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Reviews for Moving Day

By : Aikotina
  • From Lucia on May 21, 2008
    So... Good... ^¬^

    I guess we can't really blame Sasori-chan for his "little" accident... considering what he saw ^_______^
    And Gods! I almost died of mushyness when Naruto, Shika and Gaara were sad about Sasuke ignoring them.... It was a TRUE *awwwwwwwwwwww* moment ^.^
    Just like Naruto and Gaara's jealousy time while hearing about Juugo-kun! xD I'm dying to see when he makes his appearence. The potencial drama it could bring... ^w^ I wonder if you'll bring Suigetsu as well.... he is very good Sasuke-molesting material..... xD

    So! The plot unfolds! *laughs maddly* What will poor Sasu-chan do now? O.O Maybe go live with.... Gaara? xD gods, I just want to hugh that red-head... and his furry little friend ^__________^ Such a funy pair... when they don't go psycho on you o.O I LOVE it whenever he says that being with the little raven calms him ^w^ So sweet *fangirlish squeal!!*

    And Kakashi..... ¬.¬ .... picture of Sasuke sleeping? He sure is going to get a scare if foxy boy (or racoon boy) ever find out about that..... I wonder if his "pervertdar" could have guided him to the ongoing action in the park? o.O I wouldn't be too surprised if it did ^_^'
    And speaking of parks.... smexy... very smexy.... *drools* >¬< *drools some more* I can't wait for it to be Sasuke's turn for "exploration" xD

    What's Neji's plan!!!! >________< I bet he's going to be a little dissapointed... or sore, depends on how 'naughty' his plan is.... and how close are Naruto and Gaara at that time xD (BTW, I can't wait for Sasuke to discover Kyuu-chan and Shuka-kun's presence ^___________________^)

    Hope see you soon! ^,^
    Ja nE!!!!
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  • From Management on May 21, 2008
    I'd give you a usefull review, but you write ten times better than I do, so it wouldn't be very usefull...
    I thought that Itachi's reaction was a bit unrealistic though. Then again, I guess he couldn't be himself...
    And I thought that the narusasu was pretty good. I mean, compared to what I've read, maybe not the best, but not bad. You seemed to be rather worried about that... XD
    And you know what? I think I prefer Sasori this way. Besides, the man's a pupet! You can do whatever the heck you want with him!
    Not to mention he's dead...
    Oh, that's giving me ideas...
    I was also surprised that Sasuke was so straightforward, and that he gace into the theory so quickly. I thought that that would take a few more chapters.
    Anyway, that's about all that I can say...
    Except that I want to know who in the world the two men at the end were, and I hope that you update soon...
    XD Lane
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  • From nm1716 on May 19, 2008
    I like the story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON.
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  • From serenagold on May 18, 2008
    haha.. IN YOUR FACE< ITACHI!!!

    Looks like all your attempts at murder only caused the two boys to grow closer. Ha!


    Although now Sasuke's got his his suspisions seeing as how he recognized the driver of the truck. Itachi better back off a bit and play his cards right if he wants to keep his part in the murder of his parents a secret. Hiring the same truck driver twice is just plain sloppy work. ^^ Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one!
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  • From LumiiSol on May 17, 2008
    Wow, Itachi is freaking scary in this chapter. It kind of makes me think of "What would you do for a Klondike Bar?"...Well if it was "What would you do for Sasuke's love?", Itachi's answer would be "Kill people", which scares me...Poor Naruto, he just isn't having any luck with the people he falls for. Can't wait for the next chapter; keep up the good work!
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  • From Lucia on May 17, 2008
    gods............. o¬o *whips out drool*

    This is, oficially, my FAVOURITE chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! [for now ;D]
    So smexy! oh gods, the semxyness was too good!!!!!!! [I can't even form coherent thoughts! or words! o.O

    *breath in...... breath out....*

    Ok, I'm good now... or, as good as I can be after reading this big bundle of amazingness!!!!!!!!!!!!! ....ok, so the breth in-out thing didn't work, sue me xP
    ^__________________________^

    I'm feeling very Gai-like, or even Lee-like *victory-pose* Such youthfullness! I'm squeaking my teeth clean to make the shine effect yeah!!!!! ^__^

    Too good, too good.... It's the first time I've rambled *this much* while writting a review.

    But well, I guess this shows, as good as anything else, how much I LOVED this chapter!
    And the previous, which I didn't have the chance to review, sorry T.T

    I particualrly like the importance Gaara's character is having in Sasuke's life (and Sukaku's imput never ceses to make me want to scream *DO IT DAMN IT!!!!* xD]
    Can't wait to see what Naruto (and Kyuu-chan) are going to do when they find out about the little racoon ^w^
    And of course, to see how said racoon will act on his "desires" (it's still not very clear in which way he wants the "boy" xD). I wonder if he feels at peace around Sasuke? you know, as he said two chapters ago that Sasuke *cares* about him, or as much as someone cares for a person they just met.... but now it's been a week, and going.... mmmhhh... the posibilities.... *drools* ^¬^

    Oh well, back to things important.... WHAT A NICE KISS, BELIVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^.^
    Hope to see more of those
    And of Itachi's jealousy.... though THAT one has been showing for a while =D

    Can't wait to see more of this GRAND master PIECE!!! [And of Kisame-san and Sasori-danna, I just love shark-man and puppet-boy ^_____________^]
    I'm goint to go and read the chapter again, THAT much it affected me xD
    Ja nE!!
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  • From Management on May 17, 2008
    Itachi sounds really angry. I wonder how sasuke would react if Itachi made a move on him...
    That would be very interesting to see...
    Update soon please!!!
    XD lane
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  • From Dragon7 on May 16, 2008
    I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.

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  • From Management on May 16, 2008
    Yay! New chapter!
    I wonder what Itachi has in mind... He wouldn't try to have Naruto killed would he? Then again, this is Itachi, whether or not it's an AU...
    XD Update soon!
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  • From goodchaos on May 16, 2008
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I hope Naruto can protect himself! ;_; sniff Plz be ok Naruto...
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  • From charmpit on May 16, 2008
    Diedara will need to call up more than a few favors if he thinks it will be simple to get rid of Naruto now that he's had a taste of Sasuke. I can't wait to read what happens next!


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  • From Management on May 15, 2008
    I like the story! Can't wait for the next chapter... I've actually never read a story where everyone is hitting on Sasuke. I've read a few with naruto, but this is better!
    Update soon!
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  • From charmpit on May 12, 2008
    Aw, hell! Gaara and Neji have got Naruto's nine tails twitching! Please God let this all lead to NaruSasuGaaNeji!
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  • From Lucia on May 12, 2008
    Ohhhhhhh....... WOW....... O.O

    I liked it... I liked it VERY DAMN MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xD

    Protective Shika is SO very much cute!!!!!!!! ^____^(almost as cute as Sasuke *.*) I can see some brotherly overprotectiveness between them in the near future =) And Gaara.... oh Gods Gaara...!!! *¬* I can see the attraction turning into a good friendship (maybe even Brother like [I have the theory Gaara always wanted a little bro, you know, him being the youngest and all ^.^]) And of course there is the added bonus of the nice reactions this relationship may hav with Naruto-kun... And Kyuu-chan... just like the one (hot 'n amazing one) we got to see in the end =D

    I'm jumping in glee here, I tell you! And squealing my own ears out.... which is all your fault! xP ....and the chocolate bar I ate while reading this fantastic chapter is also to blame .... o.O xD
    Chan! haha!
    I know I know, I'm rambling... I'll finish now, I swear! ^________________________^

    Can't wait to see next chapie!!!
    Hope see you soon
    Ja nE!!!!!!
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  • From serenagold on May 12, 2008
    Haha!! Naruto is so fucked right now. hehheheehee. =^^=


    (I'm with you totally... SasUKE all the way!! :D) Itachi is going to start planning another murder soon. I can't wait!
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