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Reviews for Revenge

By : Kurokit
  • From SasuNaruFangurl on March 14, 2011
    I know I am so late on this review since I read your story on ff.net but I love it. And I thought that it was cool using the idea of two twins with different fathers I've seen this happen in news articles, and even an episode of a series called 'One Born every minutes,a reality involving a hospital and the sector where women have their babies, a black woman had an insemination accidentally with two different donor and had a boy I believe that was black and a girl that was white. So no one can say that the idea is unbelievable to use.
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  • From DevilnBlue on April 24, 2010
    I must admit that this was a very interesting story with a decent enough plot. Just stumbled across this today and so ended up reading the whole thing. So yeah, this is really good and I'm glad that Naruto found someone to love who wouldn't betray him as well as I'm glad that Sakura, being the bitch that she was throughout the whole story, was barely able to redeem herself in the end. Amusing though that she hesitated and of course the dobe would rush in between the two. Favorite part I think was when Naruto announced to Sakura that she'd be guarding Gaara... I nearly choked on my drink,becuase it was that funny. Meh, good, hope to see more soon. Thanks for a nice read.
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  • From ANON - kitty on April 24, 2010
    u got me u meanie i was sooooo mad until i read this chap. i really liked it
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  • From spoon10488 on April 24, 2010
    Awesome story just as good as I remember it.
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  • From ANON - Mirae on March 05, 2010
    omg I was so happy that this updated. I couldn't remember all the details so I had to go back and reread it. still as good as I remembered and the new chapter was really good fit right in with the rest of it. I really hope that you decide to continue it. thank you for not forgetting about it and letting us know.
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  • From ZenithB on December 27, 2008
    cuteness. please continue. i really love the story
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  • From Drumanel on December 12, 2008
    Its a good chapter, but like you said it is short. You should make naruto give sasuke alot of D-ranked missions since his chakura is sealed. It's just funny thinking of a weakened Sasuke chaseing that cat. Or skip forward.
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  • From ItaNarulover on December 11, 2008
    Yay! You're back!! *does a happy dance*
    And NO, this chapter DID NOT suck!! I liked it even though it was short.
    I had been waiting for an update for a while now, I was a bit worried that you'd given up on it. So I'm so happy you haven't. Sure, your inspiration might be lacking, but hopefully you'll get it back.
    I'm so happy Naruto isn't dead, I got a bit worried there. And yes, I was too stupid to see through it. *grumbles*
    Please continue with this fic. I would like to see Itachi dealing with parenthood. Awww...imagine, him wearing hair-slides and pony tails that his daughter has put up while playing with him, or him playing with dolls. *laughs and cooes* Please give him a daughter. That would be so cute.
    Anyway...sorry about my ranting..but when it comes to ItaNaru and Itachi, I tend to get like that.
    If you need any help with the naming, I believe that the best names for the kids would be those of their parents parents. That is, like Mikoto, Kushina and Minato. Not Fugaku though, because he's an ass. Ahem...again..sorry.. Or names of those close to the parents (Itachi, Naruto and Sasuke) that have passed away, like Jiraiya for example.

    These (regular) names are also pretty:

    * Amaya - means "night rain" (girl)
    * Hiroyuki - means "widespread happiness" (boy)
    * Emi - means "smile" (girl)
    * Ichiro - means "first son" (boy)
    * Emiko - means "smiling child". (girl)
    * Kioshi - means "quiet" (boy)
    * Megumi - means "blessing" (girl)
    * Mamoru - means "protect" (boy)
    * Miyuki - means "beautiful happiness" (girl)
    * Takeo/Takeshi - means "warrior" (boy)
    * Tsukiko - means "moon child" (girl)
    * Yuudai - means "great hero" (boy)

    I'll be satisfied with whatever you chose, I'm not that pickish, just helpful ;P.

    And btw, thanks for making so many awesome ItaNaru fics. I love you. ^^
    Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs
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  • From MasterofPie on December 10, 2008
    yay the long awaited next chapter ^__^ In all truth I really don't remember when the last chapter was posted, so I really don't know how long it has been
    Anywho, not overly surprise that Sasuke is still alive, but can't wait until Itachi makes his life a living hell mwhahaha
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  • From MasterofPie on September 25, 2008
    YAY he lived ... i was wondering how that would work out ...
    can't wait to find out what happens next :D
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  • From MasterofPie on September 25, 2008
    holy crap you killed off Naruto ... unless it is Sakura ... but so far it does not seem like this ... great fic so far ^__^
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  • From ANON - JHN33 on September 17, 2008
    I love you for that. I really thought you killed him.
    I wouldn't be adverse to the idea of Ita/Naru/Sasu.
    Just no ItaSasu lemon please.
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  • From Kohakusan on September 12, 2008
    Wow, this story is amazing. This last chapter actually brought tears to my eyes, I might not like Sakura, but to kill her in such a way, I mean its poetic really, she deserved to die, and in her death brought her retribution for the wrongs she did to get to where she was. I hope to read more from this soon.
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  • From ANON - Nibiki on September 11, 2008
    Even though it was short, it was still a great chapter. Names, eh? Hmm.... How about Muyoku for Sasuke and Sakura's kid? It means selfless or unselfish as seeing how Sakura gave up her life or that of her child's to save Naruto. As for the twins... If Itachi's child was born first, how about Saisho, which means beginning/first. It's his, Naruto's and their child's new beginning in their life together. Last but not least, Sasuke and Naruto's kid. ... This was a bit hard. So, how about Kouyuu? It means frienship/schoolmate. Fits with Sasu and Naru, ne? As you can guess, I think they should all be boys. Ya know all that dominate "Uchiha"ness. ::snickers::

    Can't wait for the next chapter, so keep up the outstanding writing. Until the next update, Ja!
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  • From serenagold on September 11, 2008
    Ok, I just finished all of the chapters and I have to say I really enjoyed this story. (Apart from that one part, but whatever.) I couldn't believe it when you killed off Naruto, but I'm glad it was only Sakura instead. I'm happy to see she reformed her obsessive ways in the end and sought penance. I guess living with and getting to know the "real" Sasuke broke her illusion. Hopefully when Naruto pardons Sasuke, he'll seek redemption too.

    Keep up the good work. This is an enjoyable story. ^^
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