much better!
And I'll die if we get 3some with Itachi...I'll die and wouldnt that be a sweet great death from blood lose//nose bleeding?!
You are so evill! I so want Minato with Itachi right now (and of course our Naru-chan) right nowwwww *cry* Aw I beg you for more of Itachi ;3
Sorry for this creppy review but I cant write anything better cuz my brain is damaged XO
Thank you so much for writting this story ;*
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From deedeesan32 on August 05, 2008
>.< u hav no idea how long i hav waited for u to update and even though i had to wait i was not disappointed XD this pairing is the next best to naruneji or nejinaru i will die a horrible and gruesome death if u dont write another chapter(^^no pressure of course)u r doing and awesome job watevr ur doing dont stop newho
Ja, matta/later deedeesan
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From ANON - Eternal Cosmos on August 05, 2008
Wow! I was awaiting the third chapter with impatience and you didn't disappoint! Hm, is Itachi in love with our little Naru-chan? Ohhh, Minato will have to show a certain competitive streak once he gets wind of this. Naruto can be so clueless; Itachi wouldn't massage someone's hand like he did for no reason. Maybe it's just the pervert in me talking, but a threesome between Itachi, Naruto and Minato would be HOT as Hell, especially when we know of both the elders' possessiveness. (Gah, a Naruto-sandwich...) Though Minato and Naruto are already Hot on their own... *grins*

If you ever receive flames from readers who hate this wonderful incestuous pairing, ignore them and continue this story! It's their own fault for reading it even with the warnings.

Naruto/Minato is SEXY! (And possibly Itachi into the mix is good too!)

Take care and bravo again for the mouth-watering story!
Eternal Cosmos
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From calicalicali on August 05, 2008
OMFG...I can't even tell you how much I love you right now. Sasuke's personality is just how I can see him being with Itachi, and Itachi and naruto??? And KIba made me LOL and then there was TEH SEX. I'm babbling but it's late and I'm so happy I can't help it. I am eagerly, *eagerly* waiting to see where this goes!
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From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2008
Also, if you could, do you think you could email me so I know when you update again?

mizu-benten@hotmail.com
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From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2008
OMFG *sosososohappy* AHH! YOU CONTINUED! *drools all over the place* This story is ah-mazing! I cannot believe how much I love this pairing now (damn you for that! since it's almost impossible to find anything on it!). *sighs* I'm keeping my eyes on this one!

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From ANON - Anon on July 04, 2008
You have made me -so- happy. :3
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From deedeesan32 on June 25, 2008
that story must be the hottest i have ever read i have probably died about 25 times, 50 nosebleeds,fainting at least 30 times i dont know wat u did but that has never happened to me before if u do not finish this i think i will die a sudden and unfortunate death =^_^= kudasai please write another chapter this is why being a yaoi girl is so hard and this story i s very intriguing i hav seen a pairing with them before but not as father and son and u have gotten a real reaction out of me for each line i must have screamed myself hoarse i had people running over to me to see if i was alright ja ne lata ,deedeesan xDDDDDDDDDDDDD definiteley luv ur fic u will be on my fave authors list
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From ANON - Kate on June 06, 2008
I like this story.... Plz update soon.... :)
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From LadyVorlana on June 05, 2008
I must say this is the first time I have seen this pairing and OMFG!! *Drools* I love it. Wonderful job. Hard to believe this is your first lemon hun. Beautiful without being too fluffy. I LOVE YOU!
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